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The description of this book really interested me however I struggled with the writing style and slow pace. I found the start really slow and struggled to connect. Thank you to NetGalley and the publishers though for giving me access to a story by an author I have never read before.

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This book was unfortunately not for me. I found this book incredibly slow, very ‘wordy’ and quite cliched in the red herrings used.

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"I would be grateful if you could come to San Francisco to write my life story, as I have only three months to live."

With this invitation, Nicky Hunter travels to San Francisco to meet the renowned and enigmatic author, Sebastian Trapp.
She has been in communication with him for five years after she pointed out an error in one of his novels.
Even more intriguing to her is the unsolved mystery surrounding him. On New Year's Eve 1999, his wife, Hope, and son, Cole, vanished from two different locations, never to be seen again.
Therefore, she finds herself in the mysterious house, ready to write a private biography, or as she calls it, a memoir book about the life of Sebastian Trapp.

What should be a captivating yet straightforward assignment turns into something far more complex.
Nicky also shares an undisclosed connection with the family...she was a pen pal with Cole, Sebastian's son who disappeared.
However, appearances can be deceiving, as everyone harbors a secret. Some secrets, though, are more significant than others.

"Life is a thriller. The ending is fatal and the conclusion is final."

If you are an admirer of Arthur Conan Doyle, this book is an absolute must-read, as it contains numerous references to his books.

The first chapter begins with a bang and is very descriptive and atmosphere, but do not anticipate a rapid pace. This is a gradual narrative where the tension steadily builds to a climactic conclusion.

I thoroughly enjoyed the beginning of the book, but after approximately 20%, my interest waned, and my attention occasionally drifted. However, at around 80%, the pace accelerated, and the ending was truly mind-blowing! I am so glad I persevered!

Thank you to NetGalley and Harper Collins UK for the ARC in exchange for my honest opinion.

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I'm aware that there's some controversy surrounding this author, although to be honest I haven't looked into it so am not qualified to judge, but what I can do is judge his writing and damn but the boy can write! The sentences fairly vibrate with Finn's joy in setting them down 'just so' and I thoroughly enjoyed his use of language, this is a writer who loves words, loves mysteries, and loves weaving the two together until the result is more than the sum of its parts! The plot is fairly complicated, and although an early clue got me wondering, there were sufficient red herrings and obfuscation that I couldn't be sure. For some reason, and it's probably just me & the result of a busy time, but I got a bit bogged down with some of the men's names, and had to keep reminding myself who was who. I've heard it described as a slow start, which I didn't feel, but then I was enjoying the fizz of the writing so much that perhaps that escaped me, and certainly in comparison to some later stages in the book which were at a cracking pace I guess this could be so, but your patience will definitely be rewarded. The story centres around a writer (something of a fangirl, and fellow expert in mystery writings) invited to document the memories of a famous author, Sebastian Trapp, with only months to live. In his past and overshadowing the family and the story is his unfortunate history of the disappearance of his wife and young son 20yrs previously, with most people believing that he was responsible and had gotten away with murder. The young writer, Nicky Hunter, receives a mixed welcome in the house - not everyone is comfortable with having their past raked over, after all. Trapp's beautiful new wife (also a character from the bygone days) and his sullen daughter engage with Nicky in varying degrees. The insightful and kind Nicky listens to everyone's stories, but after a particularly dramatic party we finally come to the death hinted at at the beginning of the book (& on the cover!) and Nicky begins to feel increasingly uncomfortable about her position in the house, but events are escalating and spiralling out of control and she can't drag herself away from trying to unravel the truth of both the past and the present. It was a great read, highly recommended, and many thanks go to NetGalley and Harper Collins for the opportunity to read an advance copy.

