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I want to thank NetGalley for this eArc. I would realistically give this book 3.5 stars. I think the read was fun, smooth and gripping and I cannot wait to read the next book! What I will say is I feel like some of the pacing was a bit choppy (didn’t negatively impact the read) but I would have been fine with more pages and a longer read to have some smoother transitions.
Alora is an interesting character and her development was good, even if she annoyed me a bit in the first few chapters lol. I love that she truly went through something and we saw it not just flash backs. I think that was such an interesting way to go about the story. I do think that the mate bond situation could have been drawn out a little more. I felt like the real meat and potatoes of this book was at the end where not only was it gripping but really left me wanting book 2!

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What a roller coaster! Lor is an extremely strong FMC that just sometimes forgets how deep that strength goes. I resonated with the idea that those we love are always with us even when they cannot physically be there. I feel like the story flowed well. Although I probably should have been, I wasn’t completely prepared for the cliffhanger of an ending. I’m anxious to see if redemption is to be had in the next book.

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This was a fun yet dark note to end the year on!!
First of all I love a FMC billed as a deadly assassin that turns out to *actually* be a capable and deadly assassin, and I loved that the writer gave Alora at least 50% of the book to embrace and hone this before she starts getting distracted by boys. She may be little, but she also be stabby.

Alora's backstory of loss is heartbreaking and her need to go scorched earth for vengeance understandable. She is likeable as a character and easy to root for. There's a very strong found family connection throughout this book, which she definitely deserves. You really do want her to have it all by the end of this book (all meaning both grisly revenge and happy ever after)

My only real gripe, and sadly one that has really affected my rating for this book, is the fact that the author cannot seem to choose between present and past tenses, sometimes even within the same paragraph/sentence. I enjoyed the story, but this proved extremely distracting. I did receive this as an ARC though, so this may well have been addressed by it's official release date (which is January 16th)

That said, I enjoyed it as a fun, easy fantasy read and I will definitely be needing the next book in the series because ominous prophecies are afoot, plus.... THAT ENDING!! GAH!!

3.5/5

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What a great beginning to a series. I wish it had been a little longer, especially in getting to know the characters in the book. It felt rather rushed. I read it in less than 2 hours. The unique storyline hooked me quickly, as well as the beautiful writing. I am looking forward to the next book! I would have loved to sink into the book even more with a little more storytelling instead of the huge time jumps. It's interesting how it verges on mystery, on romance, and on suspense. I liked the twists and the plot, and it was a good story. I just wish there had been a little more delving into the meat of the story and the characters. It is a little too fast-paced and skims over the important mystery solving and character building stuff that would be delightful to explore.

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3 Stars for me!

I would like to thank NetGalley and the author for allowing me the privilege to have ARC access an allowing me the privilege to give my honest and open review of this book!

Wow this book was such a fun read and a great way to start off the new year. I really loved how sweet our FMC was and the true character development and challenges throughout the book! I felt as though the world building was truly immersive and I could picture and thoroughly live through what the character was experiencing. The relationship between characters as well as their interactions and commentary. There were many moments throughout the series that were highlighted as thy represented such a raw and real moment of truth and experience that allowed you to connect and relate to the characters.

I will say the story felt as though we would be taking one step forward just to go two steps back in certain points throughout the story. I also wish we got more within the story as certain moments felt rushed. I wish there was more story telling during these pivotal moments within the FMC's story. Some of the story was predictable but again I think it was just because it was rushed and more tellings during these moments really could have amped the story. Not to mention the ending just felt predicable as many common themes lay within the story. I can truly see where the comparison to Throne of Glass comes from, but you can feel much of Maas's themes from throughout her different book series within this one.

The FMC was a truly fun character but there were moments that gave me pick me energy that kind of threw off my relationship with the character and made interactions harder to connect with. I wish we had more insight into her adventures and what she experienced throughout the story. Not to mention the time umps made me feel like I lost out on truly understanding what our FMC wen through and made her into who was she was representing within the segment of the story. Her humor and drive to power through hardships was truly a great adventure and I cannot wait to see more with her character and where she goes with her powers and overall growth.

