I read this book in advance of receiving the Stardust Child ARC. I am very glad I chose these books. They are fantastic. This is definitely one of my new favorites. I love the world building and character development. The relationship between Remin and Ophele is built on mistrust from the beginning, but grows and changes. The relationships Ophele makes amongst Remin's men is heartwarming. The monsters are only introduced vaguely toward the end of the book, but draw you into the story and leaves you with questions. Absolutely recommending this to friends and strangers. Fantastic read ....

It was a nice enemies to lovers romance with some political intrigue and worldbuilding although not what I was expecting. Like some other reviewers, I was expecting deep plot twists, testing loyalties, confrontation with the king and some action, which I didn’t get from this one. There was a big focus on city planning which is fine, just not totally my jam. I felt like the characters were a bit impersonal as well, maybe this is because it was done in third person?

I do think this is a good fantasy start, and I will be reading book 2! Thank you NetGalley for the ARC in exchange for an honest review.

A will they won’t they swords and sorcery romance. A warrior completes his quest and wins the hand in marriage of the emperor’s daughter. Only it’s not the daughter he expects and not with the behaviour he thought he would see…

This has a premise with a lot of potential—an uneasy arranged marriage between two people so drastically different and the promise of political intrigue. It introduces strong foundations for character-driven conflict and emotional depth. And while there were elements I found compelling, especially in the initial setup, I ultimately struggled to connect with the story the way I’d hoped.

I appreciated how distinct both Remin and Ophele were. Their differences made me curious about how they’d bridge the gap between them. Ophele had so much narrative potential—an exiled princess raised in secrecy in an abusive household—but she remained incredibly passive throughout. While her background lends itself to quiet resilience, I often wished for more agency and strength from her. She’s treated with a kind of delicate reverence that, while perhaps intentional, felt a too infantilizing for my taste.

I found the romantic relationship difficult to root for, largely due to the imbalance of power and how certain moments—particularly the consummation of their marriage—were handled. The lack of enthusiastic consent made me deeply uncomfortable, and I found it hard to move past that dynamic. It feels like it has those medieval history vibes, but that is not something I wanted in a romance. Remin is very emotionally distant and, at times, incredibly harsh in ways that made it difficult for me to feel invested in the romance. Honestly, I spent the whole book wishing that Miche would just be the romantic lead.

On the fantasy side, I’d describe this as very low fantasy. There are hints of magic and otherworldly threats, but those elements aren’t explored in depth. Similarly, the political tensions linger in the background without ever really taking center stage. That’s not necessarily a flaw—slice-of-life fantasy has its audience—but I personally prefer when the world-building and external stakes are more tightly woven into the narrative.

All that said, I did enjoy the writing style. Melissa J. Cave’s prose is elegant and inviting, and despite my issues with the romance and characters, the storytelling held my attention.

In the end, Traitor Son may resonate more with readers who enjoy slower-paced, historically inspired fantasy romances with an emphasis on atmosphere. For me, it didn’t quite deliver the emotional depth or character development I was looking for, but I can absolutely see its appeal to others. It’s a thoughtful debut with a strong sense of tone, even if it left me personally wishing for more.

Thanks so much to the author, netgalley, and publisher for the complimentary copy. This review is voluntary and all opinions are my own.

This book had me sucked in from the start. It was beautifully torturous, a lovers to enemies to lovers story.

I felt like I was seeing the very beginning of a great dynasty unfold where in other books you're several centuries in the future. It was seeing behind the curtains of time, where it all began, the hard work, trials and tribulations before their children's children's children's drama in the future.

The characters were well rounded. The dynamic between the main characters and side characters also.

There were a lot of names of people and places to take in but I very much felt like the author managed to bring up the ones that needed remembering and anything about them often and casually enough that they stuck and I didn't feel like I had no idea what was going on.

I'm very much looking forward to reading the next installment.

