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An interesting premise that has buckets of atmosphere, however I found the overall plot very convoluted and confusing and the characters lacked depth and development. I think this really suffers from having too much content and not enough plot to run with. There's a lot of exposition, trying to build up the world and telling us how clever Shan is, but the reader doesn't ever really see this in action. In fact, Shan makes some really stupid decisions in her mission to get revenge. There's also multiple plots going on and none of them really take centre stage, meaning the story itself ends up getting lost. I liked the polyamorous romance elements, but again I found it lacked conviction and felt a bit superficial.

Some really interesting, fresh ideas for a vampire novel. However it just needed more showing not telling, more action and less talk to really have me invested.

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Not much to say about this book. I neither loved nor hated it.

I would have like have seen more of the 'Blood magic' system to understand it as its the focal point of the society in this book. Also more of the backstory of the Emperor and his family - since this is a vital part of how this society works.

Shan is my least favourite character - in her attempt to protect those she love - she is wound up so tight protecting everything that it's to her own detriment, pushing those very same people she's protecting away.

Samuel is way to good, even with the dark side to him. I'm surprised he hasn't been mugged or swindled yet, that's how good he is. To an extent you could argue he has been swindled by Shan and Isaac into their plans. But he sort of let's himself be swindled by these two.

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Mistress of Lies by K.M. is a dark fantasy the way it should be done: well built, plenty of political intrigue, morally grey protagonists, and blood magic. The world that Enright has created feels atmospheric and rich, featuring some of the best vampiric lore but making them feel unique and different. creating a secondary fantasy world rich in Filipino tradition.

The characters are arguably Mistress of Lies's greatest strength. The novel opens with a patricide com! I knew from the very first chapter, If you love messy women then this will be a a story for you! The romance , I have to mention the romantic subplot which I really enjoyed, take three complicated people with separate, often opposing goals, and push them together in a series of life-and-death situations, and you'll get the high-tension romance of Mistress of Lies. I loved everything about it, from the trans rep to the, frankly, obvious solution to the love triangle. The ending was bittersweet and intriguing, and I'm so curious to see where the sequel goes

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Mistress of Lies is the first installment in a new dark fantasy trilogy. The story features the dual POVs of Shan, Blood Worker and daughter to the disgraced Le Claire house and Samuel, orphan, Unblooded and with a dark secret. We’re following them into a dark world full of secrets and conspiracies which features a diverse cast of queer characters and blood magic!

Mistress of Lies starts off really strong. In the first chapter, we’re following Shan as she assassinates her own farther. As new head of the family, it is her goal to restore the honour to her family name and climb the ranks once more. In secret, Shan is also a spy, learning the secrets of the court and attempting to find a way to overthrow the Immortal King in the hope of improving the life of her twin brother who was born without magic. In the beginning I really liked Shan. I’m a big fan strong female characters, secret revolutions and Shan was described as clever and cunning and she clearly acted without remorse. Sadly, we mostly hear about how much of a badass she is and see very little of it reflected in the story. For an outsider, all her scheming and sneaking must’ve been fairly obvious, for the reader it often felt quite unbelievable. She is not as clever as she thinks she is and even though she often talks about overthrowing the king, she clearly does not care much about revolution and improving the life of the unmagical population (apart from her twin brother and even that I sometimes questioned). I want to believe the author did this on purpose to show her true personality, but if not, I lose even the rest of my interest in her as a character.

On the other side of the story we have Samuel, a poor orphan with a dark secret: he can do magic even more dangerous and rare than blood magic. After meeting Shan and finding out about his previously unknown family, he easily gets swept up in her ideas for revolution and improving the life of the poorer population. Samuel has a bit of a “damsel in distress” vibe to him and while it was really refreshing to see this with reversed genders, I never felt for him. He clearly has the heart in the right place but he was painfully naive at times. Turns out an unironic “damsel in distress” vibe doesn’t work for any gender.

