“Stay here with me. She never imagined anyone would share the desire or ask it of her.”

The writing was beautiful and I appreciate the research that probably went into the writing because it shows. However, the pacing of the book is what got me. This took me a while to get through. I often found myself reading chapters then stopping then having a hard time coming back. And to be honest, I did not finish this book in time before it expired on Netgalley.

Yuki - with the multiple POVs I felt like she got lost in the story. I felt the prologue wasn’t needed and could have been condensed in the story. Her attraction to Ryu did make me sad as if they were pitted for failure (again didn’t finish but please let me know).

World building - it wasn’t as confusing, but the different realms and jumps could have been fleshed out more.

I was expecting a page turner and this wasn’t it for me

I dearly wanted to love the story as much as the cover, but the writing is oddly modern given the pseudo historical setting. However, I could see young anime fans enjoying the exploits of a young swordmaster and her punk teen pupil on a quest to preserve the family dojo and fight supernatural threats.

So, I will be completely honest. I did not finish this book. Not to say it was particularly a bad book. It had all the promising an adventure filled with mythology and potentially engaging characters. I just felt like it was missing something. I could feel the authors heart beating within the story and main character but some key elements like the character development and cohesiveness were missing it.
It just didn’t engage me enough to finish it.
I am for sure in my DNFing era where I won’t force myself to finish a book. Not to say this is a bad book per se but it just wasn’t engaging to me particularly. I honestly would tell people to give this book a chance if it’s something that interests you. Don’t let me dnfying it turn you away from it.
Every person should give every story a chance. One person couldn’t like it, and someone else would love it. So that’s why my rating kind of fell in the middle. Because honestly, it could’ve went either way, but with time running out on my copy, I wanted to move onto other stories that I was more interested in reading.
I would like to thank the folks at NetGalley for allowing me a copy of this book. I really do appreciate the chance to read the story

The story itself is pretty good, I like the yokai and god themes. However it feels a bit like the author tried to put every little thing she knows about Japanese culture into the book so sometimes it appeares a bit forced. Also I'd prefer a gloassary or footnotes for the Japanese terms instead of them being described directly in the text, first because of the flow, second to reread it when I forgot the meaning after like 50 pages.

As most others, I was drawn to this books beautiful cover and interesting sounding premise. To my surprise and excitement, I was given an eARC to review. Now, probably surprisingly, I have a hard time reading through all my ARCs. I feel nervous that the books will be a waste of time or I won't enjoy them. So while scrolling through all the ARCs I have to choose from, I decided to look up the reviews for this one.

Much to my surprise, I right away learned that this Asian inspired story is being written by a white woman. I don't think it's impossible for her to do research and tell a compelling story, but it also immediately turned me off. If I am going to be learning about culture and mythology, I would rather if be from a person who grew up with these beliefs and stories. That was definitely a big turn off from me. The next point is that many of the reviews either DNF the book, or mentioned how slow the story moved and how impersonal the main characters felt.

With all of these points, I have decided not to read this book. The cover is gorgeous, and I admire anyone who has the courage and mindset to write and publish a book, but if I want to read an Asian inspired book, I have about ten unread ones from various Asian authors that I would rather pick up.

I will mark this a neutral 3 stars as I can not give an opinion about the book, but rather my feelings regarding it.

Woven Song weaves Asian mythology into an epic tale of love and loss, of loyalty and betrayal — where love is as soft as a lullaby, secrets are currency for the wicked, and every friend might be a foe.
Thank you NetGalley, Rachael Krotec, and Nib and Feather, LLC for the eARC of this book.

Woven Song by Rachael Krotec is a YA fantasy inspired by Asian mythology.
After reading the blurb, the concept sounded absolutely amazing. Unfortunately, I feel like the execution is quite lacking.
I think the story is quite interesting but I cannot speak for accuracy of the folklore, setting, or use of the honorifics.

Writing is where this novel significantly lacks in my opinion.
From the get-go, I think the writing style is quite monotone. The characters and descriptions of settings felt flat and the flow of the story was choppy, for the lack of a better term.

Again, my main issue with this standalone is mainly the poor execution of a seemingly great concept. If you are looking for works based on various Asian mythology, this is not the one I would recommend.

I liked the idea behind Woven Song and that it was based on Japanese mythology, but it fell a bit flat for me. I think teenage girls with an interest in Asian mythology are definitely the target audience for this book... although I love YA Asian Mythology, so maybe not?

Thank you, NetGalley, and Nib and Feather LLC, for an advanced copy of Woven Song by Rachael Krotec in exchange for an honest review.