Thank you to NetGalley and the publisher for this ARC in exchange for my honest review. (I know this came out months ago and was re-released as an ARC so more people would read the ARC of the sequel soon to come out.)

Plain and simple: I adored this book!!! I was instantly smitten by the idea of this series from 2 lines of the GR summary: "She could be his love and his wife, the mother of his children, the foundation of a dynasty that will last forever. Or she could be the Emperor’s weapon, placed at his side to destroy everything he has left." And the book did not disappoint!!!

I am actually mad *only* 170 other people have rated and only 90 other people have reviewed this book. I want to bang my pots and pans and advertise this series to others so much now!!


First of all, if you've read Throne of Glass, the romance is VERY reminiscent of Elide/Lorcan--if Lorcan were clueless about women and Elide were much shyer. But the relationship is Definitely gruff big solemn guy with a heart of gold + deceptively weak woman who has survived much and has much inner strength...who initially hardly know each other, and who grow to care very deeply about each other.

Second of all, the book is told in his/her POVs--but with 3rd person POV (that sometimes switches mid chapter or mid scene!), so it's very easy for the reader to figure out what's going on with the other character, even if the leads can't. The narration is also done in a very witty way that is fun and delightful to read. (Might just be the author is very good at getting the characters' personalities across and I love the characters!)

Third of all, Melissa J. Cave made me *care* about the creation/building of a town/city/empire, which I didn't think I ever would in (medieval-ish) fantasy books!

Fourth of all, the romance is TRULY slow burn and develops in a realistic way--to the point that I died over every UST moment, every romantic thought the mains had (but didn't share) about each other. And the resolution/coming together of the relationship feels natural and beautiful (I *loved* the ending)

Fifth of all, even though this book is clearly setting things up for the books to come, there is not a cliffhanger ending, which was a relief.

Sixth of all, this author is clearly up for a fresh challenge in a sea of very similar romantasy books:
- lots of morally grey sassy MMCs with tons of experience with women and who are very old? Let's write a very principled young MMC who is clueless with woman but has the best intentions.
- lots of MMCs who keep secrets intentionally from the FMC and aren't very good about being honest? Let's write a MMC who is very honest + eager to try to communicate and fix problems in his relationship.
- lots of boring knight in shining armor characters? Let's write a MMC who truly *is* a knight in shining armor, but who is interesting to read and who is disgraced and having to claw back his reputation.
- lots of "Strong, Not Like The Other Girls, Cold and Closed Off" FMCs? Let's write a Fanny Price (ala "Mansfield Park") FMC who is quiet, who has inner strength despite being beaten down/broken by life, a quiet character who needs to *learn* how to be courageous. A FMC who *cares deeply* and isn't afraid to show it. A FMC who is clueless with men but honest about what she wants.
- lots of female bffs for the FMC (or no bffs)? Let's write a male bff for the FMC. (Miche, I love you!!)

Overall, a 5 star read. Another one for the faves shelf, lads. Can't wait to start my ARC of book 2 asap!!! (And hopefully buy myself a hard copy of this delight :))

Hope more people read this asap, bc I need to yell about it!! And it deserves it.

to be honest, as i was reading this book i had no idea if i liked it or not.
but i couldn’t put it down. it was so well written and interesting. it’s not an exciting book by any means but it’s so good.

for about 75% of the book i wanted to attempt to assassinate remin grimjaw myself. his cruelty to his wife throughout the book was frustrating as hell. he did redeem himself but he still has a lot to make up for.
ophele, on the other hand, is a precious angel who has done no wrong in her entire life and never will.
it was refreshing to read a book where the fmc was not a warrior princess, to be honest. it feels like in every single romantasy book, the fmc is a fierce fighter so it’s a nice change.
ophele is strong in her own way, however, and her character development is what i’m looking forward to the most in the next books!
i feel like she and remin have so much potential, together and as a couple.

I didn't know what to expect here, but I was surprised how much I got invested in this slow burn fantasy romance. An enjoyable read.

Thoroughly Surprised and Impressed!

