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I was very intrigued before I started reading this. I have never read anything liked it and that counts for a lot, writing style could have been better but overall I enjoyed it.

This book had more of a storyline than I was expecting. One of the main rules of being a Sugar Baby is do not fall in love. Jess is about to break that rule when she meets Sugar Daddy Jerod. This leads to a dangerous adventure that leaves her best friend Holly in danger. I found this book fun and easy to read.

This book could have been so much better had it not been for the author's lack of stringing together a cohesive, constructive and sensible story. The book started off reasonably well, but ended up being absolutely stupid and absurd. There were too many dialogues and not enough character development. Things were happening out of the blue and I wouldn't even bother categorising them as twists and turns. The amount of times the abbreviations SB and SD were used, not to mention the word, 'babe' was off-putting.
I was given an advance copy, but dear God, was the book not proof read at all? As someone who teaches primary school children, I honestly found the mistakes extremely frustrating to read especially when it came to the use of the apostrophe. I couldn't believe that I was reading sentences like, "your like Tom Cruise." (it's YOU'RE). Also, the plural of Dad is not Dad's and "too busy looking out of the dam window." was just ridiculous (damn). These weren't the only mistakes; there were plenty of others.

I liked this book. The story was different, and had me fully engaged from the first page.
The writing is something that could handle a bit of improvement in regards to characters, pace, and editing, but that didn’t bother me. A couple of spots in the book where a bit confusing and I had to go back a few pages to understand what was happening. That didn’t really bother me either, but I did drop a star for those reasons.
I still recommend the book. The cover is fantastic, the setting is unusual and intriguing, the plot is fun and fresh.
Many thanks to NetGalley and the publisher for a free ARC

Loved the cover and the name of the book but that is it. Maybe my hopes were too high but the actual writing was terrbile. The constant calling each other "babe" really grated and the dialogue between Jessica and Jerod was so boring I couldn't even understand how they found each other interesting.
I gave up reading about 20% into the book because it was so badly written. Whoever is editing the book did a terrible job

A peek into the world of sugar babies! This book was so well done and the story was amazing. I could not stop reading it! Definitely a different type of story.

This story started great. It was captivating to be thrown into Holly and Jessica's world of being sugar babies. It's a world not many women would dare venture into and yet fascinate by what this world might entail. Thrown caution to the wind is what Jessica did every day of her life. However, this fun roller coaster came to an end about 20% into the book. The story turned into a horribly told spy movie with bad dialogues. The story became unbelievable and it just doesn't make sense. If the "bad guy" has a way of leaving his dirty work untraceable, how is it that one of the girl can just disappears. She had no training of any type to go off grid. Yet the "bad guy" just let her go. If this story were to stick to following Holly and Jessica in their lifestyle, it would have made for a great read. However, it is quite disappointing.
Thank you to Cameron Publicity & Marketing Ltd and NetGalley for letting me read this ARC in exchange for an honest review.