Tobias Doljan is only fifteen, but he's already lived multiple lives. Tobias is a 'Walker' - he can move backward or forward through time. The only catch is that his body ages with however much time he 'walks.' Recently (in the previous book), Mearlan IV, the ruler of a territory, hired Tobias and asked him to Walk fourteen years in the past to convince himself (Mearlan) to not start a war with a neighboring territory.

Now Tobias, only 15 but looking 30, finds himself the target of assassination attempts. Mearlan himself has been killed and his entire family has been wiped out, except for the infant daughter, Sofya. Tobias is now on the run with Sofya and another Walker (and Spanner [those who can move great distances in a single moment]), Mara, trying to find a way to right the future that he comes from.

Their current flight has them on an ocean journey where they hope to ultimately get to a land where it is rumored that a chronofor (the device a Walker needs to travel through time) might be purchased.

This journey will not only have the assassins after them, but a number of different demons as well ... including Droë, who is fascinated with humans in general and Tobias in particular. Will Tobias and Mara be able to call on Droë for help when they need it most, knowing that she sees Mara as competition for Tobias' affections?

I really enjoyed the first book in this series and I thought that this volume was actually tighter with the story. However, this book is also a classic 'middle' book. We've lost sight of the initial cause of Tobias' being stranded in time, and unless you've read the first book, you don't realize that the Tobias had a bit of a crush on Sofya, now the infant in tow.

Author D.B. Jackson does provide a "What Has Come Before: A Summary of TIME’S CHILDREN" prologue, which is great (more books that are part of a series should do this).

I definitely enjoyed this portion of the journey, but with all that happens to them, more than once I wondered if this was still part of the story that was begin in <em>Time's Children</em>, or where we now on some completely different journey? It is a bit of both, of course.

The additional characters, or growth of additional characters, was particularly enjoyable. Droë's role in the story provides the most interest (and it's quite clear that she'll play an additional role in the next book).

This was a lot of fun, even if I didn't feel it was the same journey I started back with the first book.

Looking for a good book? <em>Time's Demon</em> by D. B. Jackson is a strong fantasy with tremendous characters, which appears to be far from the story it started out to be.

I received a digital copy of this book from the publisher, through Netgalley, in exchange for an honest review.

2/5 stars. The story wasn't appealing to me. I really wanted to like this book, but I found it difficult to keep my attention on the story.

Time’s Demon is a riveting sequel to my favorite fantasy novel of 2018, Time’s Children. The new addition to the Islevale series goes beyond the initial excitement of time travel, magical abilities and the intrigue of war to dive deeper into the dark mysteries of this masterfully created world. Gone are the trappings of youth, the thrill of joining the big leagues to use magic in new and forbidden ways. The deeds have been done, our main characters have travelled back an unimaginable distance, and the ramifications of their actions are continuing to unfold.

FASCINATING DEMONS & BEINGS GALORE

I was elated to get an expansive background on the many beings roaming the shores and seas of Islevale. All were introduced briefly in the first book, but we get to know them deeply. Jackson gives us a chance to form relationships with these characters, to see them as more than demons who haunt humans and take what they want without regard for human life. In reality, they are bound to a strict code, living in respect of the other Ancients who roam the lands. In the Tirribin, we see beings who have never been allowed to mature, who are governed by their own childish notions about respect and the value of life. In the Arrokad, we see deep knowledge and power, mixed with a propensity to deceive at every turn. Some are kinder than others but, overall, it’s clear deception is their primary game. I find the Shonla particularly fascinating. These demons roam about the seas as clouds, descending on unsuspecting ships and stealing screams from sailors. While initially presented as terrifying beings, they have a soft side, occasionally preferring song to fear. The Belvora, or winged bird-like demons, remain as questionable as ever, living up to the short-sighted connotations of the word demon. Overall, the story is rich with backstory and insight into the inner-workings of this much deeper society.

