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Solid 4*. I enjoyed reading it. Interesting story and likeable group of main characters. I would love to know what can happen next for them. Great mix of crime, fantasy, romance and just pure young adult novel.
Stars: 2.5 out of 5
This book had potential, I love urban fantasy and new interesting takes that authors have on the old thrope of monsters living among us without the general public being aware of it and secret agencies in the government created to police them. So I was more than on board with this and ready to enjoy my read. Unfortunately, the execusion suffers from what I would call "the first book" syndrom. And while I am willing to forgive a lot if I like the story and the characters, the flaws outweighted the positives in this case.
My biggest issue with the book is head hopping. I HATE this. It gives me whiplash and immediately takes me out of the story, killing all enjoyment. I don't mind having certain scenes narrated by different characters as long as there is a clear separation between them. In this case though, we have some scenes where the POV literaly changes from paragraph to paragraph in the same scene, which is really off-putting and confusing.
My second issue was the way the author chose to write the accents different characters have. Like Sebastian, the French werewolf. While that would be fantastic in an audio book, it sounds very forced and unnatural written on a page. It is honestly hard to read, because the words are writen wrong to immiate an accent, but since I am reading this, not listening to it, half the time I have to stop and re-read to even understand what the author ment. There are other ways of showing that English isn't someone's native language.
My other issues are related to the characters and the general worldbuilding.
Where it comes to the worldbuilding, there isn't enough of it. It leaves more questions than answers. Like how does the Graveyard Watch fit into the rest of Brittish law enforcement or even government? Who does the Commander answer to? Who pays the bills? What is the chain of command here? What is the scop of their powers? What is their ultimate mission? Are they judge, jury, and executionner? Are they enforcers or also councelors whom the supernatural community can turn to for help? Are there other divisions of the Graveyard Watch in other countries? A centralized authority that overseas them? Who watches the watchers? No clue, because that's never explained.
My other issue is with the characters. We don't know anything about them apart from their funny accents. The only one we get a bit of a backstory about is Domingo, but even then it's not much. The characters are just kind of there... I don't know their motivations, I don't know what they do in their personal lives, I don't know what their aspirations are. They move the story forward, talk in funny accents, and (in the case of Jocasta) swoon over every hot-looking guy that happens to cross her path.
Speaking of Jocasta, I really hated her inner monologs that were written more like dialogs. I mean does she have split personality or what? Why does it sound like another voice is answering her in her head when she is having a moment? Also, for someone who is described as an intelligent and capable medical examiner, why is she suddenly turning into a detective? Her job is not to track suspects and apprehend them. Her job is to examine a scene and a body, if there is one. The whole plot of them following Victor to his secret lair was absolutely stupid. Why would she run after a known suspect, jump into his boat, follow him into a warehouse... all that while wearing an evening dress and high heels? What is she, Super Woman?
In the end, the negatives outweighted the positives for me, hence the rather low rating I'm giving this book. I will not be continuing with this series.
PS: I received an advanced copy of this book via NetGalley in exchange for an honest review.
Rather purple prose and storytelling. Not sure if it's supposed to sound like that for humor or if it's sincerely overwrought. Kind of wish it would go to one side or the other.
3.5⭐️
As someone who really enjoys urban fantasy, this was a very fun read. It was the perfect palate cleanser after coming off of a dense fantasy book. I’m more of an ACAB type, but the Graveyard Watch (which is basically a supernatural police force) wasn’t cringe to read. If the tv shows Bones and Supernatural had a baby, it would be this book. Also, I don’t normally enjoy reading dual timeline books, as I’m usually more interested in one over the other, and this was no exception, but it wasn’t horrible either. Overall, if you want a cozy, supernatural Whodunit, brain candy of a book, this is for you.
eARC graciously provided by NetGalley and Small Bear Books, and all opinions are my own.
would like to thank netgalley and the publisher for letting me read this book
as much as i tried to get into this book i found it very difficult, there seemed to be a lot going on with very little explanation.... and with loads of hints but it wasnt enough to keep my attention...
sorry i did try
R.J. Eason has me hooked! As someone who isn’t usually into ready urban fantasy this book was a lovely introduction and wasn’t as jarring as some books can be.
I really enjoyed the characters, various mythical beings and how they interact within the mystery.
