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This is a new author for me but I’ve enjoyed this taste of her voice. Characters are solid, could use more originality or depth. Plot was promising and intriguing, could be refined a bit more. Romance was a good balance of emotional and realistic!

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The Forgotten One by Catherine Bybee
The Heirs #2

This book had me up till 2am last night wanting to finish the book but knowing I would probably enjoy and remember it better if I slept a few hours instead of staying up all night. Loved it and found it a wonderful addition to the series. Can’t wait for book three!

What I liked:
* Maximillian “Max” Smith: abandoned by his mother, difficult childhood growing up in foster care and group homes, manual laborer, trust issues, big heart, caring, protective, intriguing, drawn to Sarah, really liked him
* Sarah McNeilly: journalist, researcher, honest, won’t print lies, works for a tabloid, dreams of working for big newspaper, good friend, caring, good people skills, loving family, open, drawn to Max, good with and for him
* Remembering book one with Chase, Alex, and Piper looking for their lost brother and seeing what they are doing in this book
* The way Max reacted when he was approached the first time by his half siblings
* The way Max began to open up over time and how his relationships with those in the book changed through the story
* Supporting characters and what they added to the story: Sarah’s roommate Teri, Alex’s bff Nick, Abigale who knew Max when he was tiny, Max’s workmate Jeff – wonder if he will show up later, and a few others
* The way both Max and Sarah were willing to go for what they wanted, openly and maturely communicate with one another and others, and the points in time where they said enough was enough and moved toward a brighter future in their work
* The plot, pacing, setting, and writing
* That I felt a part of the story, would be glad to be friends with more than one and was invested in the characters and outcome
* Eager to find out who Alex will end up with in the next book, how Glenn will participate going forward, and hoping that Melissa, Floyd, and others will be hit by Karma
* All of it except…

What I didn’t like:
* Who and what I was meant not to like
* Thinking about the “lost children” and how difficult so many of their lives are
* Having to wait for the next book…want to find out what happens next!

Did I like this book? Yes
Would I read more in this series? Definitely

Thank you to NetGalley and Montlake for the ARC – This is my honest review.

5 Stars

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…..I have to say I love the book covers for The Heirs series.

Oh, my goodness…..I loved this story. I loved the first book in the series and loved this just as much.
The story is about Max….he grew up in the foster system with no family. Then, his life is completely turned upside down when information is shared with him.
We also have a cute reporter, Sarah, who has a big heart and only wants to report the truth and only the truth.
I loved the chemistry between Max and Sarah.
I loved the supporting characters of Chase, Alex and Piper((from the first book)
I loved the found family theme.
The author shows us how growing up in foster care affects individuals.
I can’t wait to read the next book in the series!!!
I highly recommend reading the first book in the series. It’s a beautiful story just like this one is.

Thank you NetGalley, the publisher and author for the opportunity to read this book for my honest review. All opinions expressed are my own.

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This is a voluntary review of an advanced copy.

Oh, I have been waiting for Max's story as soon as it was revealed there was a missing heir of Aaron Stone, and his siblings were looking for him.

What I was not sure of - Sarah was assigned to find out his secrets and report on them as she is an investigative reporter. Stories with reporters can be pretty hard as they do have a job to report but at who's expense? Do they want to further their career and don't care who they trample on their way to the top? Well, I was glad to read that Sarah was very careful in her reporting and was not going to be pushed into publishing outright falsehoods and was a very conscientious reporter.

Max realizes that his life won't be the same after his story comes out and boy do you find out who true friends are when your world is shaken!

I loved the story as Max grew closer to Sarah and as he navigated the new world of riches as well as having half sister and half brother in his live. There is a great HEA and a moving family conclusion at the end so it was a very emotional and moving ending.

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This was cute. It’s second in a series but I don’t think it’s necessary to read the first before reading this one. The characters were great but I wish I felt the chemistry more. They both felt a little too cardboard for me and I was left wanting more but not in a satisfying way.

