I must note first and foremost that I am writing this review after only reading the first chapter and have not finished the book. Why will become clear.
I was very excited for the concept of the book as I love any form of textile art and do it myself as well. However, this felt like an unedited, honestly unread first draft of a story:
- the different parts of the chapter were completely out of order (and not as a literary device jumping from point to point, but as if they were jumbled up)
- one paragraph started in the middle of a sentence
- in the middle of a chapter came a sentence a la "this concludes chapter 1 and in chapter 2 XY will happen"

Especially everything being all jumbled up made the first chapter hardly readable.