Whilst I am hopeful that there will be more instalments of the Graveyard watch it is very refreshing to read a book that doesn’t extend past the point of too much.
This was a wonderful debut and I am excited to see what Eason does next!
Awesome debut novel from R.J Eason
World building was amazing and easy to follow, with a dark urban fantasy setting mixed delightfully with humanoid that balanced out perfectly
Excited to see where this series goes
Thank you to Small Bear Books and NetGalley for an ARC of The Graveyard Watch in exchange for an honest review.
I'm sorry to say that this book simply didn't work for me at all. My initial impression from the first few chapters was that the book and writing style felt a little rough around the edges, but that's often something I'm able to overlook with a good premise. While I do like the urban fantasy detective elements of the book, I sadly found the execution to be pretty lacking. The lead characters felt quite two-dimensional and uninspired, and the frequent POV shifts mid-chapter made it a struggle to keep hold of the narrative. This is particularly prevalent near the start of the novel, where the POV would jump to a character we haven't previously encountered, or one of the many side hustles of Domingo De Torres. I feel like the intention there was to give the impression that he constantly has a million things on the go at once, but the execution of this missed the mark entirely for me. The most egregious sin The Graveyard Watch commits however is the horrible 'written out accents' that several characters have. In the best case scenario this is lazy characterization, and at worst it could be considered insulting and hard to read. To give one of these accents to a fairly central character honestly just felt like the book shooting itself in the foot.
The Graveyard Watch is a very interesting debut that left me eager to continue reading.
I think he has the potential to write many other stories in relation to the universe that Eason has created. And I hope he does.
The story begins slowly, and we gradually enter this new world in which Jocasta finds herself immersed. I liked the rhythm of the story, how the different events were carried out and how they introduced us to the characters, although I was left wanting to know a little more about the past of each of them.
It has action, romance, mystery, supernatural beings and cases to solve. There were times when I wasn't completely hooked, but there were others where I couldn't stop reading, and when I realized it, the book was over.
I need more!
Thank you Small Bear Books for the ARC I read on NetGalley, a change from an honest review.
I am a fan of Ben Aaronovitch's Rivers of London series and this book hit that spot for me. There are many iterations of police teams that deal with the uncanny, not all of them work but I liked the premise for this book.
Jocasta is a forensic pathologist for the Met and is very good at what she does. However when it seems she underperformed in a performance review she is shunted to the Graveyard Watch - seemingly a demotion. It soon is apparent that she has entered a strange new underworld that lives in sync with our modern one. Her incisive skills are soon put to use and she is plunged into situations with vampires, werewolves, gnomes and plots to derail the leadership of the supernatural world.
I enjoyed the pacing and for me the characters were engaging and I cared what happened to them. A first book with promise and looking forward to the next.
My thanks to Netgalley and the publisher for access to this ARC. All views are my own.
I have an extreme soft spot for urban fantasy, so I wasn't really surprised when the Graveyard Watch ticked all my boxes. It combines everything I love about the genre; a team of misfits thrown together, magical creatures and an unseen part of the modern world and then adds some humour into the mix. It doesn't always work well but this is a well written book, especially for a debut.
So, what do we have? We have a section of the police affiliated very loosely with the City of London force, situated in one of the towers of Tower Bridge and staffed by various different kinds of supernatural beings. And one human forensic pathologist. The characters are well written and, although we have the usual suspects of vampires and werewolves, it was nice to see a bit of variety in that cast list. My particular favourites is the gnome who does the forensics (Bucky), the Icarus sandals and the Cryptid Section of the Natural Museum. The overall plot may be familiar to fans of the genre (someone is going to commit a devastating crime. Our heroes have to stop them before they do) but there are tones that bring freshness to The Graveyard Watch.
As with a lot of urban fantasy, it is set in London. Although it is probably overdone, London does have that very old, lots of history, slightly spooky atmosphere to it, so it does lend itself well to this genre. It is that unfamiliar in the familiar landscape that I love so much in urban fantasy and it is used to devastating effect here. It is nice that the Tower Bridge area is getting a showing this time, although I'm pretty doubtful that you could fit a full pathology lab with forensics into the basement of one of the towers. It's fantasy though, and the aforementioned lab is run by a vampire so I think we can suspend belief on the dimensions for now.