Since I've been watching a few C&K Dramas set in fantasy worlds, I've been really intrigued to find some books that immersed me in the same worlds. It's not something I see much of and I have been really enjoying them. So, when I found this one I thought I definitely needed to give it a go!

I found the writing style very different to what I am used to reading and so it took me a little while to get into the book. I really had to force myself to stick with it because it was something new. But, I am glad I did because it was a good story but maybe had a few pacing issues, which is not uncommon in fantasy stories.

So, we follow the adventures of the moon goddess who comes to earth to find some sort of connection by interacting with mortals. It's a great tale about someone who just wants to find friendship, but I felt that there was a slight disconnect with the way the story was told which kept me from forming a connection with the main character at times.

Overall, I still enjoyed this read and can see a lot of potential for future books.

Unfortunately this book ended up being one that I did not finish. The author has an absolutely beautiful way with words, but the pacing and dramatic tonal shifts made the story rather difficult to want to follow. The middle section of the book really began to drag for me, and it became so difficult to want to pick the book back up. In the future, I think more concise editing would make this author's work more enjoyable!

A asian mythology inspired fantasy story with romance. The story follows Yuki, a young woman was banished and framed for murder but is determined to restore her family's dojo. She meets the dragon god Ryu and soon finds herself thrown in a struggle between her mortal world and her divine world. The story itself felt all over the place and I am going to be honest and just say I didn't really vibe with the book and didn't have all that fun of a time reading it. I love asian mythology and inspired fantasies, but this one just kind of missed the mark for me. The characters weren't all that well developed and I just didn't find myself all that invested in the characters or their stories.

Title: "The Woven Song"

Author: Rachael Krotec

Rating: 3/5

"The Woven Song" offers a reading experience with its own unique rhythm, and while it faces some challenges, it ultimately provides an engaging and very satisfying journey!

The book's pacing and engagement vary, particularly between its two halves.
The initial chapters are slower and more intricate, which may take some time for readers to fully immerse themselves in. However, this careful setup pays off in the latter half, where the story picks up momentum and becomes more compelling, leading to a gratifying ending.

Character development gives me some mixed feeling in this novel...
Yuki, who initially appears as a very likable character, unfortunately doesn't grow as much as I hoped.
On the other hand, Ryu emerges as a standout character, very rich in depth and expression!

By the second half, I found myself increasingly attached to the characters and invested in their outcomes.
The book's ambition to tackle various themes and plot lines does make it feel a bit busy at times, leading to a sense of confusion early on.
The story's complexity can be challenging, but it becomes more easy to comprehend and follow as it progresses.
Once you get used to the writing style and the story's structure, the narrative flow improves significantly, making the overall reading experience more enjoyable.

In conclusion, "The Woven Song" may require a bit of patience in the beginning, but it rewards readers with a more dynamic and engaging second half!

Despite some areas for improvement in pacing and character development, the book ultimately delivers a satisfying and memorable story.

I'm sure readers who like Japanese and Chinese mythology will enjoy it!

Thank you to Netgalley and Rachael Krotec for giving me the opportunity to read her novel and submerge myself into Asian mythology and culture!

What I liked
1. The author's style led to an almost fairytale-like vibe to the overall story
2. The idea of a goddess who does not know that they are a goddess is just incredibly interesting
3. The Japanese mythos inspiration within the book was very good at pulling me in.
What didn't work as well for me?
1. The pacing for Woven Song felt incredibly off with the first fourth feeling far too slow and the last fourth moving so quickly it felt unbalanced.
2. The multiple Points of view structure wasn't particularly cohesive or smooth in its transitions.
3.The Arc edition I read had a few too many editing issues for me to fully recommend the title. I did enjoy it enough that I will give the finished copy a read to see if these are handled in that version.
who I would recommend this title for
Woven Song by Rachael Krotec will be an enjoyable read for fantasy fans looking for non-western inspired settings and mythological settings such as those in the daughter of the moon goddess.

honestly speaking i dont know how this flopped. this had a well thought out plot but it was horribly executed that led to the overall reading experience being marred by the evident need for thorough editing and refinement.

one of the main drawbacks of the book is its inconsistency in pacing and engagement. the initial half of the book is inexplicably dull, which failed to intrigue me. however, the latter demonstrates improvement, with a more engaging storyline and a satisfactory resolution. despite this improvement, the presence of numerous grammatical errors such as calling momo-chans whiskers 'whispers', and the change in sentence tense, detracts from the overall quality of the writing

character development is another issue. while yuki initially was a likable character, her lack of substantial development throughout the story is disappointing. moreover, her transformation towards the end feels abrupt and unconvincing, particularly in the context of her acquisition of divine powers, which felt like a barbie princess gala makeover. the transition between scenes and character emotions is jarring, lacking proper coherence and continuity. dont get me wrong, but one second someones smiling, a dialogue later the character is crying.