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This story follows Alora’s battle to avenge her loved ones and rebuild herself anew. The story is fast paced and there was a constant flow of action throughout.

For me this book started out brilliantly, the first 20-25% i was hooked. I do feel as though the early plot twist was a bit disappointing for me, as i was really invested in that part of the storyline and felt many questions were left unanswered and the book just moved on rather quickly. This led on to basically the whole book really. She was doing this then she was doing something completely different almost instantly, but maybe this is more about the characters personality and soft heart than the writing of the book.

Personally i feel like the events could have spanned over two books perhaps and been more drawn out and built up to. Regardless of this i did enjoy the book, it was an easy read with a little spice, romance and the usual fights and betrayals.

3.5⭐️

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Daughter of Shadows and Ash by Ember Johnson

4/4.5 stars

Thank you to NetGalley and the author for this ARC copy

"I'm starting to think this bond is cursing you with lunacy."

"If it is, I'll live the rest of my life cursed under your entrhall. I can't help but be obsessed with you."

Um with quotes like that??? Swoon.

So to start, I started this last night and binged all the way through today! That should tell you it was a pretty decent read, also kind of a quick one.

I have a lot of positives to say about this and only one or two semi negative things so let's get into it.

The first thing I want to discuss is the writing is beautiful. This is eloquently written. It is rare that I find a book, especially an indie book, with such nice prose. The wording was very detailed and just honestly so beautiful. It is very elaborate and detailed. Sometimes that however felt like too much, and did bog the story down just a tad, but in all honesty I would rather read overly detailed and beautiful writing than half assed writing, so that's all fine by me.

I loved the characters. Alora is a great FMC, she seems strong willed and passionate, and I love a good character building/out for revenge/badass assassin type vibes. This felt all like it was inspired by "Throne of Glass" while still being its very own unique tale, and I love that.

The only two semi negative things I have to say is the pacing felt off. At times it felt crazy rushed, and it felt too much like the story was skipping along too fast. That alone is what kept it from being a 5 star read for me. However, I will give grace there as its just book one - so we will have to wait and see what the author has in store for us in the next two books.

The only other minor complaint I have is it felt like a really strong start, and a really strong end, but the middle felt a little muddled for me. Part of that was world building/character building, etc. but then that made the beginning and ending feel a little rushed.

Again though - it was good enough as it was that I'm not mad about it! I really enjoyed the story as I mentioned, and I ate this up. I'm actually quite sad it's over for now and I am eagerly awaiting the next two books! This one was a real fun romantasy read, and I would recommend it to fans of the genre. It gave me heavy TOG vibes, with some ACOTAR vibes, etc. and I think this is going to be a really fun trilogy.

I will be picking this up to add to my own personal library upon release, and I'll likely be re-reading it again soon, or atleast before book two drops. :)


Original thoughts:

- Just getting started on reading it since the pub date is just a couple weeks out.

Initial thoughts are I'm excited but scared - this may be a little more YA than I enjoy based on other reviews, but we will see. I am excited about the banging playlist at the start of the book though???

David Kushner/Bad Omens/Sleep Token and my favorite, TAYLOR SWIFT?? It's got to be a good book right? The author has clearly impeccable music taste.

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This was a fun, fast-paced YA book. The world building was immersive, and I was able to understand feel how the FMC felt.

That being said, because of how fast-paced the book was, there were moments where I needed to reread the chapter to get a grasp of what was happening. Chapter 28 was confusing due to the changing in tenses. The relationship between the FMC and MMC was instant and made me lose the origins of the FMC because of it. And the ending felt very rushed.

Overall, I enjoyed the book and the world the author built.

Thank you the to NetGalley, the publisher, and the author for this ARC.

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“You’re strong, Alora. Stronger than you know. But even the strongest trees bend in the fiercest storms”

I struggled, getting through this book. To me in the begging, Alora came across as a whiny girl that could only focus on her crush on her best friend. The story focused a lot of describing the woods, and not enough on actual world building. After they got out of the woods, the story got more fast paced, but skipped through a lot of important details, such as how Alors trained herself. She went from just discovering a power after seeing her loved ones get killed, to suddenly being a cool blooded murderer with barely any context.
The characters felt very flat to me and lacked everything that makes a book enjoyable for me.

