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An initial rival romance with close proximity. I love the workplace romance trope and this one was satisfying. It’s a romance that bridges 400 pages but there’s a lot going on and it was still a fast paced read for me. I enjoyed this one.

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I adored the chemistry in this one. Charlie is insatiable for Emma and I love the way that becomes mutual as she opens herself up to him. The intimate scenes are hot and also honest and raw in places, there are a few moments I know will hit hard for some readers. I loved the way Emma’s inability to come with a partner is approached, the way Charlie makes her realise it truly isn’t anything wrong with her, and that it also isn’t something that is fixed forever.
I did however find it very jargon heavy at times when it came to Emma and Charlie’s work, it took me half of the book to understand what they were doing and I still don’t understand what their job entails. I also found the 3rd act conflict a little abrupt, it is in line with what we k new of the characters but I still was a little shocked when it happened?

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As a woman in tech, the complaints about Power BI spoke to me on a spiritual level. Oftentimes romances are placed in fantastical, dreamy settings; it was incredibly refreshing seeing one take place in a place many of us are so familiar with- the office. Our main characters interact in the same manner you likely do with your work arch nemesis, the one you harbor a secret crush on, Take it Offline was a lot of fun and I could see myself and my daily life reflected back at me.

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I loved the realistic representation of the gender discrimination faced by women in corporate. It was raw and relatable.

Surprisingly, the smut actually added a layer of depth to the story, something I never thought I’d say about that element in a book! But the work talk? That was tough. Honestly, I don't think anyone would understand that. I really tried to comprehend it, but it just was... Seriously, I don't even know what her job even was. While this shouldn't be that big of a problem, in this case it kind of was because their work played a big part in the story.

Their chemistry was off the charts. I really liked them together. Two other aspects that I'm not a fan of are 1) the insta-love or lust 2) the breakup scene—it just felt like they broke up for the sake of the story, not because there was an actual reason for it. I liked how mature and understanding the FMC was throughout the book tho.

Thank you Net Galley, Set the Mood Publishing and Dani Mclean for a copy of this arc.

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This was such a fun, quick, spicy read! We even had peaks of Charlies’s dirty mouth, AKA why this book was so spicy. The enemies-to-lovers vibe was great and absolutely delivered on the tension and chemistry development between Charlie and Emma.

I was so glad when Emma finally came to her senses about Logan and chose Charlie instead, thank goodness. The one downside and the reason I gave it 4 stars instead of 5 was the third-act breakup. It felt like Charlie was just acting dumb about the whole situation, and it seemed unnecessary given how well everything had been developing between them. If you love a good, angsty enemies-to-lovers romance with plenty of spice, this one’s for you.

Overall o enjoyed this read and would be willing to give others from the author. It was a fun and enjoyable read 🩷

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This book is 1000% for the corporate romance girlies! Did I understand a single bit of what Emma and Charlie did for work? Absolutely not. But did I enjoy the insane chemistry and banter and everything in between? YES YES YES. This was the perfect amount of workplace enemies to lovers/sex lessons I've ever read in a book and I will forever be a fan of Dani's writing!

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This was such a fun, quick, spicy read! Charlie Walker has a dirty mouth on him, AKA why this book was so spicy. The enemies-to-lovers vibe was *on point* and absolutely delivered on the tension and chemistry between Charlie and Emma.

I was so glad when Emma finally came to her senses about Logan and chose Charlie instead, thank goodness. The one downside and the reason I gave it 4 stars instead of 5 was the third-act breakup. It felt like Charlie was just acting dumb about the whole situation, and it seemed unnecessary given how well everything had been developing between them. If you love a good, angsty enemies-to-lovers romance with plenty of spice, this one’s for you.

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I am a huge fan of Dani McLean and was really excited when I saw that she's releasing a new book. The description doesn't reveal that much, but I still wanted to read it. A steamy rivals to lovers contemporary sounds like the perfect book for me.

It took me a while to get into the book and in difference to her others book, it wasn't easy to read for me. I'm not sure why that was the case. From time to time I felt a bit bored by the subject and all the talk about work. Most of the time I didn't really understood what they're talking about, and it disrupted the reading flow. I knew beforehand that it will deal a lot with the work (which is obvious because it's a workplace romance) but I hoped that it wouldn't discuss every single work problem into the smallest detail.

Emma and Charlie are the main characters. I couldn't really connect with any of them. I did like both but it was difficult for me to feel what they're feeling.

The story was really spicy but I already know that from Danis other books. It still took me a bit by surprise how early in the book it got spicy. As always the scenes are well written and also pretty detailed. Some other aspects in the story felt a bit rushed.

In the end I sadly didn't like the book as much as I thought I would. I still liked it but it was just not THE book for me. I would still recommend it to people who like workplace romances and like their book a bit spicier!

Thank you to NetGalley and Victory Editing for this EARC!

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Take It Offline is a workplace enemies to lovers book where the 2 leads are up for the same promotion. The FMC, Emma comes from a rich family who are going through financial hardship, so she works to save her parents. On the other end, Charlie grew up in the foster system and is on the up.

Take It Offline is a stereotypical office enemies to lovers romance. However, the he falls first trope makes it more enjoyable on my end. The boss in this book ended up being the thing that took most of my attention because of how awful he was. This may be something women have to suffer through in real life, but it took away from the romance of the story for me.

I gave Take it Offline 4⭐️ and 2🌶️
I love the enemies to lovers trope and I love that he fell first.
The only down point is how much I hated the boss that my anger towards him consumed me over the romance.

