Rating: 4/5
I received the eARC for my honest opinion.

I loved that this book has so many different mythical creatures. You will find angels (fallen and non), elves, witches, demons, oracles and so much more. This is a debut novel, and I found that the author did a great job with the plot, you will find that it is a little slower side on the pace but that is because it is more character driven, I enjoyed the magic system, all the characters and the love triangle that happens in this book I was all there for it.

I won’t lie and say that you will not be confused or find it a little hard to follow along at the start of the book, but I promise you so long as you keep reading you will find that it does start making sense. I did get a little confused about the flashback scenes because there wasn’t really a header that we were switching or something to feel like it transcended to a new scene/character. Other than that, I really liked getting to know the characters and their hardships more and seeing what started all this in the first place. I do wish that we could have gotten more history of the realm and why it is the way that it is, and I am hoping that we might get more information in book 2. The characters are what really stole my heart in this book though

I loved Blair, right away. I love that she is a cold-hearted, blood thirsty little witch that gave me Manon vibes and I was all for that. I loved getting to see her character grow throughout the book and you can see that she starts to fight her softer side at first and well honestly throughout the book, but you will see that the softer side does come out. I wasn’t sure how I felt about Melody at first, I was like do we like her or not… and I can say now that I have had some time to think about it, I really do. You can see that she was sheltered and really didn’t know anything, but I loved that she was getting stronger and surer of herself as the book went on and I know that she will be a force to reckon with. I just can’t wait to see that side of her come out. I loved both of the MMC, Caryan and Riven. Caryan is the all powerful dark fallen angel and Riven is his second in command and to me they have a brotherly relationship (I hope we get to learn more about their past too), I loved getting to know both of these characters more and I do like Riven more than Caryan right now but I know that it might change in the next book and I will be loving him. With both of the MMC you will see Melody has a connection with both of them, I can’t say who I want her with because I don’t know yet…. Right now, it would be Riven but that might change lol.

This book will leave you with more questions than you started with but if you’re like me you can’t wait for book 2.

I want to thank NetGalley and Last Unicorn press for the opportunity to review this book.

Kingdom of the Two Moons has a very promissing premise, telling the story of Melody, a half human/fae, Blair, a witch with a conscience, Caryan, an extremely powerful angel, and Riven, a fae warrior. However, the book has some issues that prevented me from enjoying it. The most obvious one is the slow pacing: this is a long book, and I felt that nothing relevant happened for most of it. Then, the characters are very inconstant, specially Melody, whose actions made no sense most of time. The characters' erratic behavior made it impossible to connect with any of them. Finally, the love triangle was not only based on instalove but also not well described, even with the acess to different POVs. To sum up, Kingdom of the Two Moons had interesting ideas, and I'm sure some people will love it, but unfortunately it did not work for me.
Thank you Netgalley for the ARC!

Kingdom of the Two Moons follows the journey of Melody, a half human, half fae woman that may be the key to the fae world’s demise or salvation. She’s always been a captive, used for the abilities she doesn’t even understand herself. Now she’s in Caryan’s hands. He’s a dark king and last of the fallen angels and under his watch, Melody has to decide what role she’ll play in this impending war.

This book was quite a wild ride! It has all the fantasy elements that I love - intriguing world, lots of different characters, interesting magic and lore. I loved the enemies to lovers, love triangle vibes with Caryan and Riven. (Team Riven all the way!) I think the author had a lot of awesome ideas and I could definitely see inspiration from some of my other favorite fantasy authors, especially Sarah J. Maas. I thought the writing style with multiple POVs and switching between first and third person felt little chaotic at times. I really loved Melody’s chapters and her first person POV and wished that Riven and Blair’s chapters were in first person as well. Sometimes the dialogue felt clunky or hard to understand for me, which may have been partly due to the ARC formatting, so take that with a grain of salt. There were lots of great elements, just a few execution things that pulled me away from being fully immersed in the story!

Thank you to Alexandra Thomashoff, Last Unicorn Press and Netgalley for the ARC in exchange for an honest review.

Lets me start off by saying the characters and world definitely have intense depth to them. Unfortunately for me, I had to DNF at 25%. I know that the editing process will change much of what I am going to write. The writing and pacing is too messy and confusing for me to continue on. Highly miserable for me because I can sense this book would be right up my alley. The synopsis is so promising as well. I really struggled to get only a quarter of the way through. There were times that chapters felt disjointed. Some too short, too long, or cut off too early. Maybe I will revisit when the editing has been done but for now I am leaving 3 stars because I find it unfair to leave a positive/negative rating when I have not read it in its entirety. I may even make another attempt within the week because I found Melody so encapsulating. If I can break that barrier and read the full novel then I will leave a full review. For the time being, I do believe Thomashoff to have fantastic ideas and stories to be told. Execution needs to be worked on.