Let’s get to the story and the world: a cutthroat world, a murder mystery and an attempt to overthrow a corrupt government sounds great but I again was not convinced by the execution. We sadly do not see a lot of the world and the magic in it. Blood Magic sounds really cool and I like the author’s take on “vampires” but a lot just wasn’t explained here. I never understood how it worked and what it could do. It was the same with the world in general, we get very little explanation on how life, culture and politics in it work. Concerning the actual plot, we spend a painfully low amount of time on the actual murder investigation which was incredibly frustrating. We also see a big communication problem between the important characters of this story as there are quite a few people who work towards the same goal (or pretend to work towards the same goal) and they actually could’ve been successful if they would’ve just talked to each other! A lot of the personal struggles the characters revolved around their respective romantic lives. I was excited about the poly rep in this, but I wished the author would’ve went slower on the romance as especially Samuel’s thoughts and actions mainly revolved around his attraction to the other two characters and gave him little room for more personality.

Overall, this book sadly did not work for me. A lot of the tropes in this sounded interesting and fun but the execution didn’t work. At lot of things get described and hinted at but were not reflected in the actual plot and character actions. I’d rate this 2.25 stars.

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Mistress of Lies is an exhilarating read filled with suspense, betrayal, and unexpected twists. K. M. Enright masterfully crafts a gripping narrative that keeps you on the edge of your seat from beginning to end. The protagonist is strong and complex, navigating a web of deceit with wit and courage. Enright's attention to detail in world-building and character development brings the story to life, making it hard to put down. A must-read for fans of thrilling, mystery-driven stories! Highly recommended!

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NOT TO BE DRAMATIC BUT WHAT WAS THAT ENDING. Furious with the author i had 13 percent left and went there will be a book 2 cause they cant fix this. I enjoyed the sub plot romance, i enjoyed shan teaching samuel. I feel like we could have seen more investigation, and just things being done rather then discussed. Shan trying to do everything to help but getting it wrong, shes doing her best and what she thinks shes best i hope in book 2 shell spread the load and discuss more especially with Anton. I did not see the alessi twist coming . 4 star but this feels slightly unfair as i feel like im hitting a book slump so struggled but i continuously loved it when i was reading it.

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This was sadly just not for me. I was really looking forward to reading this, but sadly I feel pretty disappointed. Everything just felt flat, and I couldn't get alone with either Shan or Samuel's POVs. This book is really just a lot of telling and not showing, and honestly I felt bored? I didn't understand the worldbuilding (of which there was very little), I didn't understand the magic system... just overall very disappointing.

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I give this book 3.5 stars.

I was very excited for this book however for me it fell short. I wouldn't say it was an erotic book for example.
This book felt like it was originally written for a younger audience and then adult aspects thrown in as an afterthought.
I enjoyed the actual story. If it was written differently it has 4-5 star potential.

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This was an intriguing read! I loved the magic system and the decadent world and politics, the characters were layered and flawed and intriguing. There was the occasional lull in pace which pulled my rating down, but the final act was exciting and I am looking forward to the sequel

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I LOVED this. I took a while getting into it as I learned more about the blood working magic in the setting, and what the motivations and dreams for each of the main characters were. I was shocked by the twists and turns along the way, and the shocking betrayals! I loved the trans rep in the book and how casually it was treated in universe, with a great explanation for how trans people could medically transition and have the hormones they needed. The three main characters were all really well-written and I loved their connection to each other. I can’t wait for more by this author, especially the next book in this series!

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♟️Rating:1/5⭐
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To put it simply, the execution of this book is so bad that the French had to bring back the guillotine in order to execute someone properly. The funny thing is, I read this book during the ‘very demure’ trend and some of my friends know I absolutely hate that trend. The culprit for my vendetta towards the demure trend? This book. I genuinely wanted to love this book because the Prologue started off strong but that was only the good part.