I totally understand the vision that the author had with the plot but the actual execution didn’t meet the expectations. So sadly this book was not for me.

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3/5 stars.

This was a quick read, but sadly I didn't love it as much as I wanted to.

The biggest problem for me was the pacing. At first it felt really slow, and all of a sudden it went from 0 to 100. It would've also benefitted of being longer, with more balanced pace and fleshed out world plus characters.

There were also things I did like. I always love assassin fmc's over everything else. I also liked her quest for revenge. On the other hand I didn't feel any connection to the mmc. Perhaps his PoV would've solved that, but now he felt really surface level.

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I found this easy to read but definitely felt YA vibes from the writing and the actions the characters made. I wish we had more character development. It seemed our FMC was just jumping from one scene to the next with no real depth or context.

I also found this story to be very reminiscent of Throne of Glass. It was honestly too similar in my opinion to be considered to have taken inspiration from the series.

Overall I wish we had more character development I found that I didn’t really care much for the FMC or her struggles.

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Rating 3/5⭐️
Spice 2/5🌶️

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I am really torn with this book. It started off so good. I thought the premise and world building were well done. It had a really strong start but after about 20% it just kind of tapered off.

There were a lot of plot holes. Especially with Aloha’s grandmother and how she is hearing Mael’s voice in her head after he dies.
I thought we would get more from her magic and more explanations regarding it but we didn’t.

A few things I found difficult to read was the repetitive use of words. “Familiar” was on the same page 3 times. It became very redundant even more so after her “mate” was introduced. Another thing I found to affect my rating was the fated mates. Now I love a good fated mate trope but it needs to be integrated well and flow with the story. This felt thrown in and very rushed. There was no tension, no build up, and very little interaction. It was hard to believe or connect too.

I also noticed that the writing seemed a little inconsistent. It seemed like it went from present to past tense but with no real flow which was a little disorientating.

Now while this was not the book for me it could be the book for you. Would do well with those dipping their feet into fantasy romance or YA readers.

Thank you the to NetGalley, the publisher, and the author for the ARC!

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I'm very conflicted about what I just read. The story sets off great, the worldbuilding is well presented, the writing beautiful, Lor is very likable as a main character and I was immediately invested to follow her story. I really enjoyed the emotional roller-coaster of tragedies hitting her all at once and her transition into a deadly assassin, I felt that the first half of the book was well paced, kept me engaged and I couldn't guess how the story would develop. But sadly, just after the first half, things start to fall apart. So many things felt rushed and poorly presented/given to the reader, the one night stand/chemistry/intensity of emotions needed more to feel convincing and there were a couple of times, I had to check I didn't skip chapters, I found myself questioning whether my file had parts missing (has never happened before) and had a hard time believing there were such serious issues with the editing. Overall, I could've easily read 500+ pages, the second half is missing a lot of meat to the bone. And I'm sad and disappointed because the premise and the writing were really good.
I really hope there were just issues with my electronic file and others have a better reading experience. The thigs that I likes about this book, I REALLY liked :)
Thank you to the author, the publisher and NetGalley for my review copy, all opinions are my own.

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This book started off soooooo good! It was looking to being a 4-5 star read for me and I fell in love with Mael but then at the 20% mark him and grandma die and I wasn’t interested anymore. I read to the 85% mark before deciding to DNF which is unfortunate because I was so close to being finished with the book but I couldn’t get myself to feel interested enough to keep reading. I still give it a 2 stars even though it was a DNF for me because of the first 25% of this book and how much I did enjoy that! I may pick this up and finish it in the future but for now I unfortunately don’t care enough to finish the book.

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I loved the premise of this book. Alora is a girl from a small village who lives a simple life until her entire village is brutally wiped out & she is the only one left to avenge the people she loves. She becomes an assassin, discovers how to wield her powers, and coincidentally meets her mate during a one night stand. After that things get crazy, somehow she becomes a princess (still bent on revenge mind you), and her fate never seems to really be in her hands no matter how she may try.
Unfortunately, that is the only thing that I enjoyed about this book. It seemed to fall flat in so many ways which was so disappointing!!! I felt like I had whiplash the entire time because the plot jumped so quickly I couldn’t catch my breath, but at the same time I felt like it was a really slow book. I LOVE a powerful & cool FMC and Lor had so much untapped potential that seemed to get lost within the pages of this book. I wanted to like it but unfortunately I just didn’t. It felt like a jumble of cliches without the important character building in between.

