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WOW i loved this book it very much gave The hunger games vibes. Super fun read. The characters >>>>
Also i love the cover of the book
Rating
3.5 stars
I have mixed feelings about this book, it is good however I found myself struggling to get through it. There is a lot of info dumping and I feel we needed more so the pages flowed easier
Although it was a good book, the characters were likeable, driven and I'd happily read more about them
As a big fan of Gong's I had high hopes for this new series. I thought it was not her best work. I enjoyed the characters and as always her villian writing is great. However it just seemed unbalanced in how it dumped information on the reader, with lots and then none. But still enjoyable
3.5*
First of all thank you so much to Hodder & Stoughton for approving me of an e-ARC of Immortal Longings!
I am familiar with Chloe Gong's works myself as I have read multiple of her books (TVD series being one of my favorite YA romance ever), so I was very excited to dive in to her adult fantasy debut. It took a while to get into as I am not familiar with the setting and magic system but after that, I actually had a lot of fun with this book. I really enjoyed the competition setting and I liked Calla and Anton. The heart of this story for me is Calla, and although the romance took a while for me to get into, Calla and Anton stole my heart and I loved the little moments between them. This is very niche but Chloe Gong is so good at writing the little tender and quiet moments between the characters right after the intense romance scenes, just like she did for Roma and Juliette's reunion in OVE.
However, being said this, I honestly wouldn't call Immortal Longings as Adult Fantasy. The writing is still very YA-esque to me despite the adult setting and I think I enjoyed this a lot more because I didn't really think of it as adult fantasy? I think New Adult would be much more appropriate and I think this would be a good jumping ground for YA fantasy enjoyers to start reading adult. There was a lot of info dump at the beginning and a lot of telling but not showing which did make me a little iffy but it got better at the second half.
I will definitely be reading the sequel though:) This one disappointed me just a little bit but it was still such a fun book and I definitely could not not continue after that cliffhanger of an ending.
i'm in love with this book. i love the atmosphere, the characters, the plot, the writing, the ship. and that cliffhanger? i'm so excited for the next one!
Thank you to Hodder & Stoughton and NetGalley for providing me with an eARC to review!
To date I have read every book that Chloe Gong has put out (which so far is 4 in 4 years), so I think this is more a me thing than a book thing (i.e. I might be getting a bit burnt out).
Gong creates a crowded, cyberpunk-esque setting full of magic and danger around every corner. But I wasn't quite able to fall into this one like I did with These Violent Delights or Foul Lady Fortune. She's definitely made the step up to adult - more gory, more spicy, and more ambitious worldbuilding/plotting, but there is also a lot that is the same as her other books. An enemies-to-lovers main couple, a mystery that borders on the magical/paranormal, and a cliffhanger ending.
I'm not sure if it's just because so many books have come out from this author in short succession, so I've been reading a lot of Gong's style and storylines, but this just didn't feel as engrossing to me as her other works. I don't think the comparison to The Hunger Games helped either - as with All of Us Villains, I couldn't help comparing it to the series which has been so formative for my reading career, especially when a lot of the plot points are similar. Despite enemy players being able to hide anywhere in any body, I didn't feel a lot of tension to the games themselves as it always felt like Anton and Calla were destined to make it to the end, especially with August's involvement. And while there were some good moments between the main couple, their romance moved a little too quickly for me to really root for it, which meant the ending didn't really pack the intended punch.
This is by no means a bad read, but I kind of wish Gong had been allowed to take a bit more time with this new series to really see her grow as a writer. The setting for this was cool but it felt a bit more infodumpy than her other works, and I think the book needed a bit more length to further develop the characters and their relationships. Unlike the Secret Shanghai series, the side characters didn't feel like they had much depth, which was something I really appreciated about Gong's previous works. I think readers new to Gong, or who perhaps have paced themselves better than I have, could really enjoy this.
I'd still like to pick up book 2, and I know I'll still pick up books from Gong in future so it's not really a big deal, but I do wish this one had been as much of a hit as I had been hoping :(
First of all big thankyou to Hodder and sloughton (an inprint of Hodderscape ) for am advanced copy .
