Thank you for giving me access to the first 3 chapters of the book. I enjoyed scene setting, with plenty of characters description, her work and the feeling of being laid off and hopeless in the current world of 21st century, not meeting the expectations of oneself from childhood. The impulsive decision to travel somewhere seems like a good plot device. I think the main character can be relatable to a Millennial living in a city.

Main feedback is that the book needs more proofreading and editing e.g. the second consultant was supposed wear jeans and two sentences later "her leather trousers squeaking together" or misspelled "S ephora t o t ru Brazillian H oneubronze G low".

As for the writing style, it's easy to digest, the story flows well. I'm looking forward to reading the rest of the book.

Just a warning that this is a sampler! It only includes the first three chapters. It is engaging and gives you a first bite of what seems like a fascinating novel.

The sampler is a great insight into the book and into the relationships of the characters, looking forward to the release.