Let's start off with Shan who needs to act very demure and very mindful but she isn't acting demure and mindful in real life. But at times she can't act demure and mindful because she needs to be confident and cold to people. I think you get the idea. Every time I see demure or demur, a part of me just lost It. We’re constantly being told her brilliant and cunning Shan is but we don’t actually get to see that. This book has a very serious issue of telling instead of showing (will talk more about the writing style later on). Anyways, I feel like the first chapter started off so strong where Shan killed her father, the author struggled to let Shan develop. I honestly wished we could see how Shan established her network which we were repeatedly told how important it was to Shan but the information she received weren’t cleverly used in the novel at all. Why is that so you may ask? Because Shan was busy partying away like the nobles during the French revolution! But guess what Shan has a plan, or rather concepts of a plan. I find her absolutely frustrating because her plans were extremely naive even though she claimed she had thought long and hard about it. I also find her actions contradicting at times, considering how she abhor the novelty and want to change it but she has done absolutely nothing to change the current state except for some vague reference to let Samuel sit on the throne instead. This brings me to the next point, even the French knows that a mere change in ruler won’t change anything. And is that the end of her plan? YEP THAT’S IT! There are no in between steps as to how she would actually carry it out, she just got the spirit. Even though Shan was repeatedly challenged by others for her monarchist view and ‘concepts of a plan’, she still refused to change her POV or character. I just can’t stand her blind her character is and how there’s no real consequences to her actions.

Moving on to Samuel, who is bland, naive and innocent. Yep, that’s all you need to know. He cares for the people because he used to be one of the unblooded until it turned out he was from a rich family and had magical powers. But what did he do next? Of course, partied the night away instead of coming up with reforms for his people and became sad when the unblooded still didn’t get their rights. I’m sorry Samuel but you need to get a grip.

Issac and Anton were the more interesting characters and I honestly would have loved to witness the story from Anton’s POV instead. He just provides the delicate balance of the division in this book and he’s actually doing something behind the scenes unlike Samuel or Shan. I won’t say much about Issac but he’s just the better one in the trio. I also preferred the dynamic between Issac and Samuel then Shan with the both of them. However even though I say that Issac had the potential to carry the book, the ending was so rushed that his character just fell flat near the end.

The characters had like insta love and to be honest, I can’t be bothered again. I’m sorry babes but the country is in shambles, I don’t think you guys should be throwing parties so often just to meet up.

The plot was super draggy in the middle and the ending was super rushed. A lot of the time spent in the book was spent on going to more parties, bars or some other forms of socialising activity. We didn’t get to see much of the investigation plot or reap much insights from those one-two investigation trips. To be honest, the actual murderer was hinted super early in the book and going by my fantasy common sense, it didn’t take me long to deduce who was the actual murderer. I couldn’t be bothered if I’m honestly speaking. We didn’t get to see much worldbuilding at all. Even though I’m done with the books, I still don’t have a solid understanding of how the magic system works except for some vague rules. Like what’s the limit of the blood working? Why did Shan not throw up drinking Samuel’s blood during the second and third times? There are lots of unanswered questions and plot holes here and there. Also, this book does not contain vampires, it’s just blood working. (Slightly off tangent, but that one scene where Issac drew Samuel’s blood made me cringe so hard) Even though other countries were mentioned, like they banned blood working and they hate the Eternal King, we don’t actually know the actual causes of it.

Moving on to the writing style, there's a lot of telling instead of showing. We are constantly being told how the characters feel and act. Some of the descriptions came off weirdly as well like “fragile, brittle thing” or “looking utterly and totally alone”. Please stop, especially with the something, something thing. I lost it when the phrase ‘literally growled’ came up. I think this part does not need any further elaboration. I honestly feel that this book can go through a few more rounds of editing before being published.

In conclusion, the only feminine rage witnessed in this book is my own feminine rage towards this book. I desperately tried to love it because of the premise and introduction of this book. However, I’m not reading the sequel and I want my time back.

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i couldn't just get it and pass this YA book. Yes, it is marked as Adult, but for me, this is just a YA trying to appeal to the adult audience and failing to deliver it; the characters are just plain and dull. From the beginning, I was rolling my eyes so hard that I forced myself to stop several times just to breathe and continue with the story. The MCs are just quite the opposite of what they described to be or just kinda "dumb" to say something and then be so easily manipulated. this did not help te plot creating a narrative very boring

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Mistress of Lies truly had an intriguing premise but really struggled from being too obviously descriptive.