From the opening, Melissa J. Cave has a clear voice within her world building and characters. Setting the stage of a less magic dominated form of fantasy and more medieval meets unknown and known forces of evil type of fantasy, it is easy to immediately fall in love with Ophele, Remin, Miche, Wen, Eugene and the other present and unique cast of characters.

Ophele is pure and naive but brilliant and clever; an isolated but curious and self taught woman of noble birth but a lifetime of poor treatment yields a sophisticated blend of characters from across the fantasy genre. Her subtle but unwavering brilliance and wit along with physical limitations in way of strength/health reminds me so much of Violet from Fourth Wing while also her sheltered upbringing, lack of experience and limited understanding of the world including politics and the like reminds me of Poppy from From Blood and Ash; two characters I will always respect and love. But Ophele also has something unique all her own, a determination to make the lives of those who have been hurt better with such little concerns or conscious awareness of the cost to herself. Ophele's compassion and empathy in spite of her past of trauma and fear, sets her apart from other characters within this genre. I felt her fear, anxiety, shame and desire to be better deep in my soul. Yes there are moments when your heart can't take anymore how scared, meek, anxious and traumatized she is but at the same time those moments are followed by humor, cleverness, but also a strong unwavering courage when it comes to showing compassion, kindness and empathy.

Remin is the perfect blend of passion, realist obsessive fixations, emotion and mental walls, a dark and traumatizing past, a committed need for vengeance, his protective streak, and the level of "girl dumb", in that he knows not how to speak, act or treat a woman (very Adam from Seven Brides from Seven brothers telling Millie to toughen up or Dwight awkwardly patting Pam's shoulder as she cries because no man can know how to treat a woman when she cries) let alone care for one who has never walked more than a mile from her home, is endearing and adorable. The conflict and emotional torture he inflicts to on himself in regards to distrust, the struggle to weigh the price of vengeance and what is proving to be forceful a good, pure heart makes him a new favorite book boyfriend for me! Good god his BIG romantic gesture had me tearing up just because of how much Melissa J. Cave allows us to truly get to know him and how in that moment I felt him lay it all on the line and truly mean every word.

Although not a traditional dual POV, Traitor Son, gives thorough and detailed accounts from both main characters. Never boring or too descriptive or whiny, both characters are open with themselves about their flaws, shame, and guilt but struggle to be completely honest with themselves in which they actually acknowledge and accept they are not the cause, culprit, criminal or reason for the bad things that have happened to them or because of them. Ophele's guilt and shame at being related by blood to the people responsible for Remin's pain and suffering, never feels forced or fake but is rather an understandable motivator due to all the loss and political warmongering she's been exposed to from a young age. Ophele wants to believe it is her duty to attone for sins of others; to make amends and right past wrongs. In reality, she knows and remains conflicted between shame/guilt on behalf of the abusers and rage/vengeance towards those same abusers for hurting anyone. Remin similarly occulates between affirmation that his actions and behavior toward Ophele is the only logical, smart, safe way to behave but also feel imense confusion and fear that he has wrongfully held her accountable for things that could never be her fault. His behavior and actions speaks to anyone who has had their trust violated on so many levels, if actually can destroy a part of a person. But as most would know from therapy, to heal the broken or missing pieces you must speak up, be honest, ask for help and love which is exactly how the book leaves us: a "on a path to healing" Ophele and Remin; although no one would be foolish enough to believe it will be smooth sailing here on out. The slow burn is perfect with just enough "will they won't they" and light sprinkle of spice to keep me rooting for these two!!!

Melissa J. Cave is a clever author in a mature and professional way. Her use of dialogue, detailed description, indepth characters thoughts/reflections, succinct use of language and prose all wrapped around carefully, lightly laid out clues that our lovebirds aren't quite to paradise yet; many challenges await our heroes on the horizon that I'm certain will rest them individually and as a couple. I swear to God, if anything happens to Miche or Eugene or Wen...I'll....I'll...I'll be devastated and never ever the same.