HIGHER STAKES
The initial escape is long gone and Time’s Demon takes us into the long game. Tobias and Mara are on the run, constantly under attack from humans and demons alike. It’s a tricky game, as they quickly discover, and the ensuing suspense gives rise to any number of intense situations. Their part of the story keeps the overall narrative flowing, adding an underlying fear that the infant princess won’t make it to her eventual throne. Love is also thrown into the mix, pairing Tobias and Mara into a deeper connection than either may have expected. This increases the stakes and the suspense masterfully.

A LOOK INTO THE PAST
The addition of our villain’s backstory provided a surprising layer to the story. We see how he came to be the Spanner he is today. It’s hard not to sympathize with him after seeing his unguarded past. We see his early struggles, the slow building of his skills, and the eventual surprise that sends him along the path to the super assassin he becomes.

THE PERILS OF TIME TRAVEL
The most brilliant addition comes in the form of deep conversation about time travel and the implications on various timelines. Whereas the first book offered false hope about fixing a future, the second shows that, no matter how hard one works, that timeline is lost. It’s a common acceptance among many time travel narratives, but the first book left a sliver of hope that the picturesque future from whence our protagonist came could be restored to its former glory. We see the perils in the story of Lenna, the Spanner who set the altered future in motion. Her mistake of poorly timed travel creates a paradox that’s as confusing as it is fascinating. We see the two versions of herself battling for acceptance, one’s mind going quickly, the other trying to plan her escape back to her time. Overall, we see time travel as the danger that it is. To a new Walker, it may seem glamorous and exciting. To an artificially aged Walker, the dangers are all too real.

I’ve been fighting with myself over this review. I enjoyed the first book in this series. But this second installment has failed to capture me and I’m feeling disappointed. I don’t want to give it 3 stars but that’s where I am.

First I’d like to talk about what I liked. This book opens with a recap for the first book!! I LOVE this feature. I really wish that other series would adopt this method. I have a really bad memory, especially when there has been a gap between books, I frequently have to go back and re-read a first book in order to familiarize myself with the plot before I continue. Not so bad when it’s a small series, but imagine when Winds of Winter comes out and I have to re-read all of Game of Thrones to get caught up! Oh it’s happening. But not this time. I was so happy to feel caught up when I started Time’s Demon.

A lot of the interesting elements of the story are still here in this second novel. The time travel, the multiple interesting creatures that inhabit the world, the excellent world building, and the diversity of the main cast of characters. These were all things I loved about the first book.

However, I feel like the story itself has derailed. The focus in this book has switched from Tobias, the main character in the first book, to a couple of new characters in this book and with that change some of my interest has died. I feel that with this expansion of point of view, the story has started to become unfocused, and focus in a time travel book is crucial. I’m starting to lose the thread. I’m not sure where they are going. I realized 3/4 of the way through this book that I don’t know what the point is. Are they trying to get back to their time? Biding their time until they catch up with their original time stream? Just staying alive? What are we doing here?

The time-travel aspects of the story are also starting to unravel a little bit. We are starting to get into the scenario where if we go forward in time to stop something that happens in the past but we meet ourselves then what! Will we all stop existing and the time space continuum will dissolve … or was that Star Trek? I’m getting confused. I honestly don’t know how an author can possibly write a time travel book and not run into these dilemma. It’s a head-scratcher for sure.

As I said, I’m conflicted about this book. I really liked the first one. I like the author. I’m just feeling a little lost.

Time shenanigans is my favorite way to explain time travel in stories. It sounds so chill and cartoon-esque – like, this is what that direct-to-video Tom and Jerry movie is about, y’know, the one with the wrestler cameos? – but it hides just how devastating time travel can be.

Because it absolutely is devastating, especially when your real time is something you can never go back to.

We’re talking TIME’S DEMON by D.B. Jackson.


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Tobias, Orzili, and Droë are back and still on the movie: Tobias is still trying to protect Sofya, the sole heir to the throne, Orzili is still on the hunt for Tobias, and Droë is still curious about this suppposed connection between her and Tobias in another timeline.

There’s something to be said in her about time being of the essence, but I think we can all agree that I’m too good for the easy pickings of time puns.

But time really is of the essence here. Tobias’s goal is to go back and adjust time to make his particular future possible, but everyone around him – from other Tirribin and Ancient Ones to other Walkers to even your average ship crew -knows that time can’t be played with to that extent. Call it a river all you want, but think of time as wet concrete with too much calcium: it sets up pretty quick and the only way to change it is to rip it all out and just start over. And unfortunately, that’s an option that’s not really an option.

