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I wish I could’ve carried on with this book, however I DNF’d about 40% through. It’s not a bad read unfortunately I don’t think the writing style is for me personally.
Lots of world building and certainly will be a 5 star read for the right person.

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Thanks to Metro and NetGalley for this early e-arc.
I really enjoyed this book, particularly the world building. Metro created a very vibrant and exciting world for this story to take place. I also couldn't help but fall in love with Gargoyle - but who didn't?

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Thank you BooksGoSocial and NetGalley for providing me an e-arc in exchange for an honest review. My review is my own and not influenced by others.

The cover of this book drew my attention right away, the description sounded good so I decided to read this book right when I got the opportunity.

The writing style was something I had to get used to, but the characters and world building was something I liked a lot from the beginning. I found the world building especially unique and I liked it a lot! The story however, felt a bit flat and predictable. But because of the unique world building I decided to give it 3,5*

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Well I want to start off by saying a MASSIVE thanks to the author for letting me read this book early pre release date. I highly appreciate it, it is my first ever book to review and I am more then excited to get started. This book gripped me from the very first few pages and sucked me into this beautiful universe. I LOVED Harito. Such a funny and cute character that I am always thinking about even after reading and it has got me calling my cat a Gargoyle LOL. The writing was very easy to read, was not a slow burn at all and just this beautiful universe opened up right before my eyes!!! The story is very captivating, EXTREMELY enchanting and electrifying. The characters where amazing, some points quite sad but others just so beautifully done. I highly recommend to all readers. I am excited to see if there will be any other books by this author as I will read straight away.

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I, unfortunately, couldn't connect with the writing for the book or the main character. The cover is lovely and that is what drew me in.

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A very unique book that proves not everything to be written has been written already. The unreliable at first narrator is incredible in the story. The magic is lush and rich, leaving readers wanting more. I will keep my eyes out for more books from Metro.

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I was really excited for this book and it fell short.

Our main character Lilly is convinced there’s a parallel world that she was born in and her family resides in, but her whole life she’s been told she’s crazy (understandably). Eventually she finds her way to this ‘Parallel world’ and uncovers the truth about her family and so much more. There’s a whirlwind romance that feels like it was trying to be an enemies to lovers, and plenty of lovable side characters

The one character, however, that I really didn’t love was of course: Lilly. She is ‘too innocent’ for the world she enters and continues to remind the reader of it. There is a lot going on throughout this book, a lot of brave actions and decisions that are made but none by Lilly. Every hard decision seems to be made for her and she just spends a lot of time complaining about how hard everything is.

While the constant action kept me entertained throughout, there was almost too much going on in this book. There was a few times where it felt jumpy and choppy, with a lot of scenes that are ‘telling’ and not ‘showing. I think if the book had been slowed down a little with more detail in some aspects it really would have been great.

Three stars for the interesting world building and unique plot but the unlikable main character and poor writing are too overpowering.

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I hate leaving bad reviews but I feel leaving an unexplained 1 star review would be worse so I will give my reasoning.

Everything about this book felt juvenile and immature. Don’t get me wrong, I love YA and read a significant amount of it, but this felt incredibly underwhelming and underdeveloped. Every fantasy trope and cliche was in this and it became messy and confusing. I was never able to lose myself in this book because of the narration style and word choices.

There is a 2 month time jump at around the 1/3 mark that feels like a way to skip past character building, the forming of friendships and relationships etc, but instead we are reintroduced with a brief explanation of the main character Lilly’s training and how Thomas tried to kiss her. Lilly’s relationship with Will came from nowhere, he was an ass to her at the start but after the two month time jump Lilly was reading to climb him like a tree. The age gap made me uncomfortable too, constant reminders that she was 18 and he was 88, Lilly feeling childish and naïve around him.

It feels like the first and second half of the book are two different stories, and for a short book that makes everything feel rushed and lacking depth. We spent the first half exploring the name of a place I can’t remember where everyone’s name is either over complicated or Tom, Will and Christopher. The second half is a quest for something, I’m not entirely sure what but it was the title of the book so it was probably important. The writer used a first person perspective which is common in fantasies where the main character is being introduced to the world, but it meant everything was described from the perspective so it often felt confusing, or like a list of actions and descriptions.

I really want to give this book a chance which is why I didn’t DNF, but it was not worth my time even if I didn’t have to give that much to finish it.