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The enemies-to-lovers chemistry between the leads is captivating and keeps the story engaging from start to finish.

While I did get a bit confused with what the characters are actually doing at work, the romance and heartwarming moments more than made up for it. Fans of contemporary workplace romance with humor and a modern twist will enjoy this fun read. I look forward to seeing what Dani McLean brings next!

Thank you, Victory Editing and NetGalley, for the ARC in exchange for my honest review.

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Dani McLean hits it out of the park again!

Charlie is a caring, sarcastic, flirt with a tough past and Emma is a badass working her way through life and making it her own.

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3.5 ⭐️

Dual POV Follows Emma and Charlie when they are assigned to work on a project together. It’s haters to lovers (I’d say) as Emma hates Charlie when they begin to work with each other. As time moves on they finally start to get along and Emma comes to Charlie with a favor, as she has been having let’s say “sexual frustrations”. Charlie agrees to the favor and that’s when their relationship starts to progress - I’d say? By the end of the book Charlie had some things to figure out but he pulled it out of the bag and proved to Emma that he was completely different than what she thought in the beginning. As well Emma learned of things from Charlie - As she was a woman in Tech-Startup who was rudely downplayed for her work and for basically being a woman.

I enjoyed this! Interested it what is to come for the future books in the series! 🙂

Thank you Victory Editing and NetGalley for the ARC! 🙂

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Dani has outdone themselves again! I cannot put into words how much I love this book! I read it in a matter of hours because I was so hooked to the back and forth, the hate to love, the push and pull of these two. It’s addicting. I loved Emma’s character and related so much to her giving all of herself to others, she is beautifully written and the way she’s able to let loose around Charlie is just a) iconic, and b) refreshing because we all need that one person who allows us to finally let loose. While also relating to Emma, I heavily related to Charlie by being an older sibling and caring so deeply but not able to express it. I think the battles these characters deal with are handled with such grace and care but in a way that’s also real and relatable. The spice is spicing and I ate up the “no feelings” to more dynamic of this plot. There’s so many layers of this story and Dani handles everything so beautifully and wraps everything up perfectly at the end. The last line literally still had me blushing!! Another amazing read from Dani and I cannot wait to see what comes next!

Thank you to the Author for the advanced copy!

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This book was a quick, enjoyable read with a fun, light-hearted vibe. I loved the characters and the way the romance developed. Even though I didn't always understand the work-related details, it didn't take away from the story's charm. Overall, I’d highly recommend it!

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HOLD UP!
This was AWESOME! I loved the characters. I loved the spice!! Very excited to keep reading more from this author!

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This book was amazing! The romance was very well written and I loved the banter so much! And the cover is beautiful!

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3 stars.

Emma is a woman in tech, Charlie is her colleague. They want the same promotion and end up working together. along the way, the rivals become something else.

The crisis in the third act was a bit surprising, I was hoping that this book would have been one where it wouldn't have happened. However, the crisis was resolved quite well. And the epilogues were good!

I think the best part of the book was actually the description of what it's like to be a woman working in technology. Unfortunately, it must be a fact that women are still belittled in some places in male-dominated fields.

This book was ok to read, but not my favorite. Dani McLean is a good writer and I will continue to read her books.

WHAT TO EXPECT:
* Difficult past
* Dirty talk
* Enemies to lovers
* Family drama
* Forced proximity
* Hea
* Office / workplace romance
* One night stand turned more
* Open doors
* Opposites attract
* Point of view: dual 1st person
* Steamy
* Third act: crisis

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THANK YOU SO MUCH DANI MCLEAN AND YOUR TEAM FOR THIS ARC!!

I was actually very pleasantly surprised by how much I liked this book. I didn’t know much about it prior to reading other than the brief description. I’m not gonna lie, when I read the first few pages with Dani warning her parents to not read, I was a bit worried. I’m not a big fan of smut, so I was afraid that would ruin it for me.
I really enjoyed getting to know these characters and the depth that Dani was able to give both of them. Also, who doesn’t love a good enemy to lovers? I appreciated her tackling the issue that women face in the corporate world and how that affected Emma’s character. I have experienced this is some ways, but I know some women deal with this extensively. Charlie was just so sweet and attentive, what a great book boyfriend! I felt that we really got to know him and his past.
I will definitely be a repeat Dani McLean reader!

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This book was so cute and spicy 🥵 Emma and Charlie are gorgeous and this book is a must read. I had the pleasure of reading Mortgage of Convenience earlier this year and when I saw this eARC available I had to request it. If you haven’t read anything of Dani’s and you love spice, you have to check out her books.

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Take it offline tells us the story of Emma and Charlie.

Emma works at a tech start-up, being part of a well known family and having a trustfund she's not always taken seriously. Determined to prove she's more than her family name in a male dominated field, she works tirelessly to show what she's made of.

Charlie is a charming, good looking man and is loved by everyone, except Emma. He has had a rough past that helped shape him into the strong, loving man he is today.

They are forced to work together on a project that will determine who will receive a promotion.

The story and the characters are well written. I really did like the character build, the connection the MC's had, their banter...
And don't get me started on the steamy parts, they had me blushing.

I did have trouble understanding the work talk in the book and I thought there were some conversations in the book that didn't really add to the story. Some parts felt very random.
However, I still thought it was an enjoyable book.

Thanks to Netgalley and Victory Editing for the ARC.

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