Do yourself a favor and dive into this unique and thrilling journey! If you do so soon you'll be just in time for the sequel Stardust Child which I'm so excited to read!

Traitor Son is a Medieval inspired slow burn romance. You have an arranged marriage of those born to be enemies, some kind of magic system that isn't delved into very much, and the construction of a new city. I tore through the first 40% or so of this book, but I found the endless chapters on building the new city and treating your spouse horribly very tedious and I mostly lost my initial enthusiasm for the book and just felt like trudging on.
This book has the classic elements we romantasy readers are always looking for, but it needs to be cleaned up quite a bit in the middle to really reach the level of the best of the genre. Overall three stars, but a bit doubtful I will pick up the sequels.

This book was amazing! The world was wonderful and it was so well written. This book has so many of my favorite tropes and I would highly recommend this book!

First of all, I DEVOURED this book. Wow. What a gem. This is not the story of a long, brutal, grueling war, but everything that comes after. Rebuilding, starting anew, and creating a vision of the future. Though the war has been won, there is still so much to do and still-looming threats to contend with.

Remin Grimjaw is feared and revered across the empire. Known as a hero, a knight-general, and Duke of Andelin, he has waged and won a war spanning the last seven years where he has never lost a battle and is now ready to collect what he is owed by the Divine Emperor, including a marriage to his daughter. Ophele has been exiled as punishment for her mother’s betrayal to the empire and has never stepped foot out of her abusive guardian’s property. Suddenly, she is stolen away from everything she has ever known to start a new life miles and miles away in the valley of Andelin, where Remin plans to create the new jewel of the empire. He is gruff, war-hardened, and knows absolutely nothing about women, and Ophele just wants to survive and make up for the wrongs her father has done.

I wasn’t sure what to expect when starting this book but was so delighted and surprised at how quickly I was sucked into this story and the depth and emotions explored. It is so refreshing to have characters with real flaws and motivations that make sense and stay true to character. Remin is expecting a spoiled noble lady but Ophele is not the typical strong-willed, sassy, outspoken heroine. She is naive, alone, scared, and all of the other things that you would expect from a young girl who had to bear the consequences of other’s actions her whole life, but she is strong and brave in her own way. And for Remin, underneath that hardened war general exterior, he is paranoid and extremely cautious after people attempting to kill him since he was nine years old and losing his entire family. He just wants to rebuild the home that was taken from him and dreams of creating a new legacy that will stand generations. And it is so heartwarming seeing how they slowly learn how to fit together and help each other. They are both so endearing, but especially Remin who has lived lifetimes through battle but is an awkward mess when it comes to having a wife. I think my favorite thing about this book was watching their tumultuous relationship grow into something genuine and beautiful.

Melissa J Cave does an incredible job at building a world that feels so immersive and real and making characters come alive off the pages. Her writing has made me emotionally invested in infrastructural development, which is something I never thought I would say, as well as a certain donkey, a ferocious cook, and the rest of the Brede Knights. I felt dread when things got dicey. I gasped, and laughed, and cried and was on the edge of my seat almost the whole time. I really loved it and felt like this was such a unique story and I can’t wait to see where it goes. And the foundations were set beautifully for the rest of the series. I daresay this has become my favorite read of the year and I cannot wait to dive into the sequel and find out what happens next!

I recommend this to lovers of medieval fantasy, unique characters, vast (and literal) worldbuilding, hard-earned romance, fighting demons and monsters, learning to overcome emotional trauma, and found family.

This forced proximity through an arranged marriage had me drawn in and wanting more! I loved the chivalry of knights as they travel the land and build up their new homeland, and the comraderie of their found family cast of characters make you eager for more of their adventures as much as their banter. I can't wait to read more of Remin & Ophele's story in the sequel!

A poetic and evocative epic fantasy romance with an emphasis on medieval elements and political intrigue, Traitor Son is a stunning debut novel which leaves the reader eager for more.