Now, it started very Shakespearean, patricide for power, sounds familiar right? Add in some vampires and blood magic and you should be onto a winner. But this did read like a debut and could have done with a little more polishing. As someone with a huge love of powerful descriptive fantasies, I think this is where it fell flat for me. This won't be the case for everyone but I would have just liked a little more, the descriptors that we did have were delicious and I just wanted a bit more of that.

HOWEVER, I bloody love the LGBTQ+ representation in this and I think it was done well (as a cis-bi woman) but others may have different opinions.

Thank you for an eARC in exchange for an honest review.

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The book started out strong, but I fear that the characters werent as strong as they were supposed to be.
For someone so inclined to be a heartless ruler, our FMC is still too sensitive. For someone hating the rich and powerful so much, our MMC is quite easy to manipulate. So much so, that the book got quite boring in the first half. Characters that don't stay true to their beliefs, that change their opinions so easily and get carried away so easily arent that compelling to me. Turns out, a bit of money and someone hot is enough to shake someones whole personality.
I unfortunately wasnt able to finish, might try to continue reading in the spooky months, but Im not very convinced its worth my time.

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Thank you to NetGalley and to the publisher Orbit for the digital ARC, it has not affected my honest review.

TW: murder, patricide, gore, blood magic, body manipulation, sexual content, racism, classism, references to rape

Mistress of Lies is set in a truly brutal world where Blood Workers- people who can control and manipulate blood magic- reign supreme and those who are Unblooded are little more than cattle to be fed upon. Ruling over all is the Eternal King, a vampire of ancient lineage with no heirs surviving. Shan LeClaire is the daughter of a disgraced Blood Worker, and having spent her time establishing a second life among the Unblooded as the information trader Sparrow, only one problem remains: her father. To protect her brother, Shan assassinates her father and takes her rightful place at the head of the LeClaire family. She wants to destroy the regime that her family’s legacy is built upon, even if that means killing the immortal King in the process, but she’s missing one key part of her plan, a way to gain access to the King. Samuel Hutchinson is Unblooded and wants it to stay that way even as he struggles in the slums. He has a terrible gift, the ability to weave people’s minds to his wants with words, and any use of it will lead to his execution by the Blood Workers. However, after Samuel discovers the first victim of a serial killer, he is pulled into the world of the court- having discovered he is the last remaining family of the Eternal King. Aided by Shan, Samuel soon has to adjust to this new violent, backstabbing court lifestyle even as she prepares herself to manipulate him into aiding her. Alongside Isaac, the King’s right hand and a figure from Shan’s past, Samuel is asked to search for the killer before they can strike again, despite his growing feelings for both Shan and Isaac. Caught between Shan’s plans for revenge, Samuel’s doubts about his abilities and Isaac’s desperate need to be respected, the three of them crash together in desire- but as Samuel realises what this new life will cost him, he has to decide if the survival of their nation is worth his damnation.

This is such a brilliantly plotted and tense piece of fantasy fiction, set in a cutthroat world of Filipino vampire-like figures and the humans they use as glorified cattle. Shan is ruthless from the first page, murdering her father and taking his place after years of planning. I loved how she shifted between the two versions of herself and even if she wants happiness, she can’t risk her plans being ruined. Her relationship with her brother is a powerful motivator for Shan but at the same time she’s never forgotten the way she’s been treated for looking different due to her mother’s race. She’s brutal and brilliant, flirtatious but impossible to get a grip on. Samuel, by comparison, is incredibly damaged and sensitive so when he’s thrown into the world of nobility he’s completely out of his depth. I really enjoyed getting to read his gradual understanding of just how terrible his new life is, even as he unintentionally becomes part of the King’s wider plans- and as a weapon for Shan to use against the King. I wish we’d seen more of Isaac and had some of his perspective, his relationships with both Shan and Samuel are both so important to the plot. He’s absolutely ruining himself in order to be recognised and appreciated properly and I can’t wait to see how that might go further in the second book. I really enjoyed how casually diverse this story was as well, and the fact that Isaac is trans was so well written. I love politically motivated, morally grey books and “Mistress of Lies” is exactly what I wanted, with the added benefit of polyamory and a brilliant world where even the “good” people have to become terrible to survive.

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Mistress of Lies was an interesting fantasy with political and mystery elements and engaging - if not always likeable - characters.

It's set in a world of noble bloodworkers and common Unblooded people, with growing tension between the two escalated by a string of grisly murders. I found the world building to be an intriguing take on vampires and blood magic.

Our three main characters - Shan, Samuel and Issac - are all complex characters, with an exploration of their differing relationships with power (both magical and political) in particular. Their MMF relationship was an interesting dynamic, though I do wish it had been explored a little more.

I did find the central murder mystery a little lacking, mainly because the plot and the characters spend very little time actually looking into the mystery.

Overall though, would recommend for anyone looking for romantasy with a more political/ mystery bend or a new take on vampires.

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A dark and dramatic fantasy that did some very interesting things with the typical romantasy tropes - I very much appreciated the inclusivity of the world. I'm reserving judgement on the plot until I see how the second book pans out, but it certainly left me wanting to read more!

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From the first page, i was immediately immersed in the world. we have amazing morally grey characters, blood magic, vampires, murder, sibling dynamics, and a great MMF romance.

while i loved a lot of aspects about this, i was a little disappointed by the murder mystery plot. i felt like that should have been fleshed out more because during a lot of the book i ended up forgetting about it! i also didn’t like something else at the end because it felt too easy! other than that, i absolutely devoured this book!
Thank you to Orbit and NetGalley for an advance copy of this book.

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Mistress of Lies is the queer dark vampire fantasy I didn’t know I needed! I was in awe from cover to cover—and I am including the cover in that assessment because look at it!! 😍

This is a story of political intrigue, cutthroat schemes, and a series of mysterious, gruesome murders. Also, messy queer people in messy queer relationships. Did you know a polyamorous love triangle allows for three times the potential heartbreak? 🥲

Shan, a young, ambitious aristocrat with a secret network of spies, and Samuel, an unknown bastard thrown into the spotlight, are tasked by the vampiric Eternal King to find the identity of a serial killer; all the while they are plotting against the king and his cruel rule.

I am definitely counting this among my all-time favourite books and I recommend it to anyone who enjoys reading about blood magic, court intrigue, and tragically flawed characters. I can’t wait for the second book, because that ending broke me! 😀

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Thank you so much to NetGalley and Orbit for an eARC of this book!

I was super excited for Mistress of Lies upon reading the synopsis earlier this year and it has been on my radar for the longest time. While I can say it met some of my expectations, it also did leave me a bit frustrated as a reader.

Mistress of Lies is a book that has an incredible world built into it that whenever we got a true glimpse at it, it enthralled me. It gives me a dark and enticing victorian vibe that I haven't really found in many other novels but rather in TV shows like Penny Dreadful. Anything relating to the blood magic and the politics was always a highlight for me and my hope for the sequel is that this is explored and fleshed out a bit more. What we do get is enticing and exciting and I wish it was more at the forefront of this book.

Where I felt the book struggled was with the balancing of plot vs character relationships. The murder mystery, which we are lead to believe initially is going to be the driving force for the plot is only peppered throughout the novel until around the 80% mark where it then needs to be wrapped up. Most of the book felt concerned with exploring the developing relationship between our three main characters and while parts of it were endearing to me I found it hard to engaged fully with Shan, Issac and Samuel. In an ideal world the main plot elements would be intertwined with the relationships but it took up such a huge part of the book that the main plot suffered for it. I do feel that with the groundwork done in this book it will allow the sequel to breathe more.

I also tended to agree with the sentiment this book does a lot of telling vs showing us certain elements about the characters. As I said this could be a teething issue when it comes to setting things up for the second book but it did get a little repetitive when whoever was narrating at the time would repeat sentiments or motivations multiple times.

Overall I enjoyed certain aspects of this book but the flaws did shine through in a way that reduced my rating. I will be checking out the sequel however as the series has promise and I hope it will learn from what worked and did not in this book.

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