Member Reviews
Reviewer 554797
The descriptions were my favourite part. You really felt part of the void but i wished for more. The plot was lacking slightly.
Heather S, Reviewer
This was an interesting read. I felt the writing was a little underdeveloped and could've been honed more. The beginning was confusing and some action scenes were a bit all over. However, the plot was interesting and layered. I'd love to read this again after it's been edited a bit.