The Graveyard Watch is part police procedural, post supernatural thriller and part comedy. I had some genuine laugh-out-loud moments, so the humour really worked for me. The romance felt a little shoehorned in and felt a bit like a plot device but it wasn't a great deal of the plot. It also is not super spicy, being fade to black, so those that are not too keen on graphic sex scenes should be ok. I would think that this would suit fans of the Guards in Discworld, the Rivers of London series and the Alex Verus series, as it felt like a bit of a mash up of all of them to me. As these are three of my favourite series, I think you could say this was straight up my alley. I would definitely read more in this new series.
Urban Fantasy set in London - those five words make me listen up every time. I blame it on Mike Carey and his Felix Castor novels, they were my entrance to the genre.
Unfortunately this debut novel didn't quite work for me. Although the scaffolding of the story is good and I'm likely to seek out a sequel novel, the execution of the novel was not my cup of tea. There were POV changes from one paragraph to the next without any indication that I am reading from another POV - which, I grant, might be due to having read a review copy. There were continuity issues that I also base on the review copy and hope were ironed out before this book went to press. Furthermore, unfortunately, there was too much tell rather than show - lengthy dialogue that contained information that could easily have been presented within the prose of the novel. Lastly, speaking of dialogue, why does nearly everyone with an accent have to "talk" in written accent?
2.5 stars rounded up to 3 - I'm hoping for a sequel
Wow, this book was so good. I don’t have much to say because i liked pretty much everything about it. Definitely would be on the look out for the next book by the author.
RJ Eason deserves a standing ovation for this awesome, entertaining, unique, story.....can you tell I loved it? THE GRAVEYARD WATCH is a police department that deals with....you got it....graveyard matters and everything that goes BUMP in the night. Even though it's urban fantasy, I got the same vibe as when I watched the old comedy Barney Miller, with a twist or two. As a debut, Eason has set the bar pretty high for the next book in the series. He expertly built his community and cast of characters to capture his target readers and have them looking for more. I would not be surprised if this book were to inspire a Netflix series.....it really is THAT good.
I really tried and enjoyed this book, I LOVE supernatural things and mystical creatures, I was satisfied on that side, it was interesting. The story was alright, the plot threaded out smoothly, the description and world were believable and I liked London painted like this. I decided to rate it so low because I did not enjoy the unnecessary cultural finger pointing.. it made the reading not enjoyable. It’s nice to include other nationalities, make character different and unique for their nationality, but reading it isn’t enjoyable, I did not need to read “English spoken French accent”, I am French myself and I know for fact that I don’t have an accent, yes it’s unique to have some characters having accents but not in dialogues, this is suppose to be a story not a fanfics…
That is what disappointed me the most in this book.. I recently learn that this is not a solo book ? I will not be continuing this series
The Graveyard Watch is an urban fantasy set in metropolitan London with heavy “noir” film vibes and a fun found family element.
It follows Jocasta, a pathologist that has recently been transferred to the Graveyard Watch – a police segment dedicated to supernatural cases. While Jocasta is human, everyone around her is not, and we follow her as she adapts to her new strange – if not eccentric – colleagues and unravels a supernatural mystery.
The book is pitched as an urban fantasy romance, but I personally found that the romance took a backburner to the mystery elements of the plot. This is because, aside from Jocasta’s POV as she falls for the handsome captain, we also get a lot of chapters from the POV of Domingo, the department chief.
They are very different people with very different quests. This So, though their stories intermingle in regard to the mystery, they barely interact in each other’s POVs. This kind of created a disconnect to me as it felt like I was reading a different book every time we switched between the POVs. And we switch POVs a lot.
In a single chapter, we can go from Jocasta to Domingo to some random, nameless passer by in the scene, back to Domingo, back to Jocasta. This makes for a confusing experience, especially in the last third of the book where it was the most common. I remember a chapter where we had 3 paragraphs from Jocasta, maybe 5 from Domingo, then back to Jocasta suddenly.
Eason also likes to write chapters from the POV of nameless, external characters that are witnessing events of the plot. Oftentimes, these scenes are of little importance to the actual story, which adds to my disorientation. However, in Eason’s defense, I actually liked these segments and found them fun. The author explores different members of the world they built that fit funny archetypes or show interesting perspectives. You can definitely sense the love, and care, put into the book during these scenes.
