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I absolutely loved this. It's that rare combination of beautifully written AND pacey. Dean's characters are so well portrayed. They feel very real. It's a gripping story, masterfully told.
A lone gunman opens fire during a school play in the picturesque town of Stonesmere in the lake district.
The story is told from various perspectives, and each person has a different account of the events of that fateful day.
I loved the character of survivor Marty, who's own mother was killed in the shooting, and I was eager to learn more about what happened to her that day. Although I enjoyed the book overall, I did find it a bit slow in places.
having enjoyed a previous book by Abigail Dean I was looking forward to this new novel.
unfortunately I found it a bit confusing and thought it was an average story.
Oooh, I really wanted to love this one! I absolutely loved Girl A and went in with high expectations.
The premise is emotional and harrowing. I wouldn't categorise this as a thriller, but more of a detailed character study on grief and conspiracy theories.
The main vein of this story is the tragic and timely focus on shootings in the US, particularly following the aftermath of a mass shooting at an elementary school - an unfortunately all too real occurrence.
While I felt great empathy, I also felt that there was a lack of depth. The duel timelines often seemed disjointed, and was at times difficult to connect with it and some of the (unreliable) characters. It’s a tragic and powerful story that often pulled me in with palpable, emotional tension and other times pushed me away with uncertainty … all the while stirring up feelings of tremendous anger.
Ultimately, this is a difficult one to review, and it would be remiss of me to not say that Dean’s thoughtful and unique prose certainly conjured up some deep feelings … which in itself is a sign of a good book - But …
I’ve seen some outstanding 5 stars for it, so I may be an outlier. It’s compelling and definitely worthy of reading, if for nothing else other than to form your own opinion.
* Please heed TWs!
Many kind thanks to NetGalley and the publisher for an advanced e-arc.
Thank you to Netgalley for my copy.
At the beginning it seems like it starts half way through a story and you are trying to catch up and work out who everyone is.
They described the character of Martha and then someone called Marty and I know its obvious but I didnt twig at first they were the same person!
I felt like this could have been shorter.
I liked that it jumped back and forth between storylines, enjoyed the middle, but found the beginning a bit confusing and found the end a bit of a let down. There wasn't any twists and turns like Girl A and not much drama happened.
Didn't really like Marty or Trent so didn't really sympathise with either of them and it just sort of ended.
I loved Girl A and I liked the concept of this book. I read it quite quick but I think that was just to finish it. It was an ok read, just was expecting more.
This is the second novel I have read by this author. Set in the beautiful location of the Lake District this is about a horrific mass shooting in the local primary school. The story is told through multiple points of view and I found it difficult to keep up at times. I found it very slow and disjointed and didn’t really engage with the characters. I much preferred this authors first novel.
I wanted to love this book…and at times it was gripping, but overall it was mediocre. There were no big twists, no revelations. The ones you think are coming turn out to be damp squibs.
A story of a school shooting that barely spends any time focused on the shooter. The time line jumps around and it is told mainly from the POV of one of the victim’s daughter and from Trent, a wannabe journalist.
I felt a bit deflated by the end, no real revelations and no real insight into the shooting…but maybe that is the point as I guess these tragedies are never explained?
What an incredible read!There are a variety of viewpoints to this tragic event, as well as different timelines. This enables the reader to gradually builds up a complete picture of the event and the reasons for the actions of individual characters.
Abigail Dean writes convincingly real, flawed characters and easily evokes the readers sympathy for both the victims and the survivors. ‘Truthers’ were quite disturbing with their grasp on ‘reality’ showing an unnerving fanaticism.
The descriptions of settings were effectively threaded throughout the story, as I was able to easily build up pictures of the village in the Lake District and the school.
The plot itself is cleverly layered. I was left me with plenty to reflect back on, the huge emotional impact of being involved in a tragic event and the aftermath being powerfully portrayed, giving the reader a unique view of ‘survival’.
This book is a real slow burn, character driven story. capturing emotional turmoil so brilliantly I found it a totally absorbing read.
I really enjoyed this book, Abigail Dean is a great author and I can’t wait for her next one. I’m still thinking about this book today.
This is a very different book to Girl A and what grabbed me in the first instance was the Lake District setting (my home county) . I loved the small town community atmosphere , makes a nice change for a crime thriller type of novel to be set outside of a large city.