I wish the writing had been more consistent as well. The chapters seemed to skip between past and present tense which contributed a lot to the disorienting feel of the entire book.

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Disclaimer: I received an ARC of this book in exchange for an honest review. All thoughts and opinions are my own. SPOILERS AHEAD.

This story had a strong start, immediately pulling me into its immersive world. The characters were well-written, and the opening chapters did a great job of setting the stage. However, it felt like it took quite a while for the main storyline to truly begin, only to end abruptly on a massive cliffhanger.

I really enjoyed the writing style and the characters, though I wish we’d had more time to connect with some of the others.

That said, this book reminded me a lot of Throne of Glass. While I understand SJM didn’t invent the fantasy genre, there were numerous similarities that were hard to overlook—things like family is killed then right into the assassins guild, the protagonist being an heir to the guild, the fated mate trope with the prince, themes of capture and torture, and the interplay of shadows and fire. I’m hopeful that the next installment will take a more unique direction, though as it stands, the storyline seems fairly predictable, with the protagonist destined to win the war using her powers.

Despite those critiques, I found this book very easy to read and engaging. I’m looking forward to seeing where the author takes the story in the next book. Overall, I enjoyed it and am excited to read more from this author

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This book was a little complicated to get through. I did like the story premise and Mael was a good character to start the story off with.

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3.5✨

Thank you to NetGalley and Cursebreaker Books for providing me with an ARC in exchange for an honest review. All thoughts and opinions are my own.

The overarching theme I get from this is a YA with adult characters and scenes. If you love YA but just want that little bit extra from it then you will absolutely love this book!

The imagery from the writing is truly immersive, like I really feel like I can see the world, but I'm not sure I need the woods described to me more than maybe twice, like I get it, and I feel like that really slows down this book. I loved the first few chapters as it gave me a minute to get into the world and the story but with limited worldbuilding and info dumps I don’t necessarily feel like I understood the world until much further along in the book.

You can really feel the Throne of Glass influence in this book, but Alora is Celaena's quite distant cousin that just so happens to be on the same vibes, this entire story has its own intricacies and details that are different from Throne of Glass, but the influence is strong. (and I do not hate that)

Once you actually get into the meat of this book at about 50ish% that’s when it starts getting really good, honestly before that is essentially a prelude to get you into the world, but the actual story is super enjoyable. As I said it very much has YA vibes in some of the character decisions and ways they act, and while that’s not my fave and I am not a huge fan of YA with adult characters, I didn’t feel alienated from the story.

I have a lot of questions left unanswered so I am absolutely going to be waiting for book 2 and if this is the base, I can only feel that book 2 will be even better.

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Daughter of shadows and ash has twists and turns on every page! This is my first read from this author and it did not disappoint. Lor is a strong FMC who is dealing with alot of heartbreak throughout this book. She becomes an assassin in hopes for vengeance against those who wronged her (without giving too much away). She is then swept away into a world of Royals that are not as they seem. Overall, I could not put this down, the writing was very entrancing but I will admit some spots seemed a little short or rushed. I wish the book was longer, but seeing as it seems it will be a trilogy, it left off on a perfect spot. I have some theories for the next book, but time will tell! If you enjoy shadows, fae, fated mates, and strong FMC, this one is for you!
Thank you to the author, Net Galley and Cursebreaker books/ Victory editing for this ARC :)

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Daughter of Shadows and Ash by new to me author Ember Johnson, published by Cursbreaker Books, is the first book in the Araceli's Blade Series.
A dark read with some lengths, mildly pretentious language, example: "her voice wove spells of comfort" and deals with some sensitive subject.
I was pretty quick bored and shlepped through the story because I wanted to be no quitter, hoping the story could peak my interset at some point.

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