I read a little bit of chole books before , when I found out about this book being coming up for review in jumped at the chance , I was very intrigued to find out what adventures lay in store,.I can say I wasn't disappointed.
This book is new adult fantasy which I've started reading alot of . I can tell you this book had me sucked in to chole world she has created hook, linen,and sinker .
I loved the fantasy side to the book , the romance well all ill say is if you love a bit of spice you won't be disappointed .
The plot is fantastic and is so well paced I would definitely say it remember me a bit of the hunger games but I think that what I loved most about this story if I'm honest .
The characters calla and Anton oh my gosh I loved them there is no stopping them in this story , it normally takes me a little while to warm to characters but they had me from the start.
We all love a good plot twist the book has a few , and the ending I NEED MORE !!! , I can not wait for the next adventure, I mean once my heart stops racing from this book ,
I'm giving this book a thrilling 5 star adventure.
Thank you to Netgalley and the publishers for the early access to this book!
The writing was great, the characters interesting, and the world building intriguing. I couldn't put it down, it had me hooked. This was a dark book - there's trauma, violence, tiny bit of romance (which I'm glad of), just everything you could want. I can't wait for my pretty special edition!
*Actual rating is 4.75 stars*
Immortal Longings is Chloe Gongs adult debut novel, and it features everything you canto expect from her - a big cast of characters, a delicious enemies to lovers romance, and more twists and turns than a rollercoaster. Then add a deadly, competitive game to that in a dystopian fantasy world and you got this book.
Some books you just immediately know that you’re gonna enjoy, and even though this book had a slow start it was still clear that I was gonna like this book. The story was full of intense and heart pounding action, while set in a dark and gritty world. Not to mention the really cool concept of jumping, of being able to take over other peoples bodies.
As previously mentioned, this book features a big cast of characters. Something that results in multiple POVs, with three main POVs and a handful of minor characters POVs scattered throughout the book. Now I’m not a person who usually likes it when books have more than two POVs, but here it just worked for me. So big kudos to Gongs writing for being able to write a story with multiple povs and characters, and still have me thoroughly engaged in the story. Because here it really helped add to the story, to get these glimpses into all these characters - into their individual motives and schemes. We’re not talking about simple double crossing, oh no. Throw in some triple crossing in there too just to make sure that the reader never knows someone’s true colours.
The one thing that keeps this book from being a full 5 star read for me, and which is common among all her books, is that there’s one major POV that I just don’t care about. In this case Prince August. While there was nothing wrong with his character I just didn’t really connect with his character. In stark contrast I was wholly invested in Calla and Anton, the two other main POVs.
Also that ending?! The implications of it? I was shocked! Not to mention that there was a second plot twist in the ending. This book really wanted to give me a full-on book hangover, and it succeeded.
Immortal Longings is the first book in an adult fantasy series by author, Chloe Gong. This was my first read by this author, but I am keen now to go back and read more of her YA novels. While this one is advertised as an adult novel (in contrast to her YA novels), it wasn’t super graphic and I think would still appeal to upper YA readers. I really like the “jumping” element which took me a while to get my head around but once I did I felt this gave the story something fresh and new and opened up a whole lot of possibilities. The book does end on a cliffhanger but that is to be expected from the first book in a series like this. I’m keen to read the next one and hope we don’t have to wait too long. Told in multiple POV the story is a lot of fun and both main characters are relatable and enjoyable to read. I’d recommend this one for fantasy fans looking for something new.
In interesting mix of dystopian, challenge to the death and fantasy elements set in an Hong Kong inspired fictional city of San-Er, Chloe Gong's first foray into the more adult market is as hectic as the world it portrays. This multi-pov, fast paced paced, Antony and Cleopatra retelling switches things up as often as the characters switch bodies in an engrossing way that will have you questioning what you think you know about the characters consistently. As Gong's first adult novel it reads young maybe New Adult that fully Adult but is enjoyable nonetheless. I am definitely intrigued as to how the trilogy will play out especially as I am not particularly familiar with the roman story it models.