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Thanks so much for the advanced copy! This is so much of a better read than The Woman in the Window! Sebastian Trapp, mystery novelist, invites long-time fan (and penpal) Nicky Hunter to visit him in his dying months at his family home in San Francisco. The Trapp family have had plenty of woes, and his second wife and wary daughter await Nicky’s arrival, interested and a bit unnerved at what the detective fiction expert will find out. She’s there to write a memoir of sorts, but finds a community there, of people whose interest in Trapp is both personal and, well, profitable. Will Sebastian talk about the disappearance of his first wife and son? And who is responsible for the body in the koi pond? It’s quite clear that some history prefers not to stay hidden.

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A.J. Finn's latest novel, End of Story, is an intense story revolving around Sebastian Trapp, a reclusive crime novelist who invites aspiring writer Nicky Hunter to chronicle his life. As Nicky delves deeper into Sebastian's past, a long-unsolved mystery surrounding the disappearance of his first wife and son twenty years before resurfaces.

The novel does a great job of pulling in elements from the golden age of detective fiction. There are many references to iconic authors such as Agatha Christie and Raymond Chandler throughout the story, which made me nostalgic for those timeless novels. The setting, a sprawling mansion with hidden secrets, further reinforces this atmosphere. I thought the writing throughout was consistently strong, as it was in The Woman in the Window which I also really enjoyed.

The dual narrative, following both Nicky and Sebastian's daughter, Madeleine, adds depth to the story. Nicky's obsession with uncovering the truth kept me intrigued while Madeleine struggles with questions about her father and what really happened all those years ago. I guessed one of the twists but it didn't affect my enjoyment and there were plenty of other surprises to keep me interested.

The pacing, however, felt inconsistent, with some sections dragging and others rushing towards revelations. I really liked the ending but I could imagine that it might leave some readers wanting a bit more.

Overall, End of Story is a compelling read for fans of classic mysteries and psychological thrillers. The novel's engaging central mystery and skilful writing kept me wanting to read on.

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Long time mystery fanatic Nicky Hunter arrives at the home of Sebastian Trapp, renowned mystery writer and recluse tasked with crafting a personal memoir for his family's eyes only. Will she finally be privy to the truth about his wife and son, who have been missing for two decades? As the writer and house withhold their secrets, Nicky must fight to find the truth before it's too late.

This was a little slow to start but once I settled into the book, I found the intrigue and clever viewpoints expected from A.J. Finn as previous worl and found myself eager to read on to solve the mystery and find the truth.

Thank you the the author, publisher and Nethalley for the opportunity to read this book as an ARC.

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I loved The Woman in the Window, and I was thrilled to be able to get the chance to read End of Story. by A. J. Finn

The story centres on the Trapp family in San Francisco. Sebastian Trapp is an author or more accurately he is now widely regarded an infamous author. He is now living out his final days with his second wife Diana and daughter Madeleine and is thinking about his legacy. Much to his family’s puzzlement, he invites Nicky Hunter, a crime fiction expert, to spend three months with him and provides her with an opportunity to gather and write up his memories/life.

Nicky has spent years corresponding with Sebastian Trapp and she is keen to unearth what actually happened to Sebastian’s first wife, Hope, and their son Cole who both disappeared twenty years earlier. Trapp’s reputation has been tarnished by their disappearance and the world has pretty much decided that they are dead. The question everyone wants to know is whether he did or did not kill them.

This is a great rollercoaster ride of a book. Everyone in the Trapp extended family seems to have secrets, and the question is of course who can be trusted. This book kept me enthralled and on the edge of my seat!

Huge thanks to NetGalley and the publishers, HarperCollins UK, HarperFiction, Hemlock Press, for making an e-ARC available to me to read in exchange for a fair and honest review.