If you love ACOTAR, this one’s for you! Kingdom of the Two Moons sucked me in with its dark magic, morally gray characters, and irresistible tension. Melody, a powerful but trapped heroine, is caught between two captivating but dangerous men: the brooding fae warrior Riven and the icy Dark Lord Caryan. The world-building is rich, the romance slow-burn, and the plot full of twists!

While I loved the intense action and chemistry, I wished for a bit more character depth from Melody. Still, this book is perfect for fans of high-stakes fantasy with a side of angst and romance. Can’t wait for the next one!

Thank you to NetGalley for the ARC!

I would call this SJM fanfiction. There's nothing wrong with that and I know I read and enjoy books that have a lot of tropes. However it's very on the nose and I was not prepared for that. I also found that not only did the characters match up but several of the plot points also matched up which was the bigger issue for me.

It's a Mashup of TOG and ACOTAR with a little Fourth Wing Easter egg right at the end. One FMC is just Manon. She's a ruthless witch who's kinda sorta the heir. Her and the other FMC save each other resulting in life debts. The other FMC is basically Feyre. She's a painter who was abused by her father figure and winds up getting taken into the Fae world as a maybe prisoner.

What bothered me most was the sheer amount of details that lines up with SJM books. Our witch FMC has distinctive hair, wears a red cloak and has a uniquely adorable wyvern. "To whatever end" comes up at one point. There's a specific night of the solstice festival that's literally called starfall. And that's just what I can share without getting into spoilers.

I also found it very slow. The ending was the highlight of the book as it was actually relatively unique. Unfortunately I had checked out by then.

Disclaimer I was provided an ARC of this book through NetGalley. All opinions are my own.

Thank you to Netgalley for providing this e-ARC for me to review!

I was incredibly excited by the blurb and premise of this one, since Fae, Fallen Angels, Magic and Romance is my bread and butter and I would eat that stuff up aaaaalll day!

The story itself started off a little slow for me (I usually like to be thrown in the deep end with any kind of Fantasy), and the jumping between 1st and 3rd POV really threw me off being able to really immerse myself into the world.

Once the characters were all introduced and the plot could really start to take off, it became more enjoyable.
Unfortunately, the romance and bonds between the love interests (I really wish it had not been a love-triangle) were just not believable enough for me to get truly invested in their outcome.

I did end up enjoying the writing once I got used to the authors style, so I will read more from Alexandra in the future.

Thank you for the ARC! This was a hard book for me to get into in terms of plot. The world-building took its time at the beginning of the book which may drag on a bit and it was very distracting switching between the tenses among the POVs (however, there is probably a purpose for it). The characters are okay to me and no one particular stood out to me. I think it's a relatively good book but probably not for me!

I really enjoyed this book. I applied for this arc because the cover gaveme acotar vibes and throne of glass vibes. I’m so glad I got the chance to read this book because I had a great time. I struggled with the beginning of this book, the extensive world building and the shift in POVs (first person to third person). However, I liked the romance part of the story, the tension between the main characters and the slow-burn development of their relationship. If you love dark romantasy with morally grey mmcs and a diverse range of magical creatures like angels, witches, demons, elves, and more, read this book!

Thank you netgalley for an arc in exchange for an honest review.

Thank you to Netgalley, the author and publishers for opportunity to read an advanced copy of this book.

What a great debut novel and a really strong start to a new fantasy series. I really enjoyed it. This is a really complex, intricate and fascinating story that is very character driven but includes interesting and extensive world building with an intriguing magic system. I loved the depth of the characters and the nuanced dynamics between them. Particularly the three MCs - Melody, Caryan and Riven.

The world building is well written and it felt really immersive. There is a lot of information to take in, particularly in the first part of the book, with a whole wealth of magical beings and species to be introduced but there is a detailed glossary to support this. I found the first few chapters quite slow going as a result but once I got into the story fully I couldn’t put it down and was fully invested in what was happening.

The story is told through multiple PoVs and there are a few flashback chapters, to fill in background details, which I found really interesting and gave more impact to Blair’s part in the story as a whole. I found the switching from first to third person in places a bit clunky and it took a bit of getting used to. This didn’t stop me enjoying the story in any way though.

Overall a totally enjoyable, intriguing read. It had me fascinated all the way through and on tenterhooks for the last quarter of the book. I am really looking forward to the next book.

Thank you to Alexandra Thomashoff and Last Unicorn Press for the ARC. I always appreciate the opportunity to discover new fantasy worlds!