(And now you’ve also learned something today! My entire life is nothing but landscaping and concrete analogies, and I can’t even be sorry about it.)

The weaving of this narrative to a final focal point at the end of the book drives the tension to a fever pitch before giving you some slack with other points of view. By the time everyone is together and we get to witness the confrontation, we know exactly what everyone’s done to get their, what’s affecting their view, and what – if any – their weaknesses might be. An expert portrayal of a braided narrative, in my book.

In the podcast episode, I’ve discusses the rereadability and still getting that emotional impact. But what I want to talk about is the fact that days after finishing the book, I’m still thinking about it.

Like, I’ve already stated that I love the magic system in the Islevale novels – I love the jargon, I love the limits (and the fact that a lack of limits is what’s making several people in this book very dangerous), and I love that Jackson decided, “You know what? Time travel.” It’s an ambitious undertaking, and whenever it’s done well it just like, hits me right in the brain and fills me with so much joy.

This is definitely a book you need on your shelf. And if you haven’t read the first book, TIME’S CHILDREN, you need to hop on that one too. I mean it – this book is far too excellent to sleep on.

Unless you’re actually like, sleeping on it. Like I did. In which case, be prepared for some weird dreams yo.

Check out the podcast episode TIME SHENANIGANS on iTunes, Spotify, and Awesound!

So, I’m not sure if my prayers for books actually funnel towards D.B. Jackson, but he has melded everything I love into one series and I absolutely cannot wait for the next one. Time travel + epic fantasy = perfection. And he has achieved it.

I’m mostly going to keep this review short and sweet. This book is a wonderful follow up from Time’s Children, and I think does a great job of setting up the next book. I love the world-building in this series so much—it’s comprehensive and clearly complicated, and the best thing is that it doesn’t overpower the narrative. This book definitely did a great job of adding more about the world, and rounding out some of the information about the demons. Additionally, and I’ll be brief on this so no spoilers, but I love the character arcs in this book, especially for Dröe.

Overall, this is great book for anyone who loves high or epic fantasy, and wants to read something with a new twist (seriously, I love the time travel aspect of this series).

Time's Demon is the second book in D.B. Jackson's "Ishevale Cycle," and the sequel to last year's "Time's Children" (which I reviewed here). While a fantasy series, it is centered in large part upon time travel based upon an interesting concept: that the magic that allows some people to time travel causes time travelers' bodies to age as much time as they travel back/forward in time. Throw in demons of multiple types, and you have a setting that is filled with potential and Time's Children definitely set-up a ton of potential....before ending prior to doing much with that potential. I was really interested to see if the follow-up would make good use of that legwork to build an interesting

Time's Demon thankfully does just that....mostly. Spending most of the book away from our main characters of the series, the book continues its interesting work with one set of antagonist characters, and does some really interesting things with the titular demon character, the Tirribin Droë. And the parts of the book that do feature the main characters does work, even if it's not as interesting as the stories of the rest of the cast. But like its predecessor, the book ends most of its storylines incredibly abruptly, which is far from satisfying. But it does so much before those endings that had me rapt in attention that I am definitely in for book 3, whenever that comes out.

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Walkers Tobias and Mara have escaped Oaqamar's assassins and are now on the run with the infant princess Sofya onboard a ship. 15 years old in mine, though 29 in body, the two are awkwardly pretending to be married as they try to figure out their next move....before their pursuers catch up to them.

Meanwhile, Oaqamar agents Lenna and Orzili are trying to deal with the fallout from Tobias' escape and to figure out where he's gone. But all is not well between them. Lenna in particular finds herself trapped in this timeline, with the younger version of the man she loves 14 years in the future who seems now to want her instead of her younger self, and she just wishes to go back....but she can't seem to justify it while the mission is undone. But her actions and use of her Walker powers to move through time may have implications she might never have expected.

