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A great start to a series but one that needs some editing. I was engaged with the plot and characters but its slow pace took me out at times.

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Frankly, I do enjoy the storyline of the book.
I love the adventurous spirit of the main character
I enjoy the suspense and the way the Author tries to explain each of the feelings felt by the main character buh the rate at which the Author explains the feelings continually is really a sore eye.
The Author keeps conveying the same messages through different sentences which occurs so often that it makes the book really suffocating.

I really do enjoy the storyline though.
Live with joy.

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