Thank you to NetGalley and the publisher for the eARC!

I've attempted to read this one a few times but unfortunately haven't been able to get into it - I'm very fussy when it comes to Regency set or inspired fantasies, and sometimes find it hard to suspend my disbelief which is very much a me problem rather than a book problem. Sadly, this one is a DNF for me.

This book fell flat for me. A sapphic fantasy romance set in an intriguing period sounds right up my alley. However, I couldn't enjoy or comprehend any of the book as it was so disappointingly boring.

DNF at 20%.

I'm utterly baffled how Alexis Hall can write books I adore and willingly stay up all night reading (Boyfriend Material, A Lady for a Duke), and then books I bounce off SO hard (Something Fabulous, and unfortunately, this). I just couldn't gel with the arch narration and try-hard jokiness, even though comedy-fantasy-historical-romance is a genre I generally love (The Wisteria Society of Lady Scoundrels, Soulless, etc). Something about the way Hall uses humour specifically in historical settings just doesn't work for me, I think. I know he can write fantastic characters, so why do I find it so hard to connect with some of them, to the point where I don't even want to continue reading? I don't know, but I do know Mortal Follies isn't for me.

I found this one a little tricky to get into at first, but quickly began to LOVE it, thanks mainly to the lovely characters and the amusing shenanigans forced on them by the socially embarrassing curse.

The characters reminded me of favourites like Amelia Peabody or Alexia Tarabotti (and Lizzie definitely reflected shades of Ivy Hisselpenny!), with the combination of witty banter, social constraints and chaotic adventures, which while loosely Regency-inspired, gives the book the feel of a lighthearted parody rather than historical fiction. Add in a bit of magic, a curse to be broken and a little sapphic love and this should be a surefire recipe for success.

The one element that didn’t really work for me was the Puck-ish narrator, who made an interesting framing device and handy omniscient observer, but quickly became irritating as he constantly intruded unnecessarily on the plot, taking my attention from more engaging characters.

I would love to read more of this series, especially if it featured Maelys and her friends, Miss Bickley and John Caesar (Lizzie was my favourite!), but hopefully with less of the fae intrusion into their mortal follies.

To start with I was really enjoying this book, but unfortunately the pacing was just a bit too slow for me so I found myself really struggling to pick it back up.

It was a really clever plot and I enjoyed the premise, but I think the characters were just not exciting enough for me to truly get sucked into the storyline and properly enjoy the book.

I really enjoyed elements of this story, for example, I liked the concept of having a semi-involved party taking on the entire narration. The second-hand narration by the character of 'Puck' enhances the whimsical and humorous elements of the story. This style of storytelling, where a third-party character actively involved in the plot serves as the narrator, creates an almost theatrical experience while reading. However, when it comes to the overall plot and the romantic elements, they both fall slightly short of expectations. The narrative feels like two separate books in one, and I definitely preferred the "first" storyline over the second.

I kind of wish the whole book focused on the dynamic among Miss Mitchelmore, Miss Bickle, and Mr. Caesar, either with more intrigue or more capers. And did not include any romance plot at all.

sadly I DNF’d not much in! but that is most definitely my fault for not realising it’s adult, from what I read, this was an ok read (again, not much)!

Lushly romantic and deeply funny - exactly what I've come to expect from Alexis Hall. This sapphic regency romance weaves a tale of magical curses, lust and love following Maelys Mitchelmore, a young debutante saddled with an unfortunate curse and Lady Georgiana, who is outcast from society because people believe she is a) a witch and b) responsible for the deaths of her father and brothers. They make an excellent pair, with Georgiana's own scars making her a little standoffish.

I would have liked more of a subtle build up for the romance. It seemed to come together rather fast, but I very much enjoyed this one!

"Mortal Follies" by Alexis Hall delivers a quirky exploration. The stories dive into a mix of human follies and whimsy, yet the narrative style can be hit or miss. Hall's writing showcases moments of cleverness, although some tales may feel less engaging. The book offers a blend of humor and contemplation, inviting readers to reflect on human nature's eccentricities, but its unevenness might leave some seeking a more consistently impactful reading experience.