And then there's Droë, the Tirribin (Time Demon) who in the future seemed to fall in love with Tobias and helped Mara know to go back in the past to find him and try to fix the misfuture. Desperate to discover what love is, and why Tobias is such that she could feel such a human and un-Tirribin emotion, she journeys across Ishevale, making contact with multiple other types of demons who don't understand her wish....to learn what love and desire truly are. But when she finds one who can help her change to understand these feelings, the result will change her completely and create something new...something that could alter the situation in Ishevale for good.....
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In Time's Children, our main character was quite clearly Tobias, though the book would alternate perspectives to show the points of view of Orzili, Lenna, Mara, and Droë (and possibly others I'm missing) from time to time. Tobias is clearly the series' main character, but in Time's Demon he probably gets the least amount of screen time of any of the characters, with Droë essentially having the main focus and the most complete story arc in this book. But we essentially have five major story arcs here, told a few chapters at a time before switching perspectives to another character's arc: the arc of Cresten in the past (a new character to this book), Droë's arc as she tries to change herself to understand love, Orzili's arc as he tries to find Tobias, Lenna's arc as she tries to both do her duty and not find herself trapped with this alternate version of the man she loves, and of course Tobias and Mara's arc as they try to protect the infant princess. (There's a sixth character who sort of has an arc that ties in with Orzili's but she's far more minor).

So many of these arcs are really interesting and make good use of the particulars of the setting - especially the way time travel works and what it costs and the way demons work and interact with one another. Lenna's story arc is perhaps the strongest and most interesting, for the second book in a row (despite her being ostensibly an antagonist!) as she finds herself trapped between her duty and the feelings that she has to help this 14 year younger version of her husband and bothered by the attraction and desire this younger version has. It's a fascinating way of being trapped by her emotions and another's desires - made even trickier by the fact that she's aware how much even the younger Orzili is trying to prevent her from losing more years to further time travel. And the book takes her in a fascinating direction, leading to pretty incredible but fascinating time travel shenanigans I'm not going to spoil here which work rather well.

Droë's storyline might seem the most cliche - demon tries to learn what love is! - but the book plays it straight and executes it so well that it's hard not to be fascinated by it and want to see how it plays out. Droë is both growing up in the process - almost in a human fashion, but most definitely not in other ways and the dichotomy makes her just hard to not want to see more of as she goes through the process up to its conclusion. Her arc is really the only one of the bunch - more on this later - that has a proper conclusion, and it's rather satisfying.

As for the other three arcs, they're not quite as strong but they all do work to some extent. Tobias and Mara's storyline is fine, with the two of them being easy to root for - the awkwardness of them pretending to be married and the awkwardness of the idea of consummation given their internal and external ages is definitely done well and makes a rather interesting read for example. Orzili's arc and the related character's arc are done well, if unspectacular. And Cresten's prequel arc is interesting in how it quite clearly is building up to something given the known characters who show up in it even early on, but doesn't quite get anywhere by the end of this book.

That's really the big issue with this book, which was also an issue with the first book to a larger extent, in that Cresten and Lenna's arcs, and the others to a lesser extent (except for Droë's arc) basically just.....end without an ending in this book, with the arcs just never revisited after their last part in this book. This is especially annoying for those two characters - for Cresten because you'll guess what his importance is rather quickly in his storyline and yet other than that reveal, it's not quite clearly why the past events matter to the present/future stories; and for Lenna because her storyline and time travel phenomena are so interesting that I'd rather have some sort of revelation or conclusion of what's going on there than move on to some of the other characters. It's just not satisfying.
Still, with so many interesting things and characters going on in Time's Demon, I'm glad I continued with this series (and grateful to the publisher for the advance copy) and will be eagerly awaiting the next installment, where I hope we have some more satisfying, if even temporary, conclusions to the arcs.

4 / 5 stars

Originally reviewed on: https://arefugefromlife.wordpress.com/

Time’s Demon is the second in the Islevale Cycle, proceeding the events of Time’s Children. It began with a very unexpected character, at a very unexpected time. It ended with an unexpected result, following a series of rather unexpected events. At first I thought it marked a departure from the initial book, as neither Tobias nor Mara appeared for the first third or so. But then they did, and the story proceeded. In an unexpected, if not… unpredictable manner. Let me say plainly: I couldn’t predict the turns this story took. If I had (which, I tried; I always do), they would’ve been wrong. All in all, Time’s Demon was quite an entertaining read, though if one started into it hoping to immediately continue the adventure that had just left off, they would be disappointed.

