Fancy Shop

[Blurb goes here]

After reading the book's description, I was excited to read Fancy Shop. My excitement was short lived.

Have you ever received an email that you don't fully understand? This happens when the sender doesn't explain himself, maybe because some of the details he want's to transmit are obvious to him, so he skips them, even when such details are not obvious to you, and you need them to fully understand what you're reading. This is a constant in Fancy Shop, the author skips over important information in every tale.

To make matters worst, the author looses track of who's telling the tale. For instance: a tale starts as a first person view and suddenly, and without warning, changes to third person view.

Now, if you're expecting short stories, you'll be disappointed, these are flash fiction stories, some no longer than four or five pages.

I wish I could find the book that the blurb promised, it didn't happened. Maybe it just lacks a lot of editing, I don't know. What I do know is that some of these stories could be seeds to great stories.

Thank you for the free copy!