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4 stars! ✨ Okay, The Forgotten One was a fun ride, but I have to admit, I was expecting a bit more with all the buzz I had heard. 😅 That being said, it was still a solid read, and I'm already counting down the days until the next book! Big thanks to Montlake & NetGalley for the ARC! 💕

✨ Tropes & Themes ✨
✧ Journalist/Celebrity Romance 📸
✧ Unexpected Wealth 💰
✧ Grumpy Billionaire Hero with a Rough Past 💪
✧ Heartfelt Family Dynamics 💕
✧ Hidden Family Secrets 🤫

Now, let’s talk about Max Smith—this guy is a gem! 🙌 He starts off as a hardworking, no-nonsense construction worker, and BOOM, suddenly he's thrust into the billionaire life. It’s such a wild ride! Max had a tough childhood—abandoned and in foster care—but now he’s trying to navigate his newfound wealth, a family he never knew existed, and the adorable reporter Sarah who’s trying to uncover his past.

And speaking of Sarah, I actually liked her character! She’s a journalist with serious integrity who, despite trying to do her job, ends up getting caught up in Max’s chaotic world and… well, falling for him (because duh, it’s a romance, right?). 💁‍♀️

I do wish there was a bit more chemistry between Max and Sarah, though. Don’t get me wrong, I get why they were drawn to each other, but I was hoping for that spark that makes you go wow 😍. Still, the rest of the book was fun! Max trying to adjust to his new billionaire life, with Sarah helping him navigate it, gave me all the family feels that I love. The Stone siblings’ dynamic? Chef’s kiss 😘 I’m so ready for more of them!

📌 Content Warnings (CW):
- Foster care system issues
- Parental abandonment

If you’re into billionaire stories with a good dose of family drama, heartfelt moments, and a touch of romantic tension, this is definitely for you! 🥰 Bring on book 3—Alex’s story, here we come! 💥

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I absolutely adore this family, their dynamic together, and their sense of humor. Max is a very welcome addition and I love how Chase and Alex completely accept him and show him what it means to be family. The love story that develops between Max and Sarah takes a lot of trust and I was happy to see it work out. I also enjoyed getting to see Chase and Piper's story continue as they await the birth of their first child together. I listened to the audiobook as I read the physical copy and had a totally immersive experience. The narration is excellent and I can't wait for the next book in this series!

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The only thing better than a Catherine Bybee book is one that’s part of a series. And I am thoroughly enjoying The Heirs series!

The Forgotten One picks up where All Our Tomorrows ended - with Max learning he’s the secret love child of the late, uber-rich hotel mogul, Aaron Stone.

Now that Pandora’s Box has opened, the media vultures have started circling, making Max’s life a challenge. One of those reporters is Sarah McNeilly, who unwittingly makes personal contact with Max when her boss gives her an ultimatum: find out who Maximillian Stone is and interview him, or look for a new job. With an agreement from Max to give her ALL the tea - one small teacup at a time - Sarah ends up with the juiciest scoop of her life. Along the way, she ends up helping Max just as much as he helps her.

I devoured this book. I’m a huge fan of this author’s writing. I love her characters, I love the realism of the situations they deal with, I love how they are mature and the relationships develop organically. There's drama and angst, but not of the over-the-top soap opera sytle type. I am thoroughly loving how this series is building on the previous books - these books should not be read as standalones - because it’s always great to get a glimpse of characters you enjoyed in earlier books!

The only downside to The Forgotten One - and I can’t believe I’m saying this - is the book was very Max and Sarah focused. As much as I loved how their relationship developed, I would have liked a lot more of Max and his new siblings going up against the Board of Stone Enterprises (but I think we may get that in the third book, No More Yesterdays), and I would have liked more to the mystery storyline…Max, along with his half-brother Chase and his wife Piper, and half-sister Alexandrea, are all looking for the mother who abandoned Max when he was a toddler. Nonetheless, I really, really enjoyed this book, will probably read it again (which is a big deal for a reader with roughly 200 books already on my Kindle), and will definitely be listening to the audiobook as soon as possible!