I received this ARC through NetGalley.

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This was so good. And I really like lily's character. The story line is different so I really enjoyed that. I read this book pretty quickly everytime I sat it down I had to get back to it.
I just reviewed Luminiferos by Yana Metro. #Luminiferos #NetGalley
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The world building in this was beautiful. BEAUTIFUL. But the pacing/time jumps where hard to follow for a consistent story line.

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Thank you so much to the author and the publisher, BooksGoSocial, for sharing an ARC of this book with me on NetGalley.

"Maybe the library in London would hire me back and I could spend my life escaping into fictional worlds far more interesting than my own."

"Awaken the darkness within you. Become the omen of light.."

Intriguing and entertaining, this book fed my curiosity about a brand new fantasy world that was so good to explore.
With the found family trope and a love that at first seems to be impossible but soon enough impossible to avoid, Lilly stories goes from one parallel universe to the author, meeting amazing friends and magical people and creature who will each have an important part in shaping her future and her past.

Looking for her parents she will find also some magical truths about herself that she has never tried to deny but also been taught how to. I really enjoyed reading this book. Despite the intricate world building, I found the magical system easy to get into and the narrative quite fluid. I felt compelled , as from a spell, to get to the end of it. I felt somehow the need to know what was supposed to happen to these characters and the fact that the ending is quite opened ... it leaves me very curious for the future.

And the romance blossoming between the characters ... so cute and so sweet!! Again I fell in love with another book boy ... nothing strange about that!!

I'm very grateful I had the chance to read this book and I can't wait for the story to continue.

'You look breathtaking, my delicate white lily.'

'You look like a delicate lily on a thin fragile stem.

Too kind, probably, for this world.'

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This is a promising beginning for a fantasy series. The world-building is by far the best part of this book. There are some genuinely interesting aspects to the world that Lilly finds herself in. The issue that I have with this book is the pacing and some aspects of the dialogue. There are moments in the book where time seems to fly by and some of these moments happen at crucial points in the plot, which takes away from the seriousness of the situation, especially toward the end. Even in the beginning, the plot moves forward so fast that I had to reread some sections to understand what was happening. The dialogue falls flat for me in a few places because it feels very artificial. The cliffhanger ending was expected, as this is a set-up for a series. Overall, I enjoyed the plot, but the execution is where this book lost points for me.

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Thank you to NetGalley, the author, and the publisher for giving me an e-arc in return for an honest review!

Luminiferos had a very promising start with beautiful and complex world-building. The details put into what Lilly believes is the parallel world is amazing - how houses float in trees, magic is real, the trees can speak to those that can understand and people can speak back, and the magical creatures living within this world. The amount of creativity and thought that went into it was truly amazing.

I did however have a personal issue with the pacing, romance, and writing style of the author. This is a very fast-paced book at 272 pages and to me, it just felt a bit rushed. There was plenty of action and it felt as if we were going from one main plot point to the next throughout the book. There was a time skip that felt it skipped over important character and relationship building. It made it hard to connect with the characters and they felt a bit surface-level to me. The writing style felt blunt with conversations between characters being surface-level, redundant, and explaining things that could have been delivered in a better way. Lilly was an easy character to like until she started blaming herself for things in every conversation she had with people, which didn’t last too long but it made it hard to like her for me.

I loved the tropes of the book - chosen one, save the world, found family, the love interest with a past, and a touch of forbidden love but I feel like the romance moved a bit too quickly for me without much diving into the characters.

This book was not for me but if you love short, fast-paced fantasy romance books with magical worlds and an enemies-to-lovers romance then this may be for you! Lilly goes from one parallel world to another in an amazing adventure with her friends and creature who all assist her in finding out who she is and what she needs to do to save herself, her family, and the world.

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The gorgeous cover is what initially drew me to this book. This book has some very in-depth, elaborate world building aspects that really drive the plot. I think that some of the character development for the diverse cast of characters was sacrificed in favor of building the world that the Luminiferous series takes place in. This books leans heavily into some of my favorite tropes - found family, (semi) forbidden love, and strong female heroine to name a few. However, I had trouble with the main character Lilly and really feeling everything that she was feeling. Often, she falls into the anything and everything bad happening in the whole world is totally and completely my fault and uses that view to make several (mistaken) decisions. The other characters that round out Lilly's found family really needed more depth and information included in the world building for me to really be invested in them.
The pacing in the book was very slow to start. Many many pages were dedicated to a very short amount of time and then, wham, months had passed in the matter of just a couple pages.
There was a cliffhanger ending and I think it was enough of a pull for me to want to read the next book in the series. I have hope that the complex background that needed to be laid in this book will pay off in continuations of the story and allow for more character development and action.

