Rating: 3.2/5

Review: I thought phrasing was some remnant of writing days gone by…but, it is once again reborn in this two part series. Take mischevious for instance and add “glint”, “smile”, “grin”, “prank”, “flashed”, “sparkled”, “grinned”, “glimmer”, “sparks”, “grinning” over and over and over again. I don’t get it. This writer is good enough to construct non-repetitive phrasing in order to expedite the scene development. Just frikin’ stop. It’s easy. What it does is devalue the story line and render the characters pedantic.

Not all was bad here besides suspending your disbelief that all 14 year old children can beat the snot out of any accomplished adult. Or that the entirety of the worlds solvable problems coinicidentaly rest in the hands of Orphan(s). The plot has some minor holes but is still pretty good. The movement was great and the character development was also well established in a slow reveal rather than coupled to the movement.

I liked this. I would have loved it if the writing could have tightened it’s belt a little.

A classic chosen one hero trope with a young boy as the protagonist. But, sometimes classic is good, and while there's nothing particularly new here, it's still an enjoyable read filled with action and adventure.

Step into the legendary halls of Blackwolff and uncover a world of magic, rivalry, and destiny…

With its intriguing hook, the story unfolds within the halls of a renowned school, where knighthood, wizardry, and ranger training intersect. Will Kingsley, an orphaned outcast, finds himself entangled in a fierce competition alongside Thomas, another orphan destined for greatness. Jealousy and rivalry set the stage, but as the plot thickens and a malevolent force threatens their school, the two unlikely allies join forces.

Prepare to be enchanted by the captivating world of Blackwolff Hall in this thrilling and imaginative tale. The author weaves a spellbinding narrative that effortlessly combines elements of knighthood, wizardry, and ranger training. Through the eyes of 14-year-old orphan Will Kingsley, readers are immersed in a world of rivalries, jealousy, and the unbreakable bonds of friendship. The author's rich character development brings Will and Thomas to life, allowing readers to empathize with their struggles and triumphs. The mystery that unfolds within the halls of Blackwolff is masterfully crafted, keeping readers on the edge of their seats. With its seamless blend of adventure, romance, and magical intrigue this is a must-read for fans of fantasy and coming-of-age tales.