The novel is very slow paced yet something kept me reading , there's this feeling of tension, not knowing what this answer to the question 'what happened on Day One' is. However it does jump around a lot which can be confusing at times.
It's a good read but not a great read BUT would make a great TV series !
Day One is the day that the local primary school is famous for, showcasing it's pupils talents class by class, delighting the local community. It's a day that every remembers and talks about, for all the right reasons.
Until it's not.
One fateful Day One, a lone gunman enters the hall and aims at the stage where the young performers and their teacher are in the middle of their performance. There are gunshots, screaming, chaos and then its over. People are dead and nothing will ever be the same again.
Marty was there, saw what happened. At least that's what she tells the local Police. Her Mother was among the victims and Marty cannot bear to face the truth of the tragedy.
Trent Casey, an inspiring journalist sees an opportunity amongst the tragedy, a place to make his name. In his search for the truth about what really happened on that day, having realised he knew the shooter long ago, he becomes entangled in the world of conspiracy theorists and begins peddling some awful content.
This novel is full of interesting characters, some interesting, some dangerous, and some not at all what they seem, but the author forces us to invest time in each and every one of them to get to the bottom of what really happened on Day One.
This isn't an easy read by any stretch of the imagination, but it deals with it's subject matter sensitively and thoughtfully. It certainly isn't a fast paced thriller, more of a literary slow burner. But worth it for those who persevere.
While some found the interweaving narrative provided by the multiple point of views confusing, I loved it! Examining the dark and psychological impact of school shooting will be emotive but definitely feels underrepresented within British media understandably and feels ripe to be examined.
Ava Ward is a teacher at Stonesmere Primary School in the Lake District. Each year, the school celebrates Day One – at the end of each academic year, the eldest children in the primary deliver a play to the 4-year-olds who will be joining the primary school in September. In that way their first day is actually their second and a less daunting prospect.
During Day One, a gunman enters the school and kills several children and adults, including Ava Ward.
Marty, Ava’s daughter, was at school that day and witnessed the whole thing. Eight years on, she is trapped in a lie she told all those years ago…
Trent Casey, a wannabe journalist with his own blog, follows the case with great scrunity. He used to live in Stonesmere, so when the gunman’s photo is released, he recognises the shooter, and immediately rejects the media’s narrative.
He starts reading articles and comments online, in which some people claim that the massacre hadn’t happened at all…
I really wanted to like this book! Having read Girl A (which was fabulous) and the synopsis of this story, I had high hopes.
However, for me, the plot was too slow-paced and it just fell flat for me. We know from the beginning who the killer was, we know that Marty lied. I just felt there weren’t any revelations there at all.
It wasn’t for me, but it might be for you!
Thank you to Hemlock Press for approving my NetGalley request to read and review this title.
This novel deals with the ongoing trauma and repercussions of a tragic school shooting that engulfs the members of a small community on 'Day One'.
Starting with the horrific event the story unfolds through the points of view of various characters whose lives are touched by the events of the day. But whose account can actually be believed. Marty, the daughter of the school teacher killed on the day or Trent a young man with a head full of conspiracy theories who mistrusts the official version of events. Both of these main characters are written in a sympathetic way which was a welcome change as they could have easily become stereotypes in this tale.
This is not your conventional thriller as it is more of a slower paced read. Timelines are muddled with the narrative going backwards and forwards in time, to show how the main characters ended up behaving like they did , and what really happened on 'Day One'.
Another great read which builds on Abigail's impressive debut novel 'Girl A'.
I loved reading this book. It was raw and emotional and kept me hooked from start to finish. A shooting in a primary school is always going to be a triggering plot however it was told so well
An interesting read but I found it very slow and the timeline somewhat confusing. I expected more from the the premise of the first chapter.
After a superb, quiet start set in a primary school, Stonesmere, in the Lake District the story unfolds with a school shooting!I This situation was described really well by Ms Dean as the parents and staff were to undergo all sorts of trauma. The book title is when the sad event happened.
I was expecting more from then but was confronted with various timelines and different POVs. This led to some confusion and I struggled to the end, which was a little rushed.
Thanks to Net Galley and Harper Collins UK for the chance to read and review.