And now I just have to cool my jets waiting for book three, which doesn’t release for another seven months…

* thank you to NetGalley and Montlake for providing an ARC in exchange for an honest review

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THE FORGOTTEN ONE (HEIRS SERIES, #2)
CATHERINE BYBEE

This author is a USA TODAY and NYT BESTSELLING writer who also works as a nurse. Her heart is in the right place by writing this (The Heirs, #2) series, which I believe this one at least can be read as a standalone. I didn't seem to feel there were any gaps in this novel, as I read it. The writing was compelling which, led me to be able to read this in two sittings. If I was feeling better this would have been read in only one. She says in the beginning that we could do better in the Foster Care system, and due to her job I tend to believe her. She no doubt has witnessed her share of heartbreak in her line of work.

While I enjoyed most of this, there are a couple of scenes in this that were too steamy for my taste even though the romance grows organically from taking the time to get to know one another. Sarah and Max are the main characters who are genuinely likable protagonists and the leading characters. I found this to be a bit Over the Top in the plot, which is why I didn't rate this higher. I applaud the author in her efforts to keep Sarah looking attractive enough, but not perfect for example, having Max fall for the goodness of her character. I'll explain more about that later.

The book begins with Max Smith working on a construction site in California, where the traffic is horrendous on the freeways which is very true. He has just broken a blade with his friend and coworker named Jeff. They cut up concrete or cement and there are no blades on the job site to take its place. Max goes home early along with Jeff, and when he arrives home after work, three people come to visit him that he has no idea who they are. Chase and Alexandrea Stone inform him that they are there to tell him his father Aaron Stone, has just died and they want him to get his share of the money due him which is in the Billions. Chase and Alex tell him they had Chase's fiancee a very pregnant Piper, and private detectives that work for their father's Estate lawyer locate him.

Chase and Alexandrea say that they are his half brother and half sister, and also would like to embrace Max as family and have a close relationship with him. Max doesn't believe anything that's said to him and grabs a baseball bat and tells them to leave. They do, but since they have no ulterior motives than to get to know him, end up having a brand new black truck delivered to him all bought and paid for. Max is happy to receive the new truck and the next time they meet he believes them. They do a rush DNA job with the results showing that they all share the same father. They open up a checking and savings account with millions of dollars for Max.

Max is a flannel shirt with jeans and Steel toe boots, type of guy, and Alex his half sister has a friend of her's take Max shopping to buy him a suit and some silk shirts, slacks and new shoes since they invite him to a shareholders meeting of their father's board meeting. Their father was a Billionaire Hotel Magnate and they want him to vote with them in their combined 60% ownership of the company not to take on buying another boutique hotel chain that the minority want to acquire. Once the word is out that Aaron Stone has another son there is a media frenzy. All three of the two Stone half siblings and Chase's fiancee, a very pregnant Piper invite Max to escape it by staying at their father Aaron's gated mansion that is a mile from the estate. Max looks through the home and can't believe the grandeur. They tell him to pick a bedroom, and he sees his father's closet is still full of clothes. None of his sister and brother want anything and plan on donating it, but Max picks out one of many watches that are a Rolex and he slides it on his wrist.

Meanwhile, Sarah is told by her boss at a tabloid magazine that she is assigned to dig up some dirt on Max and his newfound position as a Billionaire son of the late Aaron Stone Enterprises. Her boss Patrick who is a villain--every story needs one, tells Sarah that she has one foot out the door from being fired, and he tells her she is perfect for the job, since she tells the truth and doesn't sensationalize her articles. Patrick tells Sarah that she can't Google her way out of doing this job. Sarah meets Max as she is parked on the opposite side of the street and he steps on her glasses by accident. He learns she is a reporter and calls her an Uber since she can't see to drive without her glasses. He follows her home to her apartment and she doesn't realize it. She goes to the place where her roommate Teri is a bartender and Max follows her there. Sarah tells Max that he has no social media presence and he tells her he's not a Social Media type of guy.