Following Remlin and his new wife Ophele, daughter of the Emperor and the Exile Princess, Traitor Son tells a story of loss, redemption and the grit of human nature. The world-building and character establishment in this novel are outstanding, with the lasting impacts of war and trauma on our main characters portrayed with a certain rawness that is inherently compelling. The pacing of the story was steady and focused more on scene-setting rather than high tempo action, which allowed for deeper exploration of some of the more emotional struggles between our main characters. Some of the more fantastical elements were subtle in this first book, but with heavy foreshadowing that the magical aspects will play a starring role going forward. For fans of enemies-to-lovers and slow burn romance, this is for you! The chemistry between our main characters is electric and fiery while emphasising the deep emotional connection between the two.

Traitor Son is an utterly gorgeous introduction to what will inevitably be a masterpiece of a series.

Many thanks to the publisher for a copy of this book.

Traitor Son is a beautifully written piece of art that reminds you of the harsh reality of what it’s like to be in a constant state of war, conditioned to kill, and the heart ache of wanting a significant other that won’t kill you in return for your affections.

The perfect medieval high fantasy novel with the right amount of romance. This book is not the type that I normally read but I enjoyed it very much. The characters, the world building, and the plot were perfectly written and made me so excited to read the next book in the series. As soon as I finished, I jumped right into book 2

“They breathed together. They fell together. They drowned together”
“But he could learn this. He could learn to endure happiness”
“In time, it would be a beauty and wonder”

Great world building and a storyline that keeps you hooked and engaged with every page. Due to his our insecurities he was slow to loving her, which was extremely frustrating at times, but once he did he was “as sure as he knew his own name.”

The scene where he tell her to kill him cause he don’t think he could take the heartbreak if it happened later or if he accidentally hurt her almost broke my heart. So emotional and just written beautifully.

I’m excited to see where this story could go, there’s so much potential and I will be seated for each release!

This book was so mysterious! This is the first one in the series, which came out in November but will most likely read the rest of the series!! Such a good writing style and definately a good descriptive book!

Traitor Son ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

*Traitor Son* immerses readers in the captivating world of Andelin Valley, expertly blending epic fantasy with deep human emotions.

The story follows Remin of Andelin, a fierce warrior burdened by a complicated past as he strives to build a safe haven for his people. His journey becomes even more complex with the introduction of Princess Ophele Agnephus, the emperor's secret daughter, who has the potential to change everything.

The dynamic between Remin and Ophele is electric, evolving from an uneasy political marriage into a profound exploration of trust and love amidst war and intrigue. Their growth from suspicion to affection is beautifully portrayed, keeping me invested in their relationship.

The world-building is exceptional, with a rich setting reminiscent of *Game of Thrones* and emotional depth akin to *Outlander*. The pacing allows for character development, making their moments of intimacy feel genuine and reflective.

*Traitor Son* is a heartfelt tale of resilience, redemption, and the healing power of love. It’s a must-read for fans of epic fantasy and romance, leaving readers eager for the next installment in the Empire of the Stars series. Bravo to the author for crafting such a compelling story!

He’s destined to marry the daughter of his enemy in order to keep his standing. He’s a knight in a shining armor that has no idea what to do with this princess that showed up in his life. He’s messing things up for half of the book (I just wanted to hit some sense into him, such a brute) and then grovels for her during the other half (love that for her). This was such a big growth of character and trust, especially since this is arranged marriage. I loved this book and the world building is so immersive it’s crazy.

“Where was the silent, solemn little owl he knew? She was smiling. Her eyes were so bright, so quick to see everything. Even veiled, hatted, and covered in white dust, he couldn't help thinking her beautiful. She looked like nothing so much as the clearest and bluest of skies.”

“He loved her? He was afraid to love her. Ophele, the daughter of the Emperor. How could he ever believe she was not her father's tool, placed at his side and waiting only a single moment of weakness?”