daisuke is one of the more compelling characters in the book, yet like yuki, he suffers from a lack of meaningful development. the potential for engaging interactions between yuki and daisuke remains unexplored, with their relationship depicted through simplistic time lapses rather than meaningful moments of growth and connection. e.g i wouldve wanted scenes with yuki teaching daisuke and their whole learning experience in the dojo. also, masato's character arc feels incomplete, depriving readers of the closure he deserves. (view spoiler)

ryu saved me from giving this book a 1 star. his character had more intimacy and more expression. allowing me to relate to him more. his relationship with yuki wasnt satisfactory to me, id rather wouldve wanted him to reconnect with his siblings more towards the end.

i noticed some innacuracies in the honorifics [mr. usagi san] however i dont have a drop of japanese in me nor am i fimilar with the culture and customs, hence i dont have much say on this.

feel free to read this book for yourself! thank you netgalley and the publisher for the arc

This is a story of a girl who has forgotten that she’s the Japanese goddess of the moon, the mortals she calls family, and the divine war she cannot escape.

This was an interesting book, although it wasn’t until the second half that I found myself intrigued. The writing style wasn’t my favorite - I prefer novels that build more connections between the reader and the characters, but this felt a bit distant - and while the setup portion of the book was important, it felt like it took a long time to get to the meat of the story.

However, I loved the focus on Japanese mythology, and not only did I enjoy the resolution, it was also very satisfying to find out what happened to all the characters years down the line.

This book took awhile to work through for me. I loved the aspect of Japanese mythology thrown in but the story just seemed to fall flat for me. Yuki doesn't meet the Ryu for a hot minute and so much yet so little happens. I had high hopes for this novel and was surprised to be let down.

Thank you NetGalley for this arc in exchange for my honest review!

Rating 2.5 stars

This book was not what I expected. I started off really liking the book. Even though the pacing was kind of slow, I liked the cozy, historical feel to it. It gave me “Rurouni Kenshin” type of feeling in a sense of a swordsman trying to find their place in the world. In this novel it is about Yuki Tachibana, a swordsman, coming home after being exiled for four years. There is a lot of history and emotion behind her return. We find out that she was exiled due to a conviction in the disappearance of her childhood friend, Hina Kabayashi. However, not everything is what it seems and the truth behind the disappearance slowly unravels into something more magical and wicked.

I really liked Yuki’s character in the beginning. Her hopes were very simple, but relatable. All she wanted was to feel accepted and to be surrounded by family and friends. I loved how hard she worked to rebuild her family reputation and to restore her family dojo. The characters she meets along the way and the found family she slowly surrounds herself with was so well-done. I especially loved the mentor-student relationship between Yuki and Daisuke. Although it started off rough, a mutual respect slowly develops between the two through their shared past experiences. However, I felt the writing and character developments took a complete turn once the secrets slowly start to unravel, which is a shame, because that is when all the Asian mythology and action occur.

In terms of the writing, the transition between multiple POV felt disjointed. A lot of the plot and relationship development seem to happen off scene, and when we do find out about it, it is more telling in the form of an inner monologue than showing. There are also a lot of subplots happening. We are introduced to the Gods, we discover the moon goddess, there is still the mystery of the disappearance of Hina, and on top of that there is a fight to save the mortal realm. Although they do eventually connect, the subplots are very underdeveloped and the conflicts are resolved rather quickly, leaving an unsatisfying feeling. There is also a romance, but it is very insta-love, instead of a natural development. As for the characters, they started off with such promise, but then ended up being one-dimensional. Again, it has a lot to do with the fact that we don’t see their gradual growth. We see them go through a significant event, but in the next paragraph/chapter, they have already moved on. We never see the struggle or reflection, making it hard to connect or care for the characters. Also, the characters seem to be inconsistent. One scene that stuck with me was when it was suggested that Yuki’s father had something to do with the disappearance of Hina. I was surprise that Yuki, who greatly admired her father, wasn’t angry or defensive about the accusation. Instead, she calmly accepted it, and the story moved on. These inconsistencies continue throughout the second half of the novel, making it confusing and a struggle to read.