Alexis Hall's "Mortal Follies" combines the flavours of Shakespeare, Austen, and contemporary fantasy to craft an enchanting tale.

Narrated by the unreliable and mischievous fae, Robin (also known as Puck), the distinctive narrative style stands out as a highlight, drawing me in with its commentary. I found myself wanting to delve deeper into Robin's backstory and the reasons behind his exile.

The story starts off strongly with a mix of drama and mystery, but as it unfolds, it gradually shifts its focus toward the romantic aspect. I didn’t mind that the book shifted in this direction but the transition wasn't seamless, resulting in a somewhat disjointed feel.

However, the connection between the main character, Maelys, and her love interest, Georgianna, didn't resonate deeply with me. Although there was a spark between them, it never fully blossomed into a deeper bond. On the other hand, the relationship between Maelys and her best friend, Lysistrata, felt more substantial and engaging. Lysistrata was a stand out character and ended up stealing the spotlight in many scenes.

The standout element of the book was undoubtedly its Bath setting. The baths and the surrounding mythos played an integral role, creating a perfect backdrop for the story.

While not flawless, "Mortal Follies" provides an enjoyable reading experience, particularly recommended for those who appreciate regency and sapphic romances.

An intriguing story that was hampered by some difficult narration and dialogue. I wanted to love this but the writing style of the narrative overtook my ability to be immersed in the story. The characters were interesting and plot but it felt chaotic at times.

This book is such a neat concept! The narration style of this book was one of my favourite parts but the characters definitely took the cake. I loved getting to know the characters we met through out this book and I found myself laughing out loud at some of the things they said. Such a good read!

I really wanted to love this books, as I'd heard so much hype surrounding it, bur it just didn't hit the right spot for me. It was okay, but it just didn't grip me as I hoped that it would. Won't be recommending.

In 1814 Bath, Miss Maelys Mitchelmore finds herself cursed. When her dress magically falls apart, she avoids scandal by hiding. She is found and rescued by Lady Georgiana Landrake, a highly controversial figure rumoured to be a sorceress guilty of killing her father and her brothers for their money and title. When the curse takes a more dangerous form, Maelys starts her investigation...

Mortal Follies is a very light and quick read. Written in surprisingly modern language, it is a story full of spirits, magical creatures, curses, magic, interfering gods, and lots of absurd humour. I enjoyed the first few chapters of this book, as I wanted to find out what actually happened to Maelys and who stood behind the whole affair. Unfortunately, this theme is resolved early in the novel, and the plot turns into a pure romance. Nothing wrong with that, but I found the contrast between the modern language/morality and Victorian setting too jarring at times. When you add spirits and magic, you receive a highly original fantasy romance novel, but some readers will find the storyline too absurd.

Thank you to NetGalley and to Gollancz/Orion for the digital ARC, it has not affected my honest review.

“Mortal Follies” is my first book by Alexis Hall and I really enjoyed it; pitched as a sapphic version of Bridgerton with gods and fairies, it is narrated entirely by a fae going by Robin, who likes to remind the reader that he is responsible for telling stories. This time his focus is on Maelys Mitchelmore, who after making her entrance into society in 1814, finds herself entirely without a dress after it unmakes itself during a party. Soon enough it becomes obvious that Maelys is under some kind of a curse, one which drives her to seek the help of the Duke of Annadale- actually, Lady Georgianna Landrake, who is believed to be a witch. Georgianna is thought to have murdered her father and brothers in order to get her position, but as things get more complicated for Maelys, she decides to move past it and into a world of magic and gods. Keen to protect her society reputation for as long as possible, Maelys soon learns something else about herself: that her interest in the Duke is less professional and more a matter of the heart if only she can survive Georgianna’s secrets.