He promises to give her the story, but he has to wait until the Press conference is over. He takes her phone number and calls her at the crack of dawn waking her up telling her to meet at a coffee shop that she agrees to. A public place is what she told him where they could meet. Max quits his job without giving a two week notice which his boss is a woman, and their next job was to be a two hour commute. While in the coffee shop, Sarah notices that Max is wearing a million dollar Rolex watch. She promises not to print anything about his story, until after the Press conference.

At some point Max finds out that Aaron, Max's father paid child support and his mother abandoned him when he was two years old and still kept accepting the child support and he spent most of his life in Foster Care and they weren't happy years or memories. Sarah and Max end up getting involved.

What I liked about the book: Sarah has frizzy red hair and has a curvy figure wearing glasses with a
nose full of freckles. I loved that the author kept things realistic and
didn't pair off Max with a six foot blond.

There is depth to both Max and Sarah's characterization and he didn't
need the perfect stereotypical perfect looking relationship partner that
he stayed true to his frugal means and didn't act like he could have any
women he chose because of his newfound relationship with being a
billionaire.

There was no instant love affair between Max and Sarah, and that their
relationship between one another developed organically.

That these were all likable, genuinely kind people. The issue of money
wasn't centered or didn't come up other than the truck that his half-
siblings bought Max so that he would know that they weren't conning
him. Other than the Rolex, the truck and their father's home, money was
down played and just background.

That Max, Sarah and his new half siblings were kind & caring people who
were thoughtful and did nice things for each other that came from the
heart.

That realistic feelings were portrayed in conjunction with the situations.

The way they all genuinely cared for one another and everyone looked out
for everybody's best interests.

What could have worked
better for me.: There are just a few scenes that had too much steam for me. It wasn't
a deal breaker for me There was one that was just a little OTT for me and
two small ones.

Publication Date: November 12, 2024! Available to Read Now. It's actually overall a heartwarming story.

Don't worry there is much that I left out so no spoilers here. There is a mystery to be solved and Overall, I think this brand new to me author should be applauded for keeping things real. Overall, I really enjoyed this and am looking forward to reading the next one in this wonderful series.

Thank you to Net Galley, Catherine Bybee, and Montlake Publishing, for providing me with my ARC in exchange for a fair and honest review. This is definitely one of the better ones. All opinions are my own.

#TheForgottenOne #CatherineBybee #MontlakePublishing #NetGalley

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good mystery about a couple and staying in a house and the other couple there. kept me on my toes . good mystery and figuring stuff out.

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T**The Heirs #2: The Forgotten One**

**Author: Catherine Bybee**

Catherine Bybee is an extraordinary storyteller who captivates readers with her vivid narratives. From the very first page, I felt completely immersed in the story, which was hard to put down! This novel presents the compelling journey of a lost brother, focusing on the tale of a blue-collar worker named Maximilian Smith who finds himself thrust into the world of wealth and privilege almost overnight.

In this novel, Bybee expertly crafts depth in her characters by providing them with rich backgrounds that shape their motivations and personal growth. The story revolves around two central characters: Sarah and Max. Sarah McNeilly, an ambitious journalist, is assigned to investigate Max Stone, the newly discovered heir to a billion-dollar fortune. As they interact, they uncover not just facts about Max's newfound wealth but also the intricate family relationships within the Stone dynasty.

Set against the backdrop of Stone Enterprises, the book unfolds with layers of family drama, closely guarded secrets, and the inevitable complexities that accompany newfound wealth. Sarah’s character is particularly refreshing; she is not the typical tabloid journalist eager for sensational gossip. Instead, she is committed to uncovering the truth. This dedication becomes more challenging when her boss demands she expose the hidden details of Max's life, putting her career at risk.

Initially, Max is just an ordinary man, wrestling with everyday concerns like paying for gas. His life takes a dramatic turn when his half-siblings, the products of a billionaire father, unexpectedly show up at his front door. This shocking revelation forces Max to confront his past, his heritage, and the responsibilities that come with his sudden wealth. With paparazzi and tabloids eager to exploit his story, Max realizes that he needs to manage his public image carefully, and Sarah becomes an essential ally in this endeavour.