3.5 Stars.
This is my first Chloe Gong book, and it’s very easy to see why she is such a popular author.
The writing feels exquisite, with so many details weaved into the world building tapestry - you are immediately immersed into the character’s lives, senses filled with all they are experiencing. It truly is captivating.
Unfortunately, there were some themes I personally couldn’t reconcile with (namely bodily autonomy & collateral casualties), which took away from my overall enjoyment. However, while this turned out to not be quite the right fit for my particular reading taste, it takes nothing away from the overall quality of the book, its story and the writing.
I’m glad this is the first book in a trilogy, because I need so much more. We have a trio of fierce characters whose goals and motivations are deeply intertwined, yet not always aligned. The side characters also brought so much to the story, whether it was their own schemes or the intrigue from simply existing (looking at you, Otta Avia). I loved getting into each character’s head, and their dynamics were so entertaining. A personal favorite is Calla and August, there was just something special about their interactions.
There are definite The Hunger Games parallels to be made, but the games in Immortal Longings are more of a puzzle piece rather than the puzzle itself. From the threat of outside invasion to secret societies within San-Er, what made this book stand apart is the world it’s set in. Descriptions of the physical setting, and the magic. Jumping added intrigue both in terms of those who are good at it, and those who refuse, one of the many ways to wonder about the characters’ reasons for their actions and decisions.
In Immortal Longings, storylines are woven together to create chaos, each character fighting for their desires and beliefs. Whether the character was primary or secondary, they all contributed to the richness of the plot, which was a complicated mess in the best way. No objective could be accomplished as easily as expected. All of a sudden, the end had arrived, and it was truly a *gasp* moment; I fondly await book two.
Immortal Longings
Chloe Gong
⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️/ 5
Before I start this review I’d like to give my thanks to Hodderscape, Chloe Gong and Netgalley for providing me with the e-ARC of ‘Immortal Longings.’ All opinions expressed in this review are my own, honest opinions of the book! There are no spoilers in this review!
I adored everything about this book- Chloe Gong never fails to exceed expectations! Immortal Longings is the first in her new adult series inspired by Anthony and Cleopatra with morally grey characters, competitions to the death, rivals to lovers, multiple POVs, a bit of spice and astonishing world building! Our main characters- Calla, Anton and August are all such fascinating and complex characters with their own unique voices so the multiple POVs worked really well. The POV switches made me so invested- none of the characters could be said to be reliable narrators and there is lots of scheming behind each others backs so it is impossible to decide who to trust. I loved the POVs from minor characters too because it built so much tension and really helped flesh out the world Chloe Gong has created.
All of the main characters were of the slightly unstable morally-grey variety and I was living for it! Calla was ruthless, intelligent and incredibly stubborn with an intriguing past that made you need to know more right from the very beginning. Her goals are moral and for the good of the kingdom but she is willing to murder and betray to achieve them. Calla cares for her kingdom more than anything and even abandons her own morals just for the chance to save it- she’s a truly unforgettable character. Anton on the other hand cares not for the kingdom but only about saving his childhood lover and he too will do anything including slaughter innocents to save her. Together Calla and Anton they make a near unstoppable team and their alliance soon turns into something more. August, to me, was definitely the most complex character. He is just like Calla in the sense that he wants the king off the throne and the kingdom to be a better place but his end goal is to have himself on the throne. His motives fluctuate from pure to selfish throughout the book and he is overall a very twisted man. I couldn’t decide whether he would truly improve the kingdom as the insisted he would or become corrupted by power the second the crown was put on his head. I loved Augusts chapters so much and his relationship with his bodyguard, Galipei, was so interesting- I can’t wait to see more of them in the second book.