This marks the tenth book I’ve read by David B. Coe, including 6 under the pseudonym of D. B. Jackson. So, there’s that. Cool, huh? Instead setting the scene this time, here’s the official blurb.

Fifteen year-old Tobias Doljan Walked back in time to prevent a war, but instead found himself trapped in an adult body, his king murdered and with an infant princess, Sofya, to protect. Now he has been joined by fellow Walker and Spanner, Mara, and together they must find a way to undo the timeline which orphaned the princess and destroyed their future. Arrayed against them are assassins who share their time-traveling powers, but have dark ambitions of their own, and the Tirribin demon, Droë, whose desperate quest for human love and Tobias leads her into alliances which threaten all of Islevale.

Time’s Demon presents another slow build, in some ways even more than that seen in the first. The hook is set and baited early on, as it was in the prior tale, but this is populated with different characters than before. Characters with their own wants and needs (and backstories), that were under utilized in the previous book. Again, it’s important to note that Tobias, Sofya and Mara will return—and that the heart of the story still very much revolves around then.

And yet, their story, while entertaining, furthers the overarching storyline very little. And so we exit Time’s Demon little further than when Time’s Children left off. That’s not to say the book accomplishes nothing. Instead, the storylines are pushed off to other characters—in particular Droë, a Tirribin notable in the first entry. Actually, her story was good enough in this that it distracted me from the lack of progression in Tobias and Mara’s tale. Until writing this review, even.

In my opinion, it was the characters of Time’s Children that made it such an entertaining read. Not only does Demon continue this trend, but builds upon it. In addition to Mara and Tobias’s backstory—as well as a new character I won’t spoil—Droë adds an unexpected element to the story. Until this book, demons (Tirribin, Belvora, Shonla, Arrokad) are viewed mostly as savage and conniving beasts, excepting maybe the rogue elements like Droë or Teelo, who still fed on humans, but occasionally interacted with them as well. Droë’s adventure wrecks this all. I mean, yeah, half the demons still eat people, but it turns out they are much more complex than I’d thought before. Additionally, the dynamic between Sofya and Tobias (and Mara) has changed—as the princess is now an infant—but not so much. It were her interactions with Tobias that sold the first book for me. While in this one her role is reduced somewhat (due to the influx of other characters’ POVs), she still represents an important member of the cast.

Time’s Demon capitalizes on the successes of Time’s Children with strong characters, immersive world-building and superior dialogue. While the expanded cast of characters did push some of my favorites from Book #1 aside for a third of the text, their arcs were more than entertaining enough to keep me ingrained. The second Islevale book does little to further the plot from the first, however (with the murdered royal family, walking back in time and such). And yet Droë’s adventure stole the show, giving anyone more than enough reason to read Time’s Demon. If you liked the first one, you’ll enjoy the second.

Time's Demon comes out May 28, 2019

I really tried to get into this book but something about the writing style just wouldn’t let me! The storyline is good though!

Time's Demon by D.B. Jackson
My rating: 4 of 5 stars

Not only is this a solid continuation of the Islevale Cycle started with Time's Demon, but it progresses much further into the magical wildlife that inhabits this world.

Do you remember those awesomely wicked demon children who eat their victim's years from the previous book? The ones with a penchant for giving up their prey as long as they can chew on some good riddles?

Yeah, the type and the things they become are a BIG part of this book. :) I love it! Very odd vampires. Like SF but more like Fantasy as SF, and have a much wider cast of interesting characters introduced here.

This is kinda like a sequel but better. A lot more happens and it branches out in very cool directions. My sense of the world is so much broader even if my TIME sense is completely wonked out. :) I can't quite say if this is better or worse than the first one, but I have grown much more invested in finding out what will happen next.

What cool reveals!

No spoilers. Don't want to ruin it for anyone, but I think I like the character developments even more here than the first. :)