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this was a strong prequel in this world, it was a great introduction to this world. The characters were everything that I wanted and enjoyed the overall feel of this. Rina Olsen wrote this well and can't wait to read more, it was a great tale and wanted to read more.

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"The Water Stricken" by Rina Olsen presents an intriguing premise that draws readers into a rich fantasy world. The main character, Pyori, is particularly likable, displaying a blend of resilience and vulnerability that makes her relatable. However, it’s interesting to note that many characters in the story find her annoying, creating a unique dynamic that invites reflection on differing perspectives.

While the story starts strong, it does lag a bit in the middle, which can affect the overall pacing. This dip may challenge readers' engagement, but Olsen's imaginative world and character development keep the narrative afloat.

One aspect that could significantly enhance the reading experience is the naming of the gods. More phonetic spelling would make these names distinguishable and easier to remember, helping readers connect more deeply with the story's mythological elements.

Overall, "The Water Stricken" is a thought-provoking tale with a promising premise and a relatable protagonist. While it has its pacing issues and could benefit from clearer names, it offers a captivating exploration of relationships and beliefs in a fantastical setting.

Thank you to NetGalley for this ARC in exchange for an honest review.

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