This book was full of cozy small town vibes! The writing style felt a little off to me… some of the chapters ended very abruptly and there needed to be a page break between thoughts or different activities (i.e. the mom character leaving the school house and going into town).

The character development of both characters was nice! I would have liked to see more self realization in Gray, rather than her just saying she liked gardening and just going along with Sarah Annie. The comments about her eating and weight could have been handled better. I know that both characters didn’t totally agree with the meal plan, but they never really voiced it. It would have been nice if healthy relationships with food and eating were at least mentioned. I would have loved if she had a stand up to her mother moment at the end.

The mystery was well thought out and did come together nicely. The author made you suspect lots of different characters in the book until we reached the final reveal! I did have my suspicions about Alec, but I wouldn’t have guessed it until the end.

Overall a fairly easy read! Just could use some refinement on the tone and layout of the book.

That's was such a good enjoyable cozy little story. Yes, there was a murder mystery but it was low stakes for most of it, while still managing to keep me intrigued.

It was really sweet to see two girls make their own way, meet friends in a new place, and develop their bond outside of their parents.

The writing was really good and did a great job depicting the house. I've never fallen in love with a house I couldn't see before, and I was jealous of her inheriting the school house! There were some issues with rhythm due to fairly consistent sentence length, that made it a bit more difficult to stop and enjoying what I was reading.

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I would've liked a little bit more showing rather than telling, about them being sisters instead of a job, and a more thought out conclusion about what they were gonna do about their parents not wanting them to stay, considering they spent the whole lives listening to them, this seemed like a big aspect not to include. I get finally breaking free, but there was like zero thought, and it ended very abruptly. I actually checked a couple times to see if my version was missing some pages.
Maybe a page about how the parents are happy their girls finally found something of their own, and they apologize for being so overbearing. Or the girls cutting them off and going out on their own. Either would've gone a long way to making it feel like a more rounded conclusion. And a little hint at having a date set up with Matt wouldn't hurt either..

I love the book. It's a good first book in a series. Hopefully there will be more books to come. No bodies found but a murder mystery to who killed Eleanor the previous owner of the yarn shop. I recommend it as a good read..

~Cozy, Crochet, Small-town, Murder-Mystery, and more!~

Death Among the Stitches is a cozy crochet themed murder mystery following Annie Hart. After inheriting a yarn shop from her late uncle, Annie is headed to a small town in Franklin, Indiana, to check the place out and sell it as soon as possible so she can get back to her real-life responsibilities. Those responsibilities include babysitting her father's clients adult daughter, Gray. Making sure she sticks to her diet plan, listening to constant breakdowns, and helping her run her shop. So when Annie arrives in Franklin and realizes the place needs more time and money than she has, she makes a deal and gets financial help from Grays mother in exchange for keeping her daughter in check. As the renovation goes on, Annie realizes all isn't as it seems in the small town; the previous owner before her uncle was murdered in the shop. With the case gone cold, Annie is fine leaving it alone until she starts receiving threatening messages. Will the truth come out before anyone else is hurt?

2.5| The was a fast read. I did enjoy aspects of it, but sadly found it as a whole disappointing. The whole thing, especially the end, felt unfinished. The pacing was odd; the first part of the book doesn't have much going on, and then, in the very end, everything happens with not enough time to wrap it up properly, making the ending feel abrupt. The premise is fun; as someone who loves to crochet, I was excited to read a crochet-themed book, but the jokes were cringy and overly juvenile for my taste. I also think if you went into this book without any knowledge of crochet or knitting, you would be lost at certain parts. The writing itself was way more causal than I would have preferred. This book is marked as a murder mystery, but Annie never does any actual investigating, which is a letdown. I did enjoy some of the characters, my favorite being Toby, who was very endearing. Though I do think there are far too many names in this book, while it helps establish the small-town vibe, it also made me feel overwhelmed and confused. I love a good atmospheric read, but the descriptions of scenery here were out of place and far too long.

I needed more depth in this book. There were so many potential avenues to be explored, for example Gray's constant pressure to fit her mother's standards or Annies tense relationship with her father. So much could have been done to further explore these points while also adding context to why Annie and Gray act and feel the way they do. I honestly felt like this book should have been focused on Gray, not Annie. She was by far the more interesting character and seemed to have so much more backstory that wasn't explored. In fact, I actually found Annie a tad unlikable. For someone she says she sees as a little sister, she is quite awful to Gray. Inforcing her diet and disregarding her feelings. She follows her father's orders without question. While her attitude does change eventually, it was upsetting to see. As for the murder mystery aspect, it was a letdown. I enjoy a surprise murderer, but in this case, it was too unpredictable. I like being able to figure out the killer, but here, there were no clues, so it came as a total blind side. It just didn't seem very well thought out at times.

Overall, this is a quick and easy read. Besides the abrupt ending, it is not half bad. I did enjoy reading it, but it's not very memorable or something I would ever pick up again. I think the characters and town have potential. It's a good book to pick up if you want something mindless; just don't expect much depth.

I can't stop reading! I had to tear myself away from the book to take care of my mom duties, that's how hooked I am. Every page is a mystery and I can't stop turning them. The ending totally satisfied me. I always judge a book based on my feelings at the time, and let me tell you, this one left a lasting impression. I may forget the characters' names, but the feelings this book stirred up will linger for a long time. Huge thanks to NetGalley and the publisher for the ARC!

This book was pretty good! I think this book was a little bit juvenile, and it was pretty cheesy at times. I do like how it had a bit of mystery in it, but some of the twists and turns were pretty predictable, unfortunately.

Thank you to NetGalley, to the author, and to the publisher for this complementary ARC in exchange for my honest review!!!