In a small community in the Lake District, a gunman enters a school hall, during the school’s annual Day One performance. The teacher dies, along with the children she is trying to protect. Marty’s mum is the teacher, and this is what Marty tells the press.
But conspiracy theorists notice details in Marty’s story that do not add up. A media frenzy ignites, with the keyboard warriors determined to expose what really happened.
Everyone has their own version of Day One… which is the truth?
This was an interesting read. A school shooting is a very sensitive subject to write about, but Dean navigated it with care. The conspiracy theorist concept of the story was brilliant and well thought out; it definitely mimics the sort of thing that happens on social media today.
The narrative goes between past and present with multiple timelines, which does add intrigue, but also added a bit of confusion for me. However, it worked as it was a great way to get across certain aspects of the story and take the reader into the school hall to see what happened from other people’s eyes.
Day One is a slow burner following the police investigation and the incident's aftermath, but ramps up towards the end. However, the ending seemed to come without a bang, which left me slightly unsatisfied.
A great read, with some mixed feelings, but one that kept me reading late into the night to see what would happen next.
💭 ᴍʏ ᴛʜᴏᴜɢʜᴛꜱ:
What can I say. I didn’t like this at all to be honest. The characters are bland. There is nothing special to any of them. I don’t think many people want to read about a mass shooting, especially when there is no real plot to it. I honestly don’t know why I finished it, maybe in the hope I wasn’t completely wasting my time. There was no good plot in the end; that might have made a bit of a difference. Ultimately, I struggled to finish this and was not at all in a rush to keep reading.
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🤓 ʀᴇᴀᴅ ɪꜰ ʏᴏᴜ ʟɪᴋᴇ:
