Member Reviews
Kaylie D, Reviewer
Honestly, I feel bad but I only got to 75% by skim reading after maybe 30%ish. I couldn’t figure out the plot, and I found the writing hard to follow..
It really needs some way of highlighting when the time the POV is set in has changed. I was spectacularly confused for most of the read. Also the formatting was all over the place which didn’t help being able to follow the story.
Kathryn M, Reviewer
I was hooked from the cover and description and so glad I got to read this, it had that element that I wanted and enjoyed about the genre. It took the fantasy element perfectly and enjoyed the overall story being told. Mark Miller wrote this well and was glad I got to read this, I hope there is more in this world.