As Max and Sarah work together, a palpable chemistry develops between them. They embark on a journey not only to unveil the truth about Max’s lineage but also to navigate the emotional turmoil that comes with their growing feelings for each other. Their collaboration leads them to unearth bitter family secrets, but it also complicates their relationship. Tensions rise when their investigative efforts threaten to erode the foundation of trust they’ve built.

The stakes are high as they confront the dark echoes of Max's past, leading to a gripping exploration of love, trust, and the cost of ambition. This book offers a rich tapestry of emotions and events, leaving readers eager for the next instalment in "The Heirs" series. I wholeheartedly recommend **The Forgotten One**; it’s a compelling read that will keep you engaged until the very last page!

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This was a good book. It had interesting characters, and an interesting storyline.

That said, I was bored at many points. You knew what was going to happen, which took away the mystery needed to pull off the crux of the story, in my opinion.

Max should've been a little harder to crack, considering his upbringing. Sarah was hilarious. I enjoyed her the most.

It was slightly confusing that chapters were told from differently viewpoints without notifying the reader the narrator was changing.

Thanks to NetGalley for the ARC of this book in exchange for my honest review.

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Catherine Bybee does it again! This book gave me ALL THE FEELS!

This is book two in the Forgotten Heirs series. While it can be read as a stand alone, the whole series is so good, you don't want to miss it.
Catherine Bybee's characters are perfectly written. She makes you fall in love immediately and you'll find yourself both anticipating the next page while dreading the last one you know is coming.
The storyline is great. It leaves you with just enough questions to make the whole love story not completely predictable. It's a HEA that leaves you wanting book three, wanting to seek your own journalist or billionaire, wanting your own HEA if you don't currently have one.

Man wakes up one morning and realizes that he's not an orphan, he's got a family and it's an incredibly wealthy one. The publicity on this family is always large and overwhelming. There needs to be a press release and there's no one better to give it than the cute women Max noticed.

This book is fantastic. Once you read a Bybee book you'll want to deep dive into them all, so prepare for some time, but you won't be disappointed. Ever.

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4.5 Stars

What a fantastic addition to what is quickly becoming one of my favorite series from Catherine Bybee. Honestly, there is something so comforting about returning to her world and stories. I know I'm always going to have a good time while I'm immersed in the pages of her books. I seriously never get tired of them.

Max and Sarah were great characters and I loved their connection. I loved how their relationship developed over the course of the book and I loved the growth we got to see from Max. I loved that the relationship between Max and his newly discovered siblings was a big focus of this story while still spending plenty of time on the romance. There seriously wasn't a single thing I didn't enjoy about this book.

It shouldn't be a surprise to anyone that I'm already very ready and eager for Alex's book. I'm so intrigued by her and I can't wait to see who her match is.

✔️ Billionaire MMC
✔️ Jounalist FMC
✔️ Unexpected Inheritance
✔️ Third Person Dual POV

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Catherine Bybee's, "The Forgotten One", is a gripping tale that seamlessly blends romance with suspense. Set against the backdrop of a small coastal town, Bybee weaves a narrative that keeps readers on the edge of their seats. Olivia Kingsley past keeps coming back to haunt her in unexpected ways and making her struggles or triumphs feel palpably real.

Bybee's prose is crisp and engaging, the book pacing is well-managed, alternating between heart-pounding action sequences and quieter moments of introspection and romance, with a good dialogue crackle of tension and wit.

"The Forgotten One" is a solid novel where it offers readers a perfect blend of romance, suspense, and small-town charm. It's an ideal read for those seeking an escape into a world of intrigue and passion.

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Max thought that he knew everything about his family that he was ever going to know until he finds out that not only does he have two brothers that he knew nothing about, but he is one of the heirs to his father’s estate. Trying to adjust to all the changes is challenging especially with the publicity he is trying to avoid but Sarah might be able to give him the one thing he really wants which is answers concerning his mother.

Sarah is working towards her goals of being a respected reporter and isn’t about to push aside her values even if she is working for a less than stellar publication. The chance to tell Max’s story might be the boost her career need however the lines between personal and professional become very blurry.