I received an advance review copy for free, and I am leaving this review voluntarily.

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i can forgive a book for being bad if it then means ill be able to hate read but i can't forgive one for being boring.

i picked this one not just for the cover (which is absolutely stunning) but also because the premise promised a fantasy with philosophy and i got 25% into the book and am wondering where the philosophy is. we maybe got one mention of plato in passing but that was it which was very disappointing

in fantasy worlds, especially when the mc is also being introduced to the world i get wanting to have her and the readers understand what's going on but when you have 2 chapters full of info dumping about the world and exposition and a history lesson and have nothing happen it extremely difficult to keep going i could not do it i was gonna cry if i saw one more never ending paragraph explaining something. and the world was interesting don't get me wrong but it was too much tells and not enough show

the main character lilly feels like a passive character in her own story she does almost nothing. she gets invited to this world and has to go with this gargoyle who saves her and the journey to this world was so ?????? to put it eloquently (/s) she meets someone while going there they tell her she can't go in with the gargoyle she says please they let her in. now copy and paste that 3 times. she's always GETTING saved, BEING told stuff never does SHE do anything (maybe she does later on but im not reading any more to know)

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Came for the cover. stayed for gargoyle.

This was a very fun fantasy read and I can't remember the last time I had so much fun reading a book. I wasn't a fan of the remonce (but I never am I), but loved the world building and the plot.

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I’d like to start off by saying that this story has so much potential, the execution wasn’t amazing though. I found myself flip flopping between being invested and utterly confused with what was going on. The first half of the book was really heavy on the world building/info dumping but was very tell not show as others have mentioned. Certain characters lacked development (especially the love interests and main deceiver) and I felt like entire relationships between characters changed with little information/description as to why or what happened. I can tell that the author has envisioned a beautiful world and story, and the cover is lush! Thank you to NetGalley, the author, and the publisher for giving me an arc in return for an honest review!

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Thanks to NetGalley for an early copy of this book. Below is my honest review.

Lilly White is convinced that she is from a parallel world but no one believes her. She thinks, even after growing up unloved in an orphanage in England, that she has a living family in the other world. She sees them in visions and dreams. After a particularly frightening dream, Lilly fears the worst for her mother.

One day, after being kicked out of her apartment for paying her rent late one too many times, a benign gargoyle brings Lilly a note from the keeper of the portal keys. The parallel world is real and she has an invitation to travel there.

At the portal, she meets William C. J. Raven who takes her to the spirit world. Lilly has two options—stay in the human world or leave. Either way, her choice is permanent. She leaves with Will and Hairito, her benign gargoyle.

In this spirit world, Lilly is assigned a mentor named Aisha, who a witch. She studies and trains all while searching for her family.

Will she find her parents and brother? Will the looming danger pass? Will she figure out her gift? Will she quit and go back to the human world?

This book was … okay. The first chapter was captivating but I soon lost interest. The writing style felt a bit simplistic and there was much too much info dumping. Although I wasn’t a fan of her name, Hairito was by far my favorite character. The others were likable but no one really stood out. I saw several of the twists coming.

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Let's begin with the good things:
The author's descriptions of the setting made for vivid images in my mind and I enjoyed the stream of consciousness type narration. The background of the MC was presented clearly. The cover art is beautiful, and I love the title!

Now we will get into the other less pleasant stuff:
I found that while I often liked the language used by the author, the dialogue and interactions fell so flat. I could have liked this book much better had the interactions felt more realistic or if there was more of a focus on getting the reader to feel something rather than know something. It made for a strange experience while reading a fantasy novel, because there was next to no immersion for me. Readers do not want to be told everything so plainly. It is the difference between saying a character is feeling nervous directly and describing the feeling in their stomach or pounding heartbeat instead. The latter makes for a more enjoyable immersive experience.

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Thank you Yana Metro, Netgalley and Books Go Social, for this free ARC in exchange for a review.

Unfortunately, as others have mentioned, the book suffers from too much telling instead of showing. I also found that the characters lacked distinct personalities. So I was unable to finish the book.

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