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I’m sorry! I really wasn’t a fan of this book at all. I found it incredibly difficult not to DNF, but nevertheless, I persisted.

My main issues with the book was the writing style and length of the book. It seems to be an interesting premise, but the writing was not clear most of the time. It felt as though the book had originally come in at just under 100 pages, and the publishers forced it to be fleshed out. There were multiple scenes that felt like they added nothing. The narrative was clunky and hard to follow. I would not recommend this book.

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This is OK. It doesn't have the polish of a more experience author. It's a bit episodic and moves along a pretty good pace. There are a couple of scenes that didn't seem to add to the story, and it's a bit uneven at times. I hope the author continues to write.

Thanks very much for the review copy!!

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This book was pretty entertaining but a little bit all over the place. There were a few main characters, but side characters kept popping up all over the place. It definitely kept moving and was a quick read. There were two relatively graphic (compared to the rest of the book) sex scenes that were about 2/3 of the way in that came out of nowhere. This book was almost like a tv series in that it was a collection of many scenes in different locales with different characters, the trouble was tying it all together.

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