The Offset by Calder Szewczak

Pros: intense worldbuilding, interesting characters

Cons: abrupt ending, several unanswered questions

Miri is angry at the selfishness of her parents who brought her into a dying world, especially Professor Jac Boltanski, “humanity’s last hope”. She always knew Jac would be her offset, the parent chosen to die for the sin of procreating when their child turns 18. And Miri’s 18th birthday is two days away. She’s home again after running away 2 years ago, and no longer sure she’s making the right choice.

Meanwhile Jac has discovered a problem with her project and travels to a lab far from home, knowing her time is short.

The book is short and to the point, focusing on the characters and the world they inhabit. It’s told from the points of view of Miri and her mothers, Jac and Alix. Miri is angry and lashes out, but has also been through a lot of challenges, so you understand at least part of where she’s coming from. Jac’s focus on work is admirable considering she’s trying to undo climate change, but it’s clear she missed out on a lot of family stuff because of it. I really liked Alix and felt she got a rough deal. I felt sorry for her not having her wife around for their last few days together.

The worldbuilding was excellent and intense, with so much of society broken down but the acknowledgement that the rich will still get the best food, care, and opportunities. I appreciated that the authors (writing duo Emma Szweczak and Natasha Calder) show us how the poor and the rich lived, and how easy it is to take certain things in life for granted when you’ve known nothing else.

The anti-natalists are terrifying, but also somewhat sympathetic. In a world where overpopulation has caused so many problems it’s easy to see how so many people would advocate against procreation and create the offset. This is brought to a head when the characters visit a ReproViolence clinic and it becomes clear that the offset isn’t the only violence surrounding procreation.

The story is compelling and I found it hard to put the book down. Chapters are short so it’s easy to squeeze a couple in.

I found the ending rather abrupt, expecting to see more of how things worked after Jac learned what was happening with her project. There were a number of questions I wanted to see resolved that were left hanging. The authors have expressed that this may be the first of a series, so here’s hoping there are more books.

The Offset was an interesting read. The premise reminded me of Unwind by Neal Shusterman, bleak but with a hint of hope.

Wow!! What a story this is and I think it should be required reading for anyone who doesn't think climate change is a big deal. This story presents a world in complete chaos from the rapid warming from climate change and the resulting societal collapse is frightening. The resulting food shortages, collapse of industry and mass deaths have led to a law that requires any new birth to be offset by a death. When the child reaches the age of 18, the child chooses which parent is to die, and this is the means to control world population and give the rest of humanity a chance to survive. The story follows Miri who is 2 days from her 18th birthday and choosing which of her mother's is to die. She has previously left home and thinks she knows exactly what she will do but events happen that may change everything. Her mom Jac is one of the most important scientists on the planet trying to reduce the amount of carbon in the atmosphere and reduce the potential heating of the earth. Her other mom Alix is a nurse. Just before the offset is to happen, Jac discovers there is something very odd going on with her forest experiment in Greenland and the consequences may doom humanity.
This novel really does do a phenomenal job of conveying what some potential consequences of climate change are and it is sobering. The reality that some of these changes are possibly not in the too distant future should be a wake up call to everyone that we need to make systemic changes now or it will be too late. Highly recommend this to any science fiction fans!!

I loved the premise but not the execution. But such feedback tells more about me than the book; I wasn't a fan of stilted phrasing and some flashbacks but I can't deny the characters are well-written and the stakes high.

An electrifying debut that tackles issues of parenthood set against a dystopian future where limited resources and a dying earth necessitate a population control. The solution is a public ceremony: when a child turns 18, they have to choose one parent to execute in exchange for their life. The Offset begins its story two days before Miri's 18th birthday where she has to choose which one of her moms is going to die - Alix the dedicated doctor who gave birth to her and to whom she is more attached or Jac the famous scientist whose work aspires to save the planet by planting trees in the radioactive wasteland of Greenland.