Not only were the characters amazing, the world building was phenomenal too! For a fairly short book, we get so many details about the politics and history of the world and it fit into the story really naturally. The magic system in this book were also one of the most interesting magic systems I’ve ever read! It involves the jumping of a persons qi into other bodies and it’s honestly such an interesting concept I adored reading about it! The descriptions in this book were beautifully written and cinematic and the dialogue was well done and witty- I was a huge fan of Chloe Gong’s writing in the Secret Shanghai series but the prose in Immortal Longings is on another level, you can tell how much she’s developed as a writer! This is by far my favourite book this year and I’m already dying for the sequel- no spoilers but I SCREAMED at the ending. I was actually SHOOK, I did not expect such a major plot twist on the last page! Anyway, I can’t wait for everyone to read this and thank you again to Chloe Gong, Hodderscape and NetGalley for the ARC ❤️
<b>Immortal Longings</b> is Chloe Gong adult debut and I loved it.
Chloe has a special way to tell the story, and although the setting is dirty and dark, it is just impossible to not find her words beautiful.
Immortal longings is a dystopian urban fantasy told by 3 main different POV, and some extra ones to spice things up a bit.
All POV are working for more or less the same purpose, but with different results in mind. In a world as damaged and corrupted as the twin capital cities of San-Er, is it even possible to win?
<i> “There are no gods in this world. Only kings and tyrants</i>
I was hooked from the first page, and had my heart on my throat for the last 20% of the story. This book has everything I love in fantasy: high stakes, fast pace, interesting characters, foreshadowing and surprises.
The characters are deliciously grey and it is still unclear who are the heroes and the villains. Everything is told and woven in a way that demands our attention until we are feeling what they feel. I fell for Anton, cried for other minor characters, felt anxious for the mysteries going on, and was surprised several times.
<i> She stains his mind in vivid color, bright and burning and dangerous.</i>
Recommended for Chloe Gong fans, as well as urban fantasy readers. If you enjoyed Altered Carbon from Netflix you will love this book.
<i>I would like to thank Hodder & Stoughton and NetGalley for the opportunity to read this ARC in exchange for an honest review.</i>
I had no idea what to expect from my first Chloe Gong book but my god was I swept away in this story!
This series is an urban fantasy retelling of the story of Antony and Cleopatra, following a runaway princess Calla, exiled nobility Anton, and heir to the throne August as they navigate the yearly bloody trials in the city of San-Er. (There’s also a cute cat!)
The romance/alliance in this book is very reminiscent of The Hunger Games so if you liked that series as a kid you’ll love this story. (The spice is also VERY well written and that is coming from someone who often finds it cringe). If you like the trope of her putting a dagger to his throat this one is definitely for you.
The world-building was also incredible as you really get a feel for the different areas of San-Er which was the perfect setting for this story. It genuinely feels like you can hear the bustle of this city through the words on the page.
After reading this I cannot wait for the rest of the series and just HAVE to pick up Chloe Gong’s other books. This was perfect for her first adult fantasy venture!
Thank you to NetGalley and Hodder and Stoughton for an e-ARC edition to review. All thoughts are my own.
I chose to read this mostly because I enjoyed the author's previous series and writing style. With full transparency, I don't think this read was entirely for me. I'm not hugely fussed over deadly games/kill or be killed narratives, and so when I initially started this, I was frustrated with myself for applying for an ARC of something I wasn't going to thoroughly enjoy - in the past month, I've read a few darker fantasies with this theme to them and found they're not my style. This is my fault, and I have attempted to not diminish the rating because of reader error.
That being said, this world is well-crafted, as expected from Chloe Gong. I enjoyed the concept of body jumping, and the challenges and opportunities doing so presented. I liked how complicated it could seem to some characters, and to others, jumping was a natural occurrence that didn't make them stop and think about it. I also appreciated the level of layers to the main characters - what their goals were, what drove them to act in the way they did, and how they approached consequences and betrayals. The added issues of poverty and struggles for the kingdom, and the royal responses to this were highlighted well through the corrupt systems and dark machinations surrounding subplots and the game itself.
I really enjoyed the alliance that was built between Anton and Calla. Their love story, whilst a subplot, was weaved in naturally to their storyline, and thus, made believable. I liked that when it came to choices between their love and their goals, there was genuine regret or hesitation involved. Equally, I admired the author remaining true to the characters and how they developed from start to finish despite there being a romance or not.
