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Review: Wow, this was totally pervy what with William "The Creepshow" Hope as head pervinator. 13 yo and mind grinding on his twin sisters naked butt and tatas. As an adult his twin sister Katie starts wondering why she looks like none of her relatives. Oh I see, how convenient that your sister might happen to be adopted. Who comes up with this shjt?

Anyhoo, the passages are long-winded as fuk with the common and high english verbosity coupled with the piratical deluge of yars and other conjoined phrases that make no sense. The characterization is quite good even with William whacking his paddle over his twinsie.

The overall adventure is really good and deserves consideration. The sequel should be a good follow up so I will stick it out.

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