Miri is a rebellious and petulant teenager upset with both of her mothers. She has run away from home, but is found again just before the ceremony. While Alix and Miri reconnect. Jac stumbles upon some shocking finds while inspecting her life's work that suggest some foul play. There are psychological and social ramification to the project Jac is fronting, but further exploring this issue means missing out on a critical time for her wife and child. The focus of the story is on these characters, each to her own choices and dilemmas.

Thank you Angry Robot and Net Galley for the ARC in exchange for an honest review.

This is a really interesting and refreshing take on the post-apocalyptic, cli-fi genres.

Somewhere in the near to far future, humanity has reached a breaking point. Climate change has decimated the planet's resources and the planet is on the precipice of extinction due to overpopulation. To curb this decline, the Offset was created--a contractual agreement that when two individuals decide to bring a child into the world, on their 18th birthday, one of the parents must die as chosen by the child. A death for every new life. An offsetting, population control.

The Offset follows Miri within the last few days before her 18th birthday. She has to decide which of her mothers will be Offset: Jac (who has been absent but is working on a project that might quite literally save humanity) or Alix (who has been present, but not in all the ways that Miri has needed). Miri believes her decision was made years ago to kill Jac, but can anything change her mind?

This was a fabulous book. It really delved into what I felt was a new conversation on what it means to bring life into a dying world. Who feels that they have that right? What about the children who never asked to be born who are then faced with an unimaginable decision? How does this affect society as a whole? Is life truly worth living if your options for death are typical violence, the effects of climate change, or parricide?

I enjoyed reading this book and thinking about these larger questions, which seem too-close-to-home as climate change becomes an increasingly real threat. I look forward to what writing duo Calder Szewczak writes in the future.

**Big thanks to NetGalley and the publisher for providing an eARC copy in exchange for an honest review!

(Content warnings: death, public execution, animal cruelty/death, medical content/trauma)


Gah, what an intense book. It follows Jac, the leading scientist working on the one project that may bring the world back from the brink of certain death, her runaway daughter Miri, who despises her and holds Jac's life in her hands, and Jac's wife, Alix, desperate to save Jac (and, consequently, her work) - at the price of her own life. The writing is very vivid and visceral, the attention to small details in things like worldbuilding and descriptions makes it feel palpable, the way that the fate of the world and the strained family dynamic are intertwined is super fascinating. Miri's chapters gave me a little of that "10s dystopian YA starring rebel teen girl" vibe at first, but that's not the kind of book this is; it's not YA, first of all, and then there's the fact that both her mothers are main characters, as well.

There's something really neat about a dystopian sci-fi book where 2 of the main characters are a married lesbian couple and the third one is their child and the fact that they're lesbians isn't really brought up, there's no homophobia or anything. Like, yes, stories where non-straight characters' sexualities are significant and relevant to the story are also important, but it's nice to read a book every now and then where it's just not made into a Thing and they just get to exist the same way a straight couple would, you know? Anyway. All three of them are the kind of character I really like that's not *likeable*, necessarily, but GOD, are they compelling - I love a complex female character who you don't exactly like/relate to/agree with, but you do feel for them, get their thought process, find them captivating. Jac's like that, especially.


My main issue with the book is that I found the ending too abrupt; it ends on a strong note, but I think the story would've felt more complete if it went on for a couple chapters longer - it's not difficult to guess where it goes from there, but I would've liked to actually see it. I was certainly hoping for a reunion between Jac and Miri.

I do also have qualms with some aspects of the premise of the book, especially how it presents overpopulation and global warming (for instance, how it felt as if the blame was placed equally on all of humanity, without acknowledging the leading role of corporations and rich capitalists), but I'm not going to nitpick the worldbuilding that is more implied than stated, anyway. And while I wasn't convinced by the idea of the Offset as a tool for battling overpopulation, the Offset as a *cultural phenomenon* I found much more compelling, if incredibly grim. The idea of such vehement anti-natalism arising as the main philosophy in a world that has been completely used up and ruined by humanity is... painfully believable. It might be a weird comparison, but something about this book kind of reminded me of Fahrenheit-451 in that "bleak dystopian vision that feels extreme and all too real at the same time" way? This the kind of book that I'd absolutely LOVE to discuss in a book club or write a too-long essay about for English class or something.