I really was excited for this book—the premise sounded intriguing, and the cover immediately caught my eye. I started this book several times, hoping to connect with the story, but I struggled to stay engaged. Kingdom of Two Moons has a dark, atmospheric tone that will appeal to fans of high-stakes fantasy. The story unfolds through multiple POVs, switching between first and third person, which might work well for some readers but was a bit disorienting for me. I found myself confused by the plot and unsure of the characters' motivations early on, and the pacing made it difficult to fully immerse myself.

While the book promises elements I usually love—mystical creatures, magic, complex relationships, and immersive world-building—I ultimately couldn’t connect with it the way I’d hoped. Unfortunately, this book was not for me, and I ended up DNF’ing at about 25%.

“But it is the lightning that wakes something in me. Lashing the sky with the promise of deluge and decay. I like storms always have. They remind me that even the sky needs to scream sometimes and not just me. It’s something other than this suffocating, inescapable solitude, expanding everywhere around me.”
Book Review
Kingdom of the Two Moons
Alexandra Thomashoff
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Firstly, I want to thank Alexandra Thomashoff for providing me with a complimentary ARC via Netgalley in exchange for an honest review…

Prepare yourself for an enchanting unique journey through “A Kingdom of the Two Moons” by Alexandra Thomashoff, where the pages sizzle with magic, intrigue, and undeniable chemistry! This captivating tale dances between the realms of fantasy and romance, inviting you into a world teeming with alluring creatures, dark secrets, and tantalizing twists.

At the heart of the story is Melody, our fierce and resilient heroine FMC, who has spent most of her life imprisoned, played like a pawn in a game she doesn’t even know exists. When she finally musters the courage to escape, she’s swept up by the enigmatic fae warrior, Riven, who is as irresistible as he is dangerous. But hold on tight—this isn’t just a simple love story! Riven is second-in-command to the brooding Dark Lord, Caryan, an immortal angel with a shadowy past and a pull that’s hard to resist. The tension between these characters is electric, and you can practically feel the sparks flying off the page!

Thomashoff weaves a rich tapestry of fantastical elements, introducing a delightful cast of creatures that will make any fantasy fan giddy with excitement. From fae and witches to demons and oracles, the world-building is so vivid that you’ll find yourself fully immersed in the magic of it all. And as Melody unravels the mysteries of her lineage and uncovers her own burgeoning powers, the stakes get higher, leaving you breathless with anticipation.

But it’s not just Melody’s journey that hooks you—it’s the introduction of Blair, another fierce female character who commands attention with her sharp wit and fierce independence. Her backstory adds depth and intrigue, and I can’t help but cheer for her as she navigates her own enchanting path.

With every twist and turn, Thomashoff keeps you on your toes, blending romance and adventure in a way that feels both refreshing and unique. The chemistry between the characters is tangible , and you’ll find yourself rooting for love, loyalty, and a little bit of mischief along the way.

“A Kingdom of the Two Moons” is a spellbinding read that will leave you craving more. So grab your favorite blanket, a cozy drink, and get ready to lose yourself in this mesmerizing tale. You won’t want to miss the magic when it hits shelves on MARCH 31st!

It was good. I liked the storyline and the premise of the book. Few things I found I ultimately couldn’t vibe too well with but would be willing to read next books

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🔸 fae, magic, angels & kingdoms
🔸 Romantasy YA/NA
🔸 slow burn 🔥
🔸 inconsistent tenses - first person & third person 👎
🔸 love triangle
🔸 multiple POVs
🔸 forced proximity
🔸 high tension

Very promising concept; interesting world building and characters, though development is needed. As is, with inconsistent tenses, very YA fmc within a NA Romantasy context, and info dumping, it was difficult to engage and remain engaged. It was confusing; and not because of plotting but writing style. There more potential for future books.

Did not finish book. Stopped at 55%.

I loved the premise of this book. Romantasy with a world recovering from one war and on the brink of another, but I just could not get behind the characters.

The book started strong and honestly I was a big fan. As the story progressed, one of the narrators became a rehash of a (what seemed to me) character from another popular book but with worse qualities. I got to the part where she was called put for "acting like a youngling" and somehow she got worse after that. If it weren't for her, I would probably enjoy the story a lot more and actually be inclined to finish it.

I feel like this book held a lot of potential to be better. I was hoping for more SMUT personally. I felt like it was a bit more YA fantasy than a Romantasy. (IT DOES CONTAIN A SMUT SCENE THOUGH) It is a slow burn romance, I felt the pacing was well thought out and the world building was decent. I felt it fell a little flat to me as the author repeated themselves a lot for my personal preference. I Also felt like the shift from First person to third person was something that I didn't overall enjoy happening but I was able to push past that.
The Author gave the FMC (Melody) some bratty attitude especially after she first left her prison though as time went on she grew repetitive and wasn't someone I really wanted to end up with the MMCs. The FMC (Melody) also felt as if she was a little forced to be this way as well. I felt that she should have been less abrasive and more curious when engaging with the MMCs. The other FMC (Blair) Was hilarious and she literally made me wish there was more chapters of the book with her in it.
I would recommend you read this book if you're interested in Slow Burn Fantasy. I'm excited to read the next one.
Thank you Netgalley for allowing me to read this ARC.

