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After reading the synopsis for The Return I knew I NEEDED to read this book. What an interesting idea for a plot!

Sadly it didn’t live up to my expectations...

The characters all talk like teenagers, they’re all extremely boring. A lot of this book is just the characters talking back and forth. It doesn’t work well! The setting just didn’t work for me either, I want to be thrilled and chilled not bored half to death!

I put this down within an hour of starting and I can’t recommend it.

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I really tried with this book but didn’t like the characters at all. Which becomes a struggle to follow the story. Sorry

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sense of them especially Elise. Julie's return and the aftermath begins as a beautifully creepy, tense horror so much so that I didn't want to read it in the dark. The hotel they reunite in is dastardly and haunting- so far so good.

Then it descended into the kind of chaos that, as a reader, just irritates the life out of me. Long rambly conversations ensue between the friends who know everything is very wrong but just stagnate there full of narcissistic introspection. The setting, so promising at first, turns out to have nothing to do with anything really and the constant background noise (is there someone on the balcony, seriously WHO CARES, is Elise going to continue to be too stupid to live, and gosh that bread and butter pudding...) ended up just making me want to throw my kindle in the bin. 

Some of it is brilliantly scary oh if only the plotting had been coherent, if only so many strands hadn't gone nowhere, if only the ending satisfied, this could have been fantastic. In the end though I just couldn't be bothered, frankly I hoped the hotel would collapse and kill the lot of them they certainly deserved it for behaving so ridiculously. Spoiler- it didn't.

To end on a more positive note there is huge potential here with this author and I will read her again. Because the first quarter of this story was utterly riveting it's just a shame the execution in the end, for this reader, was far too messy and idiotic.

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