This book is so much fun, with a snarky narrator who can’t help but get caught up in the drama of society. I loved Maelys, who in the middle of a ball loses her dress but is more worried about protecting her reputation than asking for help. The side characters, particularly her cousin John Caesar and Miss Lizzie Bickle, are really enjoyable additions to every scene, whether it’s John trying to protect his cousin’s good name or Miss Bickle trying to start duels on the fields outside Bath with anyone who looks at Maelys the wrong way. Maelys’ relationship with Georgianna is the definition of slow burn combined with flirting and a lot of secrets, as Maelys gradually realises that she doesn’t want a husband. The world of “Mortal Follies” brings queer relationships to the forefront without the trauma so often associated with this era, whether it’s John’s experiences as a Black, gay man or Maelys’ experiences of attraction to women. The exploration of Maelys’ curse and the mystery of Georgianna’s background made this book even more enjoyable, especially when you add in the narration. This book reminded me of an Austen novel, only here there are gods, fairies and sapphic love. However, it does feel a little lacking in stakes and there's a lot of conversations which makes it slightly overlong. This book won't be for everyone but it is fun.

A sapphic, magical tale told by a rather witty and sarcastic fae storyteller? Yes please!

Whilst the narrator might not be for everyone, I ADORED Puck, he’s sassy and sarcastic and I’d listen to him tell just about any tale.

Set in regency England but filled with magic, fae, old gods and of course a curse or two. Mortal Follies follows a young noblewomen who after attending a ball and having her dress unstitch itself, finds herself having to team up with a Duke who’s found themselves a social outcast and rumoured witch to ward off her curse. But is more a risk than simply a scandal and how does she really feel about her Duke?

This a dark tale of curses, magic and romance, told by a witty and clever narrator.

A very sad DNF

I was so so excited for this one: a queer, historical romance with fantasy elements? SIGN ME UP!

But this was so much of a let down I couldnt even get past halfway. From the wildly unfollowable plot, to the complete lack of any kind of world building, zero character descriptors, and a confusing and very rambly narration perspective: I give up.

I entered this book confused and never once did I feel like I had a grasp of anything. Also, so many characters were introduced it was hard to remember their names.

I would consider reading from this author again: and maybe this would work well for some poeple but not for me.

Becuase I DNF'd it I will not be leaving a goodreads rating.

This book holds promise if you have a penchant for Regency style romance, some gentle Sapphic interactions, a hint of magic and some fairy meddling.
The story is narrated by the sprite Robin Goodfellow / Puck (check out your Shakespeare and folklore). He is interested in mortals particular those who may provide entertainment and when he spies our main character Maelys he decides to follow her story.
Our heroine Maelys Mitchelmore (Mae) is on the circuit in Bath, however one fateful society ball sees her dress disintegrating around her leaving her only in her underthing's. This could be social disgrace but luckily she fled to the garden in time and is helped out of her predicament by the Duke of Annadale, who fortunately is a lady. Lady Georgina or the Duke is seen as not quite respectable, however she aids Mae and for whom Mae discovers she has a tender. For Mae this is a revelation and explains a great deal about her lack of passion for any of the young men who have paid court to her that season.
After several more magical attacks it is apparent that Mae is under a curse, the source of which she investigates ably assisted by her cousin Mr. Caesar and her best friend Miss Bickle. The latter suspect everyone including the Duke, but Mae is steadfast in the defence of Lady Georgina.
I did enjoy the book but for me although all the ingredients were there for a fantastic story it just didn't quite gel. We find out who set the curse and that is resolved which then leads to another dilemma all of which is then wrapped up in a chapter. I feel that the author is brimming with ideas but perhaps trying to stuff too much into one book.
That being said if there is a follow up I would be interested to read it and will check out other work by the author. My thanks to Netgalley and the publisher for access to this ARC, all views are my own.

It took me a while to get into this book because it was a new style of narration - the narrator going in and out of their POV and the POV of the MCs. However you soon get used to it, and you're sucked right into the plot so it didnt phase me much.

And boy am I glad I read this, is was such fun! A mix of mystery, historical fiction and fantasy - I mean who doesn't like that? Add in the love interest between the MC and the mysterious Lady Georgiana you have perfection! Such a fun book, and I hope to see more stories from this narrator in the future it was such an enjoyment to read!

I'm a huge fan of Alexis Hall but this one didn't do it for me. The relationship between Maelys and Georgiana was unconvincing -- they didn't have any emotional connection and I'm really not sure what they liked about each other. They barely know each other. The ending was also VERY rushed.