Multiple POVs
Multiple Timelines
ᴛʀɪɢɢᴇʀ ᴡᴀʀɴɪɴɢ
Mass school shooting
ꜱʏɴᴏᴘꜱɪꜱ:
𝘚𝘵𝘰𝘯𝘦𝘴𝘮𝘦𝘳𝘦 𝘸𝘪𝘭𝘭 𝘯𝘦𝘷𝘦𝘳 𝘣𝘦 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘴𝘢𝘮𝘦 𝘢𝘨𝘢𝘪𝘯… 𝘈 𝘷𝘪𝘭𝘭𝘢𝘨𝘦 𝘩𝘢𝘭𝘭, 𝘢 𝘱𝘳𝘪𝘮𝘢𝘳𝘺 𝘴𝘤𝘩𝘰𝘰𝘭 𝘱𝘭𝘢𝘺, 𝘢 𝘣𝘦𝘢𝘶𝘵𝘪𝘧𝘶𝘭 𝘓𝘢𝘬𝘦 𝘋𝘪𝘴𝘵𝘳𝘪𝘤𝘵 𝘵𝘰𝘸𝘯. 𝘐𝘯𝘵𝘰 𝘵𝘩𝘪𝘴 𝘪𝘥𝘺𝘭𝘭𝘪𝘤 𝘴𝘤𝘦𝘯𝘦 𝘴𝘵𝘦𝘱𝘴 𝘢 𝘭𝘰𝘯𝘦 𝘨𝘶𝘯𝘮𝘢𝘯 𝘸𝘩𝘰𝘴𝘦 𝘢𝘤𝘵𝘪𝘰𝘯𝘴 𝘴𝘦𝘵 𝘰𝘧𝘧 𝘢 𝘵𝘳𝘢𝘪𝘯 𝘰𝘧 𝘦𝘷𝘦𝘯𝘵𝘴 𝘵𝘩𝘢𝘵 𝘸𝘪𝘭𝘭 𝘩𝘢𝘷𝘦 𝘥𝘦𝘷𝘢𝘴𝘵𝘢𝘵𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘤𝘰𝘯𝘴𝘦𝘲𝘶𝘦𝘯𝘤𝘦𝘴 𝘧𝘰𝘳 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘤𝘭𝘰𝘴𝘦-𝘬𝘯𝘪𝘵 𝘤𝘰𝘮𝘮𝘶𝘯𝘪𝘵𝘺 𝘰𝘧 𝘚𝘵𝘰𝘯𝘦𝘴𝘮𝘦𝘳𝘦. 𝘈𝘵 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘦𝘱𝘪𝘤𝘦𝘯𝘵𝘳𝘦 𝘰𝘧 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘵𝘳𝘢𝘨𝘦𝘥𝘺 𝘪𝘴 𝘔𝘢𝘳𝘵𝘺, 𝘥𝘢𝘶𝘨𝘩𝘵𝘦𝘳 𝘰𝘧 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘵𝘦𝘢𝘤𝘩𝘦𝘳 𝘸𝘩𝘰 𝘥𝘪𝘦𝘴 𝘵𝘳𝘺𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘵𝘰 𝘱𝘳𝘰𝘵𝘦𝘤𝘵 𝘩𝘦𝘳 𝘱𝘶𝘱𝘪𝘭𝘴. 𝘞𝘩𝘢𝘵 𝘥𝘪𝘥 𝘴𝘩𝘦 𝘴𝘦𝘦? 𝘏𝘰𝘸 𝘪𝘴 𝘴𝘩𝘦 𝘪𝘯𝘷𝘰𝘭𝘷𝘦𝘥? 𝘐𝘯 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘸𝘦𝘦𝘬𝘴 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘮𝘰𝘯𝘵𝘩𝘴 𝘧𝘰𝘭𝘭𝘰𝘸𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘬𝘪𝘭𝘭𝘪𝘯𝘨𝘴, 𝘤𝘰𝘯𝘴𝘱𝘪𝘳𝘢𝘤𝘺 𝘵𝘩𝘦𝘰𝘳𝘪𝘴𝘵𝘴 𝘴𝘵𝘢𝘳𝘵 𝘲𝘶𝘦𝘴𝘵𝘪𝘰𝘯𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘸𝘩𝘢𝘵 𝘩𝘢𝘱𝘱𝘦𝘯𝘦𝘥. 𝘍𝘰𝘳 𝘰𝘶𝘵𝘴𝘪𝘥𝘦𝘳 𝘛𝘳𝘦𝘯𝘵 𝘊𝘢𝘴𝘦𝘺, 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘵𝘳𝘶𝘵𝘩𝘦𝘳 𝘮𝘰𝘷𝘦𝘮𝘦𝘯𝘵 𝘰𝘧𝘧𝘦𝘳𝘴 𝘩𝘪𝘮 𝘢 𝘤𝘩𝘢𝘯𝘤𝘦 𝘵𝘰 𝘴𝘵𝘦𝘱 𝘪𝘯𝘵𝘰 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘴𝘱𝘰𝘵𝘭𝘪𝘨𝘩𝘵 𝘵𝘰 𝘦𝘹𝘱𝘰𝘴𝘦 𝘵𝘩𝘦 ‘𝘴𝘩𝘢𝘮’ 𝘰𝘧 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘬𝘪𝘭𝘭𝘪𝘯𝘨𝘴. 𝘔𝘢𝘳𝘵𝘺’𝘴 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘛𝘳𝘦𝘯𝘵’𝘴 𝘭𝘪𝘷𝘦𝘴 𝘸𝘪𝘭𝘭 𝘣𝘦𝘤𝘰𝘮𝘦 𝘦𝘯𝘵𝘸𝘪𝘯𝘦𝘥 𝘢𝘴 𝘦𝘷𝘦𝘯𝘵𝘴 𝘴𝘱𝘪𝘳𝘢𝘭 𝘰𝘶𝘵 𝘰𝘧 𝘤𝘰𝘯𝘵𝘳𝘰𝘭. 𝘛𝘩𝘦 𝘵𝘳𝘶𝘦 𝘴𝘵𝘰𝘳𝘺 𝘪𝘴 𝘨𝘳𝘢𝘥𝘶𝘢𝘭𝘭𝘺 𝘳𝘦𝘷𝘦𝘢𝘭𝘦𝘥, 𝘣𝘶𝘵 𝘢𝘵 𝘸𝘩𝘢𝘵 𝘤𝘰𝘴𝘵 𝘵𝘰 𝘵𝘩𝘰𝘴𝘦 𝘤𝘢𝘶𝘨𝘩𝘵 𝘶𝘱 𝘪𝘯 𝘵𝘩𝘦 𝘮𝘢𝘦𝘭𝘴𝘵𝘳𝘰𝘮…
I must admit I could t finish this book.
After really enjoying this authors first book I was really looking forward to reading her second one. However I found this book really disjointed and all over the place. I couldn’t really work out what was going on.