The biggest thing for me was I didn't expect the plot twists along the way, which came as a pleasant surprise. I liked when they occurred and what that information did for the storyline. Whilst I assumed the ending might go in the way it did, it leaves the reader questioning what is to come next and how each character - both minor and main - will be utilised in continuing the story in book two.
The main issue I had was around the game itself. I started to find it rather pointless to the overall arc of the storyline. At times, it felt as if it was just there to give the characters something to do. The concept of the bracelets and chasing the competitors over the cities wasn't compelling enough to hold my attention, especially when it was just used to kill more people off from the game. I would have much preferred the second focus on the outside threat and illness that was spreading through the competitors to be at the forefront.
I also found that whilst this is meant to be Gong's adult debut, it still read younger to me. The characters are meant to be early to mid-twenties, but it wasn't very obvious this was an adult book. It honestly felt as if Gong made Calla a smoker just to ensure she looked more "adult". I think the tone lends more to the dark upper YA reads I've been having lately, New Adult at best.
Whilst this read wasn't entirely for my enjoyment, I did like the story Gong has written here and do recommend to readers who like the concept to pick this one up.
Chloe Gong continues to prove why shes ome of my favourite authors of all time, I love her writing style so much and whilst this is different from Secret Shanghai j loved every single moment of reading this book and will literally read every single thing she ever writes
Thank you NetGalley and Hodder & Stoughton for giving me this ARC book! Here I leave my honest review.
I read the blurb and I think I have a big expectation for this book. That’s why I was so excited when I got the book. People said in their review that this book has The Hunger Games vibes on it and I love both book and films of The Hunger Games, it increase my expectation to this book.
But sadly it all crumble now. I was so bored while reading this book. Even from the beginning. I can not connect with the world she trying to create. I can’t connect to the characters, I can’t sympathize with them and it got worst when the plot is so slow. Under 400 pages but I can’t finish book faster, I think I need more than 2 weeks to finish this book and it never happen with book less than 400 pages. Kind of disappoint while reading this book.
Calla is depicted as a character who strong, a princess who killed her parents and has a great skill on combat. She only has one purpose, to win the game and carry out her plan. I don’t know how I feeling with her. I think her reason to carry out her plan is not strong enough, maybe the author done a poor job to tell us more about Calla past and why suddenly she has that plan. I know we got a glimpse of real past of Calla but still I’m not sure it’s enough.
The book has so many POV. Even from the characters that I think didn’t have big impact to the plot. I’m not sure why I’m reading his/her character. It feels like the author just want to fill the books.
The games, the biggest event in the book, feel so weak and make no sense for me. It feels like a Hunger Games, we have contestants and now you have to kill each other until there are only two to combat each other directly. But the weird one is the place. They doing the game in open, near civilization when people can suddenly get into a battle. Just make no sense for me. No safety at all for the civilization. And ah I forget to mention about the jumping! One big factor that make this book unique is where some people can jump out from her/his body and take another body. I believe this is the reason why they did the game at open space but didn’t they say that this is Illegal? Another weird moments. The jumping part makes a big influence, it was a great “spice” for the plot.
I don’t really care about other characters beside Calla even for Prince August that has a potential will become the real enemy. But of course except Anton. He has a big job here in this book and become the love interest of Calla. You know from the blurb that Anton has childhood lover that he care and trying to keep her alive. But for the game he need Calla partnership, if the author want to make their partnership just like that I don’t have any objection. But suddenly Calla and Anton have a special place for each other? I don’t even remember that they have a great relationship at all. It feels flat and business only type of relationship. I don’t know how, when, and why their partnership change into relationship.
The only reason I gave this book 3 ⭐ when I want to give it below that that is because of the last 10% of the book. The story turn great and of course end with cliffhanger. I can guess the plot twist at the end and have a little expectation for the next book.
Chloe Gong has once again manages to gut me and tear apart my flesh with her bare hands, while also instilling hope that I too will have a love story as epic as this one. Definitely a must-read for fans of fantasy and dystopia!