I really had a hard time getting through this book. Mostly because it was hard to understand the overall purpose of this novel. I felt like there was two different stories happening, because the fantasy portion happened so late and it had such a different vibe and direction than what was set up in the beginning. If the main focus was the fantasy, then I think it would have been better if it was introduced earlier on so more time can be spent on the development of the characters and the plot lines. Although I appreciate the Asian culture and mythology weaving in the story, it unfortunately missed the mark for me, which is a shame because this book had such interesting premise.

Thank you Netgalley and publisher for the advanced copy in exchange for an honest review.

Thank You Netgalley, Nib and Feather, LLC, and Rachael Krotec for the ARC digital copy. Release date 6/7/2024. The cover is beautifully done. I was interested into this book because of the Asian Mythology aspect. I don't know a lot about any Mythology so I thought a YA would be a great start. It was slooow, however when the action was happening it was happening hard. I had a hard time with the going hard action and then everyday life. However this is a good book. It was long so I hate to say this but I wanted more descriptive information. I would love to see this go to Audio.

I would say this book is definitely a YA title. Its writing leans more a young crowd. But that isn't to say I did not enjoy the book. The action scenes were amazing and the themes throughout the book were great.

Thank you to the publisher and NetGalley for the ARC.

Woven Song is about the Moon Goddess falling from the moon and thinking she is mortal. It seems that disaster follows her and she is exiled from her home after being convicted of kidnapping/killing her friend. The friend's brother recanted his accusation to the Emperor after four years so Yuki returns home.

I really enjoy reading East Asian mythology and Woven Song had plenty. I gave four stars since I felt that there could have been more detail within the story. Some parts felt like a highlighted summary when it would have been interesting to really live through the character.

wow! what to say? let me first start off by saying in no way do i mean to be insulting. thank you to netgalley for the arc, and i <i>really</i> hoped i’d enjoy it because my experience so far with fantasy arcs have not been the best. spoiler alert: no. just no.

this book, to put it mildly, lacks direction. woven song is a novel that, despite it’s ambitions (and excellent cover art), ultimately fails to deliver a compelling story. it’s awfully inconsistent, meandering off-course in the middle of the story in such a way that leaves you confused on what krotec is attempting to do; certain parts just lack coherent pacing at all. what is supposed to be an action fantasy romance (or certainly feels like one from the synopsis) turns into something that feels more like a daily slice-of-life featuring some fantasy elements, set in ancient japan. on top of that, anything that could’ve been of substance is offscreen- i’m shown the resolution of many problems, but never the <u>process</u>. i can’t bring myself to be emotionally invested when so much of these characters’ journey is never shown. i don’t have a grasp of them, or what makes them tick: what i have is what only the story chooses to tell me. and what the story tells me, unfortunately, is not enough to make me love this.

because the story shows us only the characters as they are after they’ve bonded with each other (most prominently yuki and daisuke), i find myself hard-pressed to say that i’ve seen much of any character development at all. when you cut the entire process of a character beginning to open up and lower their guard in the face of affection, it just feels like an abrupt 180 change. the potential these characters could’ve had is hampered by the fact that we see absolutely none of their gradual change at all. characters like these come across as flat and one-dimensional. found family is found family, i’ll enjoy it all the same, but it feels insubstantial when all krotec does is establish her characters, plop them into my hands, and label them as family with none of their struggles illustrated. their journey is, for lack of better word, superficial- missing the depth to really make it compelling, especially the main character <strong>yuki.</strong> supporting characters are similarly underdeveloped, serving more as convenient plot devices rather than fully realised individuals.

woven song goes really hard on the themes of self-realisation and transformation, and while i did like the idea of a kami becoming human in theory before finding her real forgotten self, these themes feel heavy-handed. monologues about true identity and rightful places are thrown around but the lack of characterisation, as i mentioned, dampens their impact. these themes are hammered home in a way that feels slightly repetitive instead of being natural- and i really, really hate to say it, but the lack of subtlety detracts from the emotional impact of the writing.

going off the synopsis alone, you go into this expecting flowy, fantastical writing, a lush and descriptive plot that takes influence from traditional mythology and renders it almost tenderly in a way that feels like a folktale. what you get is not always what you imagined. given the themes it attempts to tackle, woven song surprisingly lacks emotional resonance; it fails to invoke the emotions in me that i can see krotec intended to. it’s abundantly clear that this really could’ve been an engaging read: the premise is beautiful, and it’s going to pull in many readers. but it’s burdened by a weak plot, cardboard cutouts of characters, and a lack of emotional connection.

(i’ve seen some people say that the honourifics in this story are not accurate, and the cultural elements are highly inconsistent. i’m not japanese nor do i know much about japanese customs, so i won’t speak on this, but i’m happy to discuss!)