Otherwise, the descriptions are well-done, and the characters are fun to read about, if not a bit tropey. The dialogue especially flowed amazingly, and never got awkward. Unfortunately, I couldn’t get fully invested in it, but I can see this book becoming someone else’s safe space, so it’s definitely worth a try.
Thank you to NETGalley and R.J. Eason for providing me with an eArc copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.
This book is Supernatural meets Buffy the Vampire Slayer meets Ocean's Eleven and it all meshes so well with each other. We learn everything through Jocasta's point of view, and you feel like your one step behind Will and Sebastien but you get there. I was gasping and freaking out and I could picture all of it. Revenge is playing a role, and it is best served cold. Also, think outside the box, and you never know where you'll end up. There were a few characters with similar names that confused me, but overall, really good!
I even recommended this to my husband! It's a good one!
An intriguing and gripping story, I loved the characters and can't wait to read more by this author.
Initial thoughts… CSI meets mythical creatures a.k.a. crime fighting crew of the undead/otherworldly.
The characters were all from relatively different parts of Europe. Not a big buildup on the individual character backgrounds but it didn’t hurt the story. Some characters have written accents and some don’t… I will leave that to you to decide if you like that or not.
Takes place in London. Along the River Thames. With both human and mythical creatures.
The timeline of the book is set in the present as well as the past. With the past being Domingo’s story that leads up to the present day situation. I wasn’t sure how this would pan out when I first started reading. But about 25% of the way through I found myself fully invested in the story and wanting to know what would happen next and how the story would end.
Jocasta is the only female/human on the team. Sebastia, is most definitely a favorite, especially with his love for coffee. Will is your strong silent type. Domingo is the crew leader you know the one who always does things that may or may not be shady.
Overall, I truly liked The Graveyard Watch. I almost wish this were a series. Perhaps where the book is told with each of the characters essentially being the lead of their own book.
GENERAL INFO
The Graveyard Watch- a standalone
Year Pub/Re Pub: 2/1/24, Read 2/1/24
Book's cover: very dark, murky London
Format: eBook, 320 pages
Source: Thanks to NetGalley and Small Bear Books Ltd for this ARC🩶! I voluntarily give my honest review and all opinions expressed are my own.
Setting: London
Genre: paranormal, mystery, urban fantasy
Tropes: supernatural creatures(vampires/werewolves/gnomes), crime investigation, law enforcement, office romance
HEA/HFN ending: HFN
Epilogue Included: yes
BOOK DESCRIPTION
Synopsis/Plot Summary: Jocasta is new to the graveyard watch. She's a pathologist from Uni College Hospital hired to police the undead. She doesn't know her coworkers are supernatural, but they all investigate art theft and 3 dead people exsanguinated. Her and her captain, Will Everly, have a very Jim/Pam relationship, but Will makes his move much sooner.
M/F-M/M-M/M/F-etc: M/F
Representation: POC, LGBTQIIA+
Flashbacks: There are two timelines with Domingo in the past being hired to create the ICPO, and Jocasta in the present starting a new job with a bunch of weirdos.
Jealy/Possy/OTT H/h : Will is a little jealous when John Colt asked Jocasta out.
Amount of Sex In The Book: kissing and off page sexy time w/ Jocasta and Will
CHARACTER DESCRIPTION
Commander Domingo de Torres- a 100+ yrs vampire, looking for who/what killed his family.
Captain Will Everly - an elemental sylph, wind god
Jocasta Lewis-a human pathologist who didn't get promoted, and was assigned to the graveyard watch
Sebastien-a gay French werewolf whose accent and sense of humor offered comic relief
Bucky-gnome forensics expert
H /h RELATIONSHIP INFO
OW/OM/Exes: n/a
AUTHOR OVERVIEW: R.J. Easton-debut author
PERSONAL OVERVIEW
Overall Rating: 4
Do You Recommend This Book: yes
Will You Re-read This Book: yes
Would You Read More Books by this Author: yes
COMMENTS/NOTES: I liked Jocasta's inner monologues and accepting the graveyard watch's paranormal species. I liked London being a character that set the tone and feel of the mysteries. I got a bit confused with the timelines and switching POVs within the same chapter. It happened a lot with Domingo and Jocasta with the past and present. Sebastien and Heinrich's accents were a little distracting, but they didn't have much dialogue to make sense of. I loved Jocasta and Will's relationship and I would definitely read more novels in this world.