After being alone for most of his life I enjoyed seeing Max become part of the family he was always meant to be with and the relationship that he shared with Sarah is filled with romance, chemistry and so much emotion.

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This is the second book in The Heir’s series and follows, ‘All Our Tomorrows’ (Jun 2024). It can be read as stand alone as the author recaps who the main characters are. But I would suggest starting with the first book. The premise is a multimillionaire dies leaving his business empire to his estranged children. He has two legitimate heirs, Chase the MC in book one, sister Alex and an unknown illegitimate son Max. This is Max’s book and begins with his siblings making contact with him.

Max goes from a boy who grew up in foster care to having a family with unlimited wealth. He meets Sarah McNeilly, a journalist. She is supposed to get a tabloid expose on him but they connect personally. I don’t seek out billionaire romances as a genre but I’ve read a previous series by the author and she can weave a good story. I instantly remembered the first book and was quickly caught up in this storyline as well. The characters have depth and good back stories. Now I’m going to have to wait till next year to see who is going to catch Alex’s eye.

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I have read most of Catherine Bybee's works and she does not disappoint. She has an excellent writing style, great plots, some drama, humor and romance all rolled into her books. I would definitely recommend her books and this one especially. This is a second in series book and it is helpful to have read the first one for the background information but I guess you don't need to.

This book follows Max, the long lost brother and heir to billions. He is your typical blue collar worker with a bit of a chip on his shoulder having been abandoned at age two and bouncing around foster homes. He does not believe he has half siblings when they first find him and struggles a bit with his new reality. He doesn't realize how much his life is going to change. Enter Sara who is a journalist for a rag mag but yet she has scruples. She won't print untruths even though her magazine sensationalizes things. This is a stepping stone for her to bigger and better jobs. When she is the first to uncover the secret of the Stone family, that the deceased father was a cheater and has another kid, Max decides to give her a chance and give her an exclusive. As things start to heat up with the news, Max and Sara grow closer...until an article is published outing Max's sealed records from his teenage years from information Sara uncovered. Their trust is shaky at best after that especially for Max. But hopefully they can overcome.

Overall a great read with excellent characters. I love the Stone kids and how they all interact today. Definitely would recommend the entire series.

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In the second books of the Heirs
Series by Catherine Bybee, we meet Max, long lost brother to Chase and Alex. When the two finally track him down-with help from Piper, the Stone siblings receive a less than welcoming greeting.

Raised in the system, max has no reason to trust that these strangers and heirs to the Stone empire are being straight with him. He grudgingly agrees to DNA testing, and learns that the unfathomable is fact, and these two strangers are his half siblings.

He soon finds himself altering everything about his life to avoid the media-trusting his newfound family and unexpected ally, reporter Sarah, to guide him through the firestorm that follows the announcement of his existence.

As Sarah help Max dig into the trail in the search for his birth mother, the two become close, and are unable to deny their attraction. The two are both sweet and caring, with a fire simmering under the surface of their interactions.

The Forgotten One is a can’t miss read, with everything you could want in a romance, including cameos from past characters we know and love.

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This was a very cute book! Nothing crazy plot wise but just a cute smooth read.

I liked how Sarah stuck to her morals despite being a tabloid journalist. I absolutely loved how things ended with her job. Like we can all predict that outcome, HOWEVER, I absolutely love the lengths she went to to stand by her morals even then. To make sure they couldn’t steal her stuff again.

I absolutely cherish how Alex, Piper, and Chase stood by Max’s side full heartedly from the beginning. They really gave him the family that he never had. Despite their dad being an a**hole and not knowing what a family was, his kids sure knew how to support each other as a family.

Piper and Chase’s wedding was golden. I thought that was a funny addition to the book!

I can’t wait for the third book to come out! It will be fun to see who it follows (Alex???) and how the families love keeps unfolding as the family continues to grow! I am rooting for Max to continue focusing on his family now that he has experienced familial love and am eager to see how they continue to help foster kids in need!

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