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This had everything that I was looking for from a action thriller novel, it had that overall feel that I was looking for and enjoyed the overall story. The characters were everything that I was hoping for and enjoyed going on this adventure with them. David Leadbeater wrote this well and was left wanting more.

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I got to the halfway mark but called it a day after this beauty; “A crisp-based snack sat before him”. Wouldn’t that just be a packet of crisps? There are other examples of clunky writing but the whole thing is just too silly. A hodgepodge of a gang are tasked with finding a long lost treasure. And wouldn’t you know it, everything is just where it should be. Even pictures in galleries are free for them to handle. I mean they would be wouldn’t they? The violence seems to be an add-on, it doesn’t really fit the story. I’ve nothing against a Scooby-Doo type caper but the writing needs to be a lot better than this.

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