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Early on New Years Eve, twenty years ago, Cole (14) disappeared from his cousin’s home. His mother, Hope, vanished from her own home at the same time. Neither has been seen or heard of since then. Cole’s father (or Hope’s husband if you prefer) is Sebastian Trapp, famous author of a crime story series set in 1920’s England. The books echo the style and ambience of the early Golden Age of detective stories, although Sebastian and his family are all modern Americans based in San Fransisco. It is widely believed that Sebastian has murdered them and disposed of the bodies using his plotting skills to create a perfect crime. Although uxoricide is not uncommon in all levels of society, filicide is rare in upper class families, but Sebastian is known to have despised his son as a milk-sop, mummy’s boy, who prefers making origami butterflies to playing sports.
Suspicions are not proofs and Sebastian’s authorial life continued much as before, and his daughter Madeleine, late thirties, continues to live with him in the family home (a large gothic mansion) along with his second wife. Fifteen years after Hope’s disappearance and presumption of death, Sebastian married Diana, Hope’s former assistant, who had lost her own husband and child. But now Sebastian has been diagnosed with end stage kidney failure and has only three months to live. Over the last few years he has been corresponding with Nicky Hunter, a college lecturer on crime fiction, and now he invites her to come and live with the family and write his biography. Nicky leaps at the chance, hoping that she might be able to solve the mystery behind the disappearances. But her researches stir up old memories and animosities, and then origami butterflies start to appear, suggesting that Cole might be alive and in the vicinity. But after twenty years is it likely that the family members could recognise him? Various mid-thirties, blonde guys appear to be possible candidates. And, if Cole has returned, why has he done so, and what does he want? Reconciliation or Revenge?
The story is told mainly from Nicky’s or Sebastian’s point of view, although some aspects are seen only from Madeleine’s. The style reflects, but is not a pastiche of, the Golden Age, heightened by frequent allusions to and quotations from classic examples of the genre. At times, conversations between Sebastian and Nicky are verbal parrying matches, which reveal quite a lot about the two protagonists. Other characters are circling these two, each with their own idiosyncrasies. Madeleine, neurotic at the best of times, is particularly feeling the pressure, because she was closest to Cole before his disappearance and has missed him the most. The plot unfolds slowly at first, partly because there is a lot of exposition and partly because the author is enjoying playing with the literary language. He is also partial, perhaps over partial, to anthropomorphism and personification. It picks up gradually as more and more incidents occur and starts to speed up noticeably, and the tension increases, as we spiral towards the dénouement, in fact the triple dénouement since there are three great reveals. I did work out two of these but failed on the third, although the clues are all there subtly stitched in to what is a very twisted plot.
I would like to thank NetGalley, the publishers and the author for providing me with a draft proof copy for the purpose of this review.

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I was intrigued by the concept of this book, I wanted to know what had happened to Sebastian's wife and son. It found it interesting but a bit confusing, this could be because the ARC copy I had was not properly formatted. There were no paragraph breaks so scenes ran into each other and it was hard to tell when the author had switched from one character to another.

I also found I didn't really connect with any of the characters. I definitely did not see that ending coming, I love a good twist. But that wasn't enough to make this a 5 star book. I'd say it was a high 3 stars.

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End of Story is a cleverly crafted, well written book but fair warning, there are a lot of characters and its plot is complicated.
The story is slow moving to start with, but once we get to the heart of it, it moves along at a steady pace.
There are many twists, and a surprising revelation towards the end.
Despite the slow start I enjoyed this book immensely. It was obvious from the onset that all of the characters had something to hide, and this added to the intrigue.
End of Story is reminiscent of those classic crime stories by authors such as Agatha Christie and Dorothy L Sayers, but set in the present day. There are many references to, and quotes from the Sherlock Holmes series of books. Unsurprising, as one of the main characters has written a series of books about a detective in the London of the early 1900's.
Many thanks to HarperCollins UK, HarperFiction and Netgalley for the digital ARC in exchange for this review.