(Thanks to Netgalley and the publisher for the ARC!)

4 dark dystopian stars (coming out Sept 14th!!!)

Pros
+ setting: post-apocalyptic environmental dystopian London (& a bit of Greenland)
+ premise: if people choose to have a child, the child must choose one of their parents to be "offset" (killed) when they turn 18yo
+ LGBT rep: f/f marriage (Miri's moms) & a nonbinary side character
+ Miri (17-18yo): a daughter who must choose which of her moms to offset
+ Jac: Miri's estranged mom, who is the leading global environmental scientist working to reverse climate damage
+ Alix: Miri's beloved mom, who is a retired doctor
+ this is a character study (daughter & 2 moms) with a fatal micro-countdown (Miri's offset) inside of a macro-countdown (global offset/mass-toxicity)
+ themes surrounding the right to procreate, overpopulation, environmental degradation, societal collapses, man vs. nature, and the good vs. bad in humanity
+ the authors weren't afraid to GO THERE and this has some pretty dark scenes (the pigsuits and London Eye jail are nightmare-fuel)
+ so much to think about... I think this will stick with me as a unique dark dystopian

Cons
- Some sections were a bit info-dumpy with the history of how the world came to be in that state
- I needed just a bit more from the ending.

TW: public executions (electric chair, firing squad), anorexia/bulimia (not explicitly stated which one), infant abandonment and death (off-page), death, global environmental/societal collapse, domestic abuse (off-page), attempted murder (off-page)

I hate breaking up with a book. And in this case, it's definitely a more "It's not you, it's me" situation. I tried so hard to get into this, but I'm finally going to give up at 42%. I am at the point where I'm dreading picking up my Kindle and looking for other things to do instead of read.... And I don't want that.

The thing is, I think this book will have a good fan base, it's just not for me.

This was a really good read!
I greatly enjoyed it and thought the plot was amazing!
I can't wait to see what the author writes next

What a debut, what a story subject. A brilliant twist on China's one-child law. It also reminded me of a movie in the sixties where they killed anyone o ce they turned thirty.

Great characters. Read this in a couple of days. Highly recommend.

Somewhere in future, to curb the population, Offset is established; it is when a child turns 18, they have to choose which of the two parents would die so that they can take the dead parent's place as an adult in the society. <i>The Offset</i> begins its story two days before Miri's 18th birthday where she has to choose which one of her moms is going to die - the one who she believes loves Miri unconditionally or the one whose work is changing the world.
We tag along Miri as she navigates the obligation she has to herself, and to the society while dealing with inadequacies in relationships with each of her mothers. With Jac, the one who is fast tracking the world to become greener again, her relationship is tumultuous at best. With Alix, its compatible and caring. There are layers of burdens that's laid on Miri - she isn't just losing a parent, her decision can break the world in itself.
The fatalistic state of this story is set from the very start yet when it happens, its really heartbreaking. A brilliant debut, indeed.

<i>Thank you Angry Robot and Net Galley for the ARC in exchange for an honest review.</i>

Well written but sadly this book did not engage me fully, I think the subject matter worthy and maybe I am not

This book. From the opening sequence I was hooked, The writing is wonderful and fast paced. There is natural worldbuilding to the eco-dystopian future that feels true to the story and not forced.
What I appreciated about the book was the humanity in its characters.
Dr. Jac Boltanski was my favorite character, she is utterly selfless in her work and professional life but selfish
in her personal life. There is a juxtaposition between doing good and being good that I really liked. At times I did not agree with her choices. This elevated the complexity of her character which was really well done and interesting to read.
Miri the main protagonist is hard and at times unlikable (in a good way) while navigating through the choice of having to choose a parent that dies, the one she loves or the one who is working to save the world. She is 18 and immature with the weight of the world on her shoulders. Her choices and feelings are natural to forcing a developing person to make an unimaginable decision.
The graphic aspects of the book were used in a way that solidified the world the characters live in and amplified the gravity of the situation. It was done with intent and did not overhaul the story and what the authors were trying to say.
Overall it is an impactful emotional rollercoaster of a story