Thank you for the opportunity to read this book! Unfortunately, it was not for me. This book attempts to weave an intricate tapestry of dark magic, prophecy, and forbidden romance, but ultimately falters due to an overwhelming amount of info-dumping and a plot that's hard to follow. The world-building is dense, and the constant explanations about the magic system, the factions, and the characters' powers can feel like a tedious lecture rather than an organic part of the story. While the book concept was intriguing, the execution was muddled by confusing pacing and a heavy reliance on exposition.

Thanks to NetGalley for this ARC copy.

I requested to review this book because the description and cover drew me in. I am a sucker for spicy fantasy books and was looking forward to diving into a new world. It was a rough start for me. The multiple point of views I can handle, it was switching from first person to third along with the changing point of views that muddied my initial motivation. I found my groove with the book by 14%. Fae, humans, angels, and shifters?! I was determined to make it through and finally hit the stride where I didn’t want to put the book down by 23%. The end crushed me and left me desperate for the next.

We have a few characters the point of views revolve around. Blair, who honestly impressed me with her ruthless personality, is on the hunt for Melody. Melody is a prisoner to Lyrian and forced to find items, people, anything he desires due to her gifts. Blair and Melody run into each other at a bar and turns out Lyrian is after Blair, too.
Melody isn’t alone so when she warns Blair instead of turning her in and Blair disregards her warning, Blair ends up getting chased by shifters. Melody returns to Lyrian, accepting the punishment.
Riven and Caryan are introduced shortly after. Riven is a lilac eyed elf and Caryan is a dark eyed, black-winged Angel. Not only is he an Angel, he is an ex lover of Blair and former slave turned Dark King. No surprise here, he is also searching for Melody and tasks Riven to capture her.

I find it interesting to see the comparison in the relationships between Blair/Caryan and Melody/Caryan. Blair and Melody are passionate protectors however Blair is more concerned with protecting her mothers while Melody wants to protect everyone. Then we see the relationship comparison between Melody/Caryan and Melody/Riven. Caryan and Riven are also passionate protectors however Riven wants to protect both Melody and Caryan. Caryan’s reasons for wanting to protect Melody are a bit muddied. As an immortal Angel, he does not feel things like fae or mortals.

This book left me crushed and my heart bruised. The author weaves such beautiful worlds with a variety of cities so effortlessly and the imagery is powerful. This book does well with the build up to the romance and in a way is a slow burn. Caryan is a very morally dark grey MMC while Riven is a silver grey.

Move over, Rhysand and Xaden. These two MMC’s are going to be your new book boyfriends. I truly hope we get more because I need to know what happens next.

Thank you NetGalley for the opportunity to read this book in exchange for an honest review.

I want to prephase this by saying I really was excited for this book, but ended up 30% through and DNFing it. It’s not that it was bad but it was a really difficult read for me. It has a pretty slow start and I think what made it slow for me was the wordiness of the book, the over descriptive text, and the multiple POVs. That with also trying to explain a whole history of this world along with the lore behind it made it difficult to follow. I also had a hard time connecting with the main FMC Melody. It seems like this character has this whole journey ahead of her and so much potential yet she is stuck being a slave (again). I found myself having a hard time following her POV or seeing where it was going knowing that there was an oncoming war. And yet here she is stuck doing chores.

I did really enjoy Blair’s POV along with Riven’s and them as characters intrigued me the most. At least for Blair I found more depth and was intrigued by her history and really enjoyed personality. I also really loved the lore of this world and how Caryan and Riven came about as well as the bond with each other. I felt like there was a lot of potential to really build onto this world, but I think it was just a lot to pack in a single book. Maybe it was the state I was in while reading that made it difficult for me to finish this book but I would like to say that maybe one day I’ll pick it up again which is why I am rating it as 2 stars.

Thank you, Netgalley, for the ARC. This is my honest opinion.

I had to DNF this book. I didn't like the layout and the writing of this book. It was just so confusing at times. The book was just kinda a mess. I did not feel motivated to continue reading this book.

I am also not a big fan of love triangles. The romance could be better. The dialogues are sometimes a bit cringe. I did not feel connected to any of the characters.

This book is just not my cup of tea. I'm quite disappointed cause I really thought after reading the blurb that I would enjoy the story.