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When Nicky is invited into the home of infamous crime writer Sebastian Trapp to write his memoirs as he is dying, the question on her and everyone’s lips is did he kill his wife and child who disappeared under mysterious circumstances nineteen years ago.
With lots of characters and some weird things happening this book kept me intrigued until the very end which absolutely blew my mind! The twists just kept coming, my head was spinning! Well worth the long wait from this author. Highly recommend

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An Invitation Not To Refuse..
An invitation, a mystery novelist and a luxurious mansion house. When an invitation from Sebastian Trapp, mystery novelist, arrives for Nicky, she simply cannot refuse. She has been his long time correspondent and, as an expert in detective fiction, she jumps at the opportunity. Arriving at the enigmatic mansion, she wonders whether she has done the right thing. It soon becomes clear that there is more to both Sebastian and the mansion than meets the eye. An intriguing read with a deftly drawn cast and an engaging premise, a slow burn plot populated with red herrings, often witty wordplay, compelling reveals and bubbling with atmospherics as well as more than frequent nods to detective fiction authors and their works - the author’s love of literature, the Golden Age mystery genre and classic film is evident. The writing style is rather marmite - perhaps, the reader will love it or hate it - although this reader loved every word.

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Loved the little homages to Agatha Christie in this. I throughly enjoyed this one. If you love Agatha Christie style books and who dunnit murder mysteries think you will love this one. I highly recommend it. Characters were easy to learn about. The plot was great.

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I was expecting a bit of a Paula Hawkins or Lisa Jewell, but the storytelling style is quite different, and I'm afraid overall, disappointing.

The story opens with lengthy details on Nicky's reason to visit writer, and possible murderer, Sebastian Trapp. I found it difficult to get hooked on Nicky's arrival or the opening characters, and I was left with a sense of wondering when the "real story" will start. Added to this, the plot is narrated in a fairly linear sequence, and the dialog and descriptions feel quite plain--rather matter of fact. It just felt like a case of "did he or didn't he do it" with the usual fare of other suspects entering into the mix.

I was missing the clever pacing and twists of other crime/thriller writers who really grab you by the seat of your pants. Maybe the more conservative pacing and scripting is a deliberate strategy to distance this work from other authors' styles, but it made it difficult to persist with reading the whole work. I somewhat dragged through it. This just wasn't a particularly memorable read for me personally.

That's not to say there isn't a decent story here. The development feels logical and everything hangs together. Maybe more for a Sherlock Holmes reader or a Silence of the Lambs afficionado.

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The premise of this novel was such that I expected to love it. The gothic horror and nods to classic crime fiction make this a modern take on a classic crime novel. However, it wasn't for me. I found the pace slow and the dialogue contrived.

Thank you NetGalley and the publisher for the ARC

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Like many people, I've been dying to read A.J Finn's new book for a long time and although my expectations were high - this didn't disappoint. I used to be allergic to books about writers/with writers as a main character, but this one really worked for me. I'm glad Finn is back and hope it won't be so long until his next one.

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Having read the description for this novel I was really looking forward to reading it. Unfortunately the writing style was just not for me, very slow in developing the plot as well.
Thank you Netgalley and publishers for the opportunity to read this, sorry but it was a did not finish for me!

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I enjoyed this book, it is a slow burner in pace, but the story does grab you.
Nicky Hunter goes to stay with famed author Sebastian Trapp to ghostwrite his “family memory book” as he is dying. Sebastian is as famous for being a detective author and having his own mystery, the disappearance of his wife and young son twenty years earlier.
Nicky is excited to work with him and hope he reveals the truth about what happened to his family two decades earlier before his death.
I liked the main characters of Nicky and Sebastian. Freddy, Diana, and all the other characters had their parts to play too.

Now halfway I suspected I had guessed the end (the big reveal, revealed that I had guessed correctly) but I was ok with that
as I wanted to see what would happen after the reveal and it was very satisfactory. Give it a read!

Thanks to NetGalley for the advance copy.

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Slow to start but stick with it, it’s full of suspense and intrigue, this book had me guessing until the final reveal. Slower than my usual but once it got going it was great. Bravo

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