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Oh my gosh! What a brilliant conclusion to this series.
Raine and her two companions have been carried into The Fault, a kind of underworld inhabited by half dead humans and monsters. They are trying to find The Queen of Feathers as Raine is convinced that she can help them return to the real world and defeat the usurper. As they travel through the fault, they learn more about how it’s not only their own country that is at stake but the whole world as all the five crowns that were keeping the world safe have fallen or been lost.
Helpfully, there is a brief synopsis of what has happened in the two previous books for those, like me, who might not remember the earlier events as clearly as we would like. This was really useful and it was also helpful in the early chapters that Raine spent some time going over the events that led the three of them into their present situation. This never felt like info dumping but seemed to arise naturally over the course of the story.
Ed McDonald’s world building is absolutely superb. The depiction of the fault and its inhabitants is so realistic that I was constantly wondering what was going to creep out of a tunnel next. The castle that was created and maintained by Maldouen was a great part of this and the luxury provided a brilliant contrast with the greyness of the rest of the Fault. I loved the villa too where Elspeth created blankets and hot water and thought this was a lovely illustration of her character. The descriptions of much of the fault were stunning but I never felt that it was overwhelming the story.
Part of the way through, the story split into two parts and we were able to see how events were happening in Harren as well as in the world of the Fault. The initial splitting of story lines was a bit of a jolt but it was fascinating seeing how this aspect of the story played out.
More so than in the previous two novels, the character of Raine really stands out. This book is really all about her and her growing control of her Sarathi powers. She is now nineteen but has seen and done so much that she appears much older. Then you get scenes where she is battling her jealousy of the growing closeness between Sanvaunt and Esher and you are reminded of how young she really is.
As the story is told purely from her point of view, we only see the other characters through her eyes which makes them less vivid in my opinion. I loved both Esher and Sanvaunt but they only exist for us in the ways that they affect Raine so we didn’t really get anything of their inner feelings. In some ways, they felt a bit like companions on an Arthurian quest, a bit mythic rather than real. It’s only a minor niggle though as Raine’s character carried me through the whole book.
The pacing of the book varies quite a bit. The first part where the three of them are trapped in the Fault is quite slow moving but once the story line splits, the pace picks up and the final quarter of the book races towards a completely satisfying conclusion which I definitely didn’t see coming. I loved how everything came together at the end even if I was a bit sad about the fate of some of the characters. Ed McDonald did a fantastic job of bringing all of the different threads of this world together in an ending that was blood soaked but also magical.
This was a brilliant finale to a great fantasy trilogy and I am very grateful to the publishers and Net Galley for allowing me to read this ARC in exchange for my honest review.

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Wow. This is a great series finale to the three books. I'll be honest here and say I wasn't particularly looking forward to it as I had really struggled with book 2, however the beauty of this book is that the stage had been set and everything was primed for an awesome finale. You had Raine and her two companions in the fault and then the witch queen in the real world. Perfectly set up. The book really shows you the good and and bad from both sides and even in Raine and how she struggles with her different sides and the best bit is it shows how love between three people can make a difference and it doesn't shy away from LGBT issues and love and indeed has a little dig at the church. Excellent work.

Without giving away too much you need to read the book and discover if Riane stays evil he she turns good, does she find the feather queen, does the one half get her power back.. or does she in fact destroy the world or save it.

So yeah go read this book it's wonderful and lots of excellent battle scenes and the magic system is very unique.

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Absolutely fantastic end to the series.
McDonald writes a brilliant mix of action, romance and heartfelt scenes.

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A brilliant thrill ride of a sequel to a powerhouse of an outstanding Books One and Two. I loved every moment of this and can't wait to see what this author next.

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This was a really solid ending to what has been a fantastic trilogy. McDonald is a very talented writer and I'm excited to see what he does next.

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