Reading The Pizza Man by Eddy Twice is like biting into a pizza made by a wizard during a solar eclipse—unexpected, magical, and slightly concerning in the best way possible. The plot twists harder than a breadstick in a tornado, the characters are delightfully unhinged, and the whole thing feels like it was written under the influence of marinara-fueled madness. I laughed. I cried. I questioned my relationship with dairy products.

Eddy Twice doesn't just break the fourth wall—he karate-kicks it into a different dimension and then serves you a steaming slice of metaphysical confusion topped with existential pepperoni. 10/10 would get lost in this fever dream again. Bravo, Pizza Man. Bravo.

This wasn't for me. I really struggled with the whole thing, there was certainly promise. The overall storyline did hold lots of potential but I couldn't get on with the characters, there were many secondary characters bring thrown in I couldn't keep up with them.
Overall just nor for me.

This book had a cute premise, with the MMC owning a pizza place I was definitely on board for that. But honestly the romance didn’t quite hit the spot for me. It felt like everything between the characters moved way too fast, and the chemistry felt a bit forced. Insta-love isn’t my thing, so that kind of threw me off.

The writing was easy to follow, but sometimes the characters’ actions felt a little unrealistic. The dual POVs were nice, but there were some repetitive moments that didn’t add much. Plus, there were a few things that didn’t get fully explained, leaving me wanting more from the story.

Overall, it’s a quick, light read,

This one ended up being an even cuter rom com than the title implied. As a pizza delivery does seem like an unlikely rom com hero. But that's what makes it work and makes it so sweet.

Thank you, NetGalley, for a chance to read this book early!

Unfortunately, I do have to give this book 2 stars and a DNF. It seemed like there was quite a bit of world and character building that was severely neglected in this book, so much so that I couldn't finish it. The personalities of the main characters seemed like an afterthought, therefore, they didn't push the story along. There was also an alarming number of secondary characters, and I was having a hard time keeping all of them straight in my mind.

I'm glad some people found enjoyment in this piece, but it's not for me.

The Pizza Man by Eddy Twice is a charming slow-burn romance that delivers warmth, humor, and a dash of delicious food descriptions. The story follows Bella, a hardworking advertising professional, and Joe, a passionate pizza chef with dreams of opening his own restaurant. Their paths cross unexpectedly, leading to a beautifully developed connection that feels authentic and heartfelt.

Twice does an excellent job of building chemistry between the characters, making their growing relationship feel natural and engaging. The dual points of view add depth, allowing readers to understand both Bella’s cautious nature and Joe’s unwavering passion for his craft. The writing is lighthearted yet thoughtful, and the playful banter between the protagonists adds a delightful touch.

That said, the pacing is a bit slow at times, and I found myself wishing for a little more momentum in certain parts. While the slow-burn romance is satisfying, it might not be for those looking for instant sparks or high drama.

Overall, The Pizza Man is a sweet and enjoyable read, perfect for fans of cozy romance with a bit of foodie flair. If you love stories about personal growth, love found in unexpected places, and, of course, pizza, this one is worth picking up!

⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ (4/5)

I think I'm in the minority but I didn't really like this book unfortunately - I'd give it between 2 and 2.5 stars out of 5.

The Good - I liked the characters well enough, especially Joe's sisters, and I was surprised to appreciate the quite heavy grief content that turned out to be the bulk of the story.

The Not So Good - although the characters were fine, they made odd decisions and were not at all written with depth. I could not get a grasp on the setting - to me (British) it read like an American author lazily trying to find and replace American references to make them British....'Mum' 'Pounds' etc but some were missed which was jarring - one sentence described both cents and pounds at one point! Maybe this was editied before public release, I hope so.
The plot bows were tied up neatly at the end of the book, which is not unexpected for a romance, but nothing really felt earned. And the main characters were definitely not acting as if they were in their 30s!

This book had such great potential, but I simply couldn't finish reading it. It felt quite juvenile in it's writing style, and I only made it about 20% in before I gave up. There were a few issues, and the biggest one for me was the number of characters. Within the first few chapters, there's just so many characters to keep up with, that it resulted in me not feeling connected to the main characters.

I really enjoyed this book , from the start to the end it game you fuzzy warm feelings, it’s was easy to read and would be classed as a comfort read , this is definitely a book I would recommend

Eddy Twice's style is cutting, humorous, and engaging. The writer has a conversational style that makes the reader become engrossed and yet retains suspense and tension. His vivid description of the city and people creates a world that is real and dynamic. The Pizza Man is a story of identity, resilience, and the heroism that can be found in the most unlikely of people. The book also touches on issues within society like economic inequality and the connectedness of city living. The book's message about drawing strength and purpose from challenges is conveyed powerfully through its own telling.

The writer uses a combination of action-oriented scenes and quiet moments of contemplation to ensure a well-balanced rhythm within the novel. His application of foreshadowing and symbolism enriches the narrative and imbues it with depth. Well-placed surprises and complex plotting keep readers hooked from beginning to end. The book's pace is well-crafted, alternating between high-tension sequences and more subdued moments of introspection. The format, with its straightforward progression and clearly defined chapters, is a pleasure to read. The readability of the book guarantees that it will be read by a large audience, from casual readers to enthusiasts of more complex storytelling.

The Pizza Man is an engaging and insightful novel that presents a new twist on the mystery and thriller genre. Eddy Twice's skill at blending engaging characters, an engrossing plot, and significant themes creates a narrative that stays with the reader long after the last page. Though some readers may hope to see more developed into some of the subplots or secondary characters, these small criticisms do not take away from the overall effect of the book. I would strongly suggest The Pizza Man to anyone in search of a fresh and compelling read that weighs entertainment against profound introspection on life's twists and turns.

Holy pepperoni this book had do much happen in a relatively short time! From the time they met Joe and Bella connected. When a few random meetings fall right on top of each other, the chemistry is amazing, but both are skeptical. When both of their families fall apart at the same time, somehow they need to decide if staying apart or together is going to help them survive.

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This was such a cute story. Definitely had the love at first sight vibe from the perspective of the MMC, Joe. Their constant chance encounters were such a laugh. And I just enjoyed every moment.

The Pizza Man was a fun and quick little romance novella with moderate spice. The romance felt a bit YA at times, but it wasn’t cringy or unbelievable.

The characters were sweet and it made for a great palette cleanser read, and the perfect book to finish off “love month” for me!

I’d recommend this if you want something lighthearted and sweet between heftier reads.

Thank you NetGalley for the ebook arc. It was a cute charming little romcom, great for a cozy weekend read.

I really enjoyed the main plot of this book, but I found myself wanting more. I thought some of the interactions were odd and not written from the viewpoint of a woman. The characters didn't seem fully developed and the relationship between Bella and Joe felt rushed. Having said that, I finished it because I wanted to know how it would end. I've read great reviews about this author, so I would give another book a try. Thank you to Victory Editing for the ARC...opinions are my own.

This was an entertaining read, and it was fun. It is a dual POV about Bella, an overworked ad agency and Joe a chef of Joe’s Eatery (a pizza place hence the name of the book).

Overall, the writing could use a little work as the POV bounces around a lot and some chapters are just a page or two long. Which could have been edited a little better or condense into other POVs.

Thank you to Netgalley for the arc!

This is a very cozy and cute rom com with a whole cast of delightful characters! Joe and Bella had great chemistry and I adored Bella's character growth

This book is a little bit like a pizza with the works, there is a lot going on.

Dual POV
FMC - Bella, under appreciated, over worked agency worker, virgin
MMC - Joe, new owner, chef, and delivery man of Joe's Eatery, secret billionaire

The writing style wasn't bad and the characters were interesting enough for me to keep reading. However, lots of the situations and the accompanied dialogue was unbelievable and non-realistic and there are a lot of tropes shoved into the story.

I was shocked to see that there are 43 chapters in this 226 page book. Some of the chapters are only a few pages and probably could have been edited together or taken out entirely. The FMC and the MMC don't actually know that they have spoken to each other until Chapter 8, which made their relationship feel a bit secondary to all the crazy work drama both were experiencing.

Once they did meet, the dual POVs could get confusing, especially when Bella and Joe were in the same scene. The timeline would reverse to gain the other person's perspective, which leads to redundant scenes that had already been solved.

1-1.5 🌶️ spice level, the several open door romance scenes were interesting but I wasn't a fan of how Bella handled her virginity and the subsequent timeline.

Possible trigger warnings - Caregiver to ailing parents, sudden death of parent, mention of past parental death and parental abandonment

At the end, they bother live happily ever after and stick it to Bella's previous company by her starting her own agency and being instantly successful. Joe continues his eatery (hopefully with more help) where he is happy and not as a billionaire CEO (but he is still a billionaire).

The cover is cute but adding an open pizza box with pepperoni's in a heart shape or something would have been cuter.

2.5 stars

Thank you NetGalley for the ARC!

It was a quick and sweet read! What sold me is that the MMC owns a pizza place. I loooove men who knows to cook 😋

I wasn’t very fond of the writing though. It skipped some action and sometimes it got me confused on some scenes. It was especially felt during smut scenes.

I also wasn’t liking the chemistry between main characters. It felt rushed and nonexistent. I feel it’s hard to write a proper one (chemistry) if one of the tropes is insta love which I’m also not a fan of.

Thank you Netgalley for this ARC.
The Pizza Man by Eddy Twice is a quirky and charming story that combines humor and heart. The book follows the life of a pizza delivery man whose encounters with various customers lead to unexpected moments of connection and self-discovery. Twice’s writing is lighthearted and filled with wit, creating a fun and easy read. The characters are relatable, and the storyline offers a mix of comedy and emotional depth. Overall, it’s a delightful, feel-good book that’s